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	<title>Comments on: Short Story Writing Project: The first draft</title>
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		<title>By: Brooklyn A.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brooklyn A.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Feb 2009 15:33:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My Problem is I don&#039;t know what to write!!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My Problem is I don&#8217;t know what to write!!!!!</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Dec 2008 15:55:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Try starting in directly with an event, don&#039;t start with an explanation of the situation, start with something interesting happening.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Try starting in directly with an event, don&#8217;t start with an explanation of the situation, start with something interesting happening.</p>
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		<title>By: Amanda Burns</title>
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		<dc:creator>Amanda Burns</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Dec 2008 21:11:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My problem is I don&#039;t know how to start. In career studies I have to write something positive short story about something I did in my life that made me proud and I want to write about when my sister and me first babysat for community hours, but I have a problem. I don&#039;t know how to start this short story without making it seem like a report on my experience. If you can give me some idea&#039;s that would be awesome.

Thanks :)
Amanda Burns</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My problem is I don&#8217;t know how to start. In career studies I have to write something positive short story about something I did in my life that made me proud and I want to write about when my sister and me first babysat for community hours, but I have a problem. I don&#8217;t know how to start this short story without making it seem like a report on my experience. If you can give me some idea&#8217;s that would be awesome.</p>
<p>Thanks <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
Amanda Burns</p>
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		<title>By: Peter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Apr 2008 14:55:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I cant clean up my stories. I just end up making them worse.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I cant clean up my stories. I just end up making them worse.</p>
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		<title>By: Terry Finley</title>
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		<dc:creator>Terry Finley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 02 Mar 2008 20:22:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>No short story I&#039;ve ever written
ended the way I intended it.
Every story wrote itself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No short story I&#8217;ve ever written<br />
ended the way I intended it.<br />
Every story wrote itself.</p>
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