Short Story Writing Project: The first draft

by John Hewitt on 3/1/2008

Writing the first draft of a short story is distinctly different from writing the first draft of a novel. Novels ten to require a great deal of forethought and planning. Additionally, each progressive chapter locks you further into the plot, limiting your options as you get closer to the end. With a short story, you don’t have those worries. Lengthwise, a short story is similar to the first chapter of a novel. If you don’t like how it is going, you can scrap the draft and move on, without worrying about complying with a series of expectations or requirements.

Writing the first draft of a short story is about exploration. You start with a plot or character or conflict in mind, and you explore it for as long as it seems interesting or relevant. Once you reach a sufficient conclusion, you stop. This may take you ten pages or thirty pages or more, but it doesn’t stretch out in the way that a novel does. Some people can write the first draft of a short story in a single sitting. That may not be your process, but with a short story it is certainly possible.

The overriding advice that I can give for a first draft of a short story is to relax and let the writing take whatever course it will take. Cleaning up and revising a short story isn’t nearly as complicated as doing the same for a novel. A short story is short enough that you can even throw the whole thing out and start from scratch if you don’t like your initial results. That’s the sort of freedom a short story gives you. Take advantage of it.

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{ 5 comments }

Terry Finley March 2, 2008 at 1:22 pm

No short story I’ve ever written
ended the way I intended it.
Every story wrote itself.

Peter April 5, 2008 at 7:55 am

I cant clean up my stories. I just end up making them worse.

Amanda Burns December 8, 2008 at 3:11 pm

My problem is I don’t know how to start. In career studies I have to write something positive short story about something I did in my life that made me proud and I want to write about when my sister and me first babysat for community hours, but I have a problem. I don’t know how to start this short story without making it seem like a report on my experience. If you can give me some idea’s that would be awesome.

Thanks :)
Amanda Burns

John Hewitt December 9, 2008 at 9:55 am

Try starting in directly with an event, don’t start with an explanation of the situation, start with something interesting happening.

Brooklyn A. February 25, 2009 at 9:33 am

My Problem is I don’t know what to write!!!!!

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