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		<title>By: maria</title>
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		<dc:creator>maria</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Mar 2010 11:27:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>thanx guys you really encouraged me.. i guess i should start practising my poems</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>thanx guys you really encouraged me.. i guess i should start practising my poems</p>
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		<title>By: kajia abeid</title>
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		<dc:creator>kajia abeid</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Mar 2010 09:04:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Watching Pot


Just once Princess Sada
Will never happen again
Inside is just pain
I was willing to bear the burden
I did spoke in campaign
Special was a hot chain
Around our neck but we are the twain
Every cloud with a silver lining
From sadness to my happiness
Out of your happiness to my sad
See we did not realize
To look before we leap
I believe in the word crop
My water still runs deep
I tried but I can’t stop
Will be like stopping heat beat
Necessity the mother of invention
Did u believe in my faith and patient
Did I leaky my trust and secret
Go down I will lift you up
Came with sad leave happy
Still u will throw them harsh words
May be I didn’t understand
To me special was everything
Education, life and love
 Passing obstacle, tracing heaters
Am I the tiger your afraid of
If I was baldhead switch off 
I can’t hold on avoiding me
Don look just shoot me
Pull the trigger erase me
Close that chapter concerning me
But first Princess Sada
Help me understand these words
Two heads are better than one
One good term deserve another
Nothing ventured nothing gained
I gave up to watch the pot
That never boils
The worm has turned
Living dog is better than dead lion



									kajiÄbeid©</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Watching Pot</p>
<p>Just once Princess Sada<br />
Will never happen again<br />
Inside is just pain<br />
I was willing to bear the burden<br />
I did spoke in campaign<br />
Special was a hot chain<br />
Around our neck but we are the twain<br />
Every cloud with a silver lining<br />
From sadness to my happiness<br />
Out of your happiness to my sad<br />
See we did not realize<br />
To look before we leap<br />
I believe in the word crop<br />
My water still runs deep<br />
I tried but I can’t stop<br />
Will be like stopping heat beat<br />
Necessity the mother of invention<br />
Did u believe in my faith and patient<br />
Did I leaky my trust and secret<br />
Go down I will lift you up<br />
Came with sad leave happy<br />
Still u will throw them harsh words<br />
May be I didn’t understand<br />
To me special was everything<br />
Education, life and love<br />
 Passing obstacle, tracing heaters<br />
Am I the tiger your afraid of<br />
If I was baldhead switch off<br />
I can’t hold on avoiding me<br />
Don look just shoot me<br />
Pull the trigger erase me<br />
Close that chapter concerning me<br />
But first Princess Sada<br />
Help me understand these words<br />
Two heads are better than one<br />
One good term deserve another<br />
Nothing ventured nothing gained<br />
I gave up to watch the pot<br />
That never boils<br />
The worm has turned<br />
Living dog is better than dead lion</p>
<p>									kajiÄbeid©</p>
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		<title>By: kajia abeid</title>
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		<dc:creator>kajia abeid</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Mar 2010 08:32:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>guys,am waitin for your criticsm

NOT FAIR

I say to you
Truth is an offence
But not a sin
He who laugh last
He is a foolish dog
Bark at flaying birds
True colors comes from rainbow
But this truth comes from my heart
Is it true that we are the twain?
That shall never meet again
This idiom it makes no odds
Think is an idiom of olds
And no fool likes an old fool
Trying fire out of frying pan
Yeah, you can’t turn a worm
A leopard that can’t change
The apple didn’t fall far from the tree
What planet is for this sub human?
Who will fail to figurate this?
Con girl I did play on her hands 
And it was not fair   				

                     						                 kajiÄbeid©


I stand up
I did tell what I felt
Yes, you’re the offensive
Trying to quench your thirsty
Stop digging the tar mark
Crying, giggles just shut up
Listen and read from you
Was bad enough than suicide
Try up some other day
crucifying, justifying
Take a look before you leap
Not all chances are golden
Don’t dance without a sound
Don’t laugh without a joke
Just walk with a walker
Smoke with a smoker
But the truth will remain untruth
It was not fair







									        kajiÄbeid©
Alright, yes, I gat you
Ok, why that for you
Stand all the time front of you
Telling you that I missed you
Then please forgiving me for hurting you
I was free before now depending on you
I did decent to see smile on you
I must touch the Rosette Stone for you
To untie my self from you
I saw a phosgene behind you
The POW must escape you</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>guys,am waitin for your criticsm</p>
<p>NOT FAIR</p>
<p>I say to you<br />
Truth is an offence<br />
But not a sin<br />
He who laugh last<br />
He is a foolish dog<br />
Bark at flaying birds<br />
True colors comes from rainbow<br />
But this truth comes from my heart<br />
Is it true that we are the twain?<br />
That shall never meet again<br />
This idiom it makes no odds<br />
Think is an idiom of olds<br />
And no fool likes an old fool<br />
Trying fire out of frying pan<br />
Yeah, you can’t turn a worm<br />
A leopard that can’t change<br />
The apple didn’t fall far from the tree<br />
What planet is for this sub human?<br />
Who will fail to figurate this?<br />
Con girl I did play on her hands<br />
And it was not fair   				</p>
<p>                     						                 kajiÄbeid©</p>
<p>I stand up<br />
I did tell what I felt<br />
Yes, you’re the offensive<br />
Trying to quench your thirsty<br />
Stop digging the tar mark<br />
Crying, giggles just shut up<br />
Listen and read from you<br />
Was bad enough than suicide<br />
Try up some other day<br />
crucifying, justifying<br />
Take a look before you leap<br />
Not all chances are golden<br />
Don’t dance without a sound<br />
Don’t laugh without a joke<br />
Just walk with a walker<br />
Smoke with a smoker<br />
But the truth will remain untruth<br />
It was not fair</p>
<p>									        kajiÄbeid©<br />
Alright, yes, I gat you<br />
Ok, why that for you<br />
Stand all the time front of you<br />
Telling you that I missed you<br />
Then please forgiving me for hurting you<br />
I was free before now depending on you<br />
I did decent to see smile on you<br />
I must touch the Rosette Stone for you<br />
To untie my self from you<br />
I saw a phosgene behind you<br />
The POW must escape you</p>
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		<title>By: kajia abeid</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225524</link>
		<dc:creator>kajia abeid</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Mar 2010 08:28:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>THE SUN &amp; THE MOON
Out the steam, outer the system
Got the clue, outer the glue
Just be sure you won’t get sued
Inside not a heat beat
They are fond to each other
No tuning back brother
Am out take my light
Shine in the dark, make it bright
My dawning is here just ride
Morning, noon, evening makes a tide
Till am out just come on any side
Your time to shine let me hide
Tell me when am wrong
Lead me on the right side
Give me when am lack
Lean on me, I hold your back
I was born without a silver spoon
 And I must make a lagoon
Every bye I wish to see you soon
In this world of boom, boom, boom
Notice the speck of sawdust in your eye
And not the plank in my eye
How can you forget all bout eve?
Seduced by serpent to touch the apple
Brother takes me on your right hand
Make my weaknesses as my strength
Don speaks behind or reveals our crypto
I didn’t experience any foe, so don’t be 
My heart is full of love &amp; bless on you
Like brother sun and brother moon                                                kajiÄbeid©</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>THE SUN &amp; THE MOON<br />
Out the steam, outer the system<br />
Got the clue, outer the glue<br />
Just be sure you won’t get sued<br />
Inside not a heat beat<br />
They are fond to each other<br />
No tuning back brother<br />
Am out take my light<br />
Shine in the dark, make it bright<br />
My dawning is here just ride<br />
Morning, noon, evening makes a tide<br />
Till am out just come on any side<br />
Your time to shine let me hide<br />
Tell me when am wrong<br />
Lead me on the right side<br />
Give me when am lack<br />
Lean on me, I hold your back<br />
I was born without a silver spoon<br />
 And I must make a lagoon<br />
Every bye I wish to see you soon<br />
In this world of boom, boom, boom<br />
Notice the speck of sawdust in your eye<br />
And not the plank in my eye<br />
How can you forget all bout eve?<br />
Seduced by serpent to touch the apple<br />
Brother takes me on your right hand<br />
Make my weaknesses as my strength<br />
Don speaks behind or reveals our crypto<br />
I didn’t experience any foe, so don’t be<br />
My heart is full of love &amp; bless on you<br />
Like brother sun and brother moon                                                kajiÄbeid©</p>
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		<title>By: Nidhi</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nidhi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Jan 2010 08:09:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I really love to write poems and short stories! I am 13 years old and I wish I progress in writing with the help of these tips!

Thanks a lot for such inspiring and motivating guidelines.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really love to write poems and short stories! I am 13 years old and I wish I progress in writing with the help of these tips!</p>
<p>Thanks a lot for such inspiring and motivating guidelines.</p>
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		<title>By: bowser banks</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225314</link>
		<dc:creator>bowser banks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Jan 2010 03:58:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well,are you happy? 
That this all happened to me? 
To have a reality check 
Making my life more complex 
If you only knew 
Where it has landed you 
There has to be an ending 
I&#039;m sick of pretending 
To be someone else 
I need some serious help 
Or,I will drown 
Because of these lies in my mouth 
Now,I&#039;m stuck 
I guess it&#039;s just my luck 
I will never know 
If I&#039;m now on my own 
I can&#039;t help but think 
While I begin to sink 
What I would&#039;ve been 
If I hadn&#039;t of let you in 
You destroyed my life 
The life that was mine 
I will never 
Ever,ever,ever 
Forget what you have done 
And so the war goes on......

i&#039;m a teenage poet who usually downsizes their poetry
the poetry i found on here was great
i guess i just wanted to put one of mine on here as well
so,whoever made this website,thank you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well,are you happy?<br />
That this all happened to me?<br />
To have a reality check<br />
Making my life more complex<br />
If you only knew<br />
Where it has landed you<br />
There has to be an ending<br />
I&#8217;m sick of pretending<br />
To be someone else<br />
I need some serious help<br />
Or,I will drown<br />
Because of these lies in my mouth<br />
Now,I&#8217;m stuck<br />
I guess it&#8217;s just my luck<br />
I will never know<br />
If I&#8217;m now on my own<br />
I can&#8217;t help but think<br />
While I begin to sink<br />
What I would&#8217;ve been<br />
If I hadn&#8217;t of let you in<br />
You destroyed my life<br />
The life that was mine<br />
I will never<br />
Ever,ever,ever<br />
Forget what you have done<br />
And so the war goes on&#8230;&#8230;</p>
<p>i&#8217;m a teenage poet who usually downsizes their poetry<br />
the poetry i found on here was great<br />
i guess i just wanted to put one of mine on here as well<br />
so,whoever made this website,thank you.</p>
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		<title>By: imam</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225303</link>
		<dc:creator>imam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Jan 2010 19:21:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I started writing since from my junior college. I am a poet who is dedicated torwards improving creative writing.I have written 65 poems so far to my present senior college,and i also teach.Stay cool.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I started writing since from my junior college. I am a poet who is dedicated torwards improving creative writing.I have written 65 poems so far to my present senior college,and i also teach.Stay cool.</p>
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		<title>By: Collins onyango</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225291</link>
		<dc:creator>Collins onyango</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 15:11:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I started writing poems wen i was around 17 after my parents separated and up to last year i ve written 69 poems and after listening and reading other poem i decided to look 4 basic tips and the one&#039;s above have really motivated me alot and nw am back. Thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I started writing poems wen i was around 17 after my parents separated and up to last year i ve written 69 poems and after listening and reading other poem i decided to look 4 basic tips and the one&#8217;s above have really motivated me alot and nw am back. Thanks</p>
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		<title>By: billy</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225255</link>
		<dc:creator>billy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 09:21:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nicely written.

I&#039;m just starting a workshop forum for poetry and will place a link on it linking back to this page. Some great advice for aspiring poets.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nicely written.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m just starting a workshop forum for poetry and will place a link on it linking back to this page. Some great advice for aspiring poets.</p>
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		<title>By: hitesh chavda,anand arts college</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-1/#comment-225213</link>
		<dc:creator>hitesh chavda,anand arts college</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 01 Jan 2010 16:04:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome to the….  . 

Hello, very welcome here at the A.A.C.,
The  college of   knowledge and literacy,

ANAND ARTS COLLEGE  is green and clean,
Opposite the grid in the city of milk,

Founded by Vakil Saheb in a year of 1954,
Which still working with some new more,

This was awarded as best college of the state,
Accredited by NACC with 2.81 scale at &quot;b&quot; grade,

This college has fulfilled desires of many,
And also has decided future and destiny,

Students who at here should be very dear,
Always each and every stay without any fear,

Professors are the best with greatest works,
Also have notable service of the clerks,

Here a great thing each must be like,
Yaw, it&#039;s our great and fine library site,

A governing hand of this large ship is,
Dr. Beena madam, hope you keep it .
                                                  - HITESH CHAVDA</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to the….  . </p>
<p>Hello, very welcome here at the A.A.C.,<br />
The  college of   knowledge and literacy,</p>
<p>ANAND ARTS COLLEGE  is green and clean,<br />
Opposite the grid in the city of milk,</p>
<p>Founded by Vakil Saheb in a year of 1954,<br />
Which still working with some new more,</p>
<p>This was awarded as best college of the state,<br />
Accredited by NACC with 2.81 scale at &#8220;b&#8221; grade,</p>
<p>This college has fulfilled desires of many,<br />
And also has decided future and destiny,</p>
<p>Students who at here should be very dear,<br />
Always each and every stay without any fear,</p>
<p>Professors are the best with greatest works,<br />
Also have notable service of the clerks,</p>
<p>Here a great thing each must be like,<br />
Yaw, it&#8217;s our great and fine library site,</p>
<p>A governing hand of this large ship is,<br />
Dr. Beena madam, hope you keep it .<br />
                                                  &#8211; HITESH CHAVDA</p>
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