Comments on: Weekly Poetry Assignment 1: Compilations and Love Poems

By: romantic poem

romantic poem — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 15:16:25 +0000

your poems are awesome here some of my peoems please free to express your views romantic poems last blog post..The Mysterious Thing Called LOVE...

By: chidi nwosu

chidi nwosu — Wed, 03 Dec 2008 14:47:17 +0000

I saw you in the mirror of my mind
Today,I will proclaim my love to you
With roses and diamonds

By: Tim Gleason

Tim Gleason — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 16:26:02 +0000

Forever yours, I’ll always be
Right there by your side ;
Sharing my thoughts and dreams with you
I take the utmost pride.

Forever yours, as free as the wind
Or the eagle – as it soars ;
My love for you shall NEVER end
I’ll be….forever yours !

By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade

Rosemary Nissen-Wade — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 14:56:50 +0000

Bravo, Rianon!

By: Leah

Leah — Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:53:59 +0000

Wow, everyone’s is so good…! I’m always late lol, but here’s my post. I’m trying to get better at this.

Love is precious when it works but
Too often it’s unrequited

The pain’s unrelenting
When you see them staring
At another
And your heart stops

By: Rianon Rose

Rianon Rose — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 12:35:23 +0000

I love it John!!!!!

By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade

Rosemary Nissen-Wade — Fri, 19 Oct 2007 09:51:03 +0000

Nice, John!

By: John Hewitt

John Hewitt — Thu, 18 Oct 2007 21:43:03 +0000

Thursdays

I relax on the deep sofa
While you lift your feet over the
Matching thick-cushioned love
Seat that meets me behind
The over piled
Coffee table

Occasionally we reach out
Touch fingers as we watch TV
Get each other sodas
Make snacks for one or both
To eat as we
Drift through the night

By: Rianon Burnet

Rianon Burnet — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 15:14:55 +0000

James,
your an amazing poet, even with the best poet it takes time to perfect your words. But even then nothing is perfect only outstanding. (if that makes any sense to you)

Connie,
I would love to learn Spanish as well, I do agree that spanish is taking more of the population. Your a wonderful person Connie, in some ways I think and have the same humor as you do. Not many people can handle it but you do it in such a whispful way that really makes you shine.

By: James Garner

James Garner — Tue, 16 Oct 2007 15:13:00 +0000

The Holy Writ (bible) is written in the familiar…
-the familiar tu often communcates more a closeness of feeling than an actual closeness. In a love poem, tu is almost required. In this case, the tu would communicate a desire of communion.

As far as learning spanish: I would recommend a basic course only, to get the rules of congegation and a smattering of vocabulary, sufficient to talk with the neighbors. Then talk with them as much as possible in their tongue. Listen to how they put the words together. (try to find a few literate spanish speakers, if possible as they will teach you to speak better.) Then emulate them.

Good Luck.