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		<title>By: Claudia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Claudia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2011 20:35:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, John! This and others are all useful tips. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, John! This and others are all useful tips. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2011 05:20:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Claudia,

Glad you love Emily Dickinson. I think you read a bit much into my statement, which made no actual criticism of Dickinson, but merely points out how unlikely it is to have your work &quot;discovered&quot; if you don&#039;t publish.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Claudia,</p>
<p>Glad you love Emily Dickinson. I think you read a bit much into my statement, which made no actual criticism of Dickinson, but merely points out how unlikely it is to have your work &#8220;discovered&#8221; if you don&#8217;t publish.</p>
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		<title>By: Claudia</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-2/#comment-227801</link>
		<dc:creator>Claudia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2011 00:41:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks so much for these tips! I&#039;ve set a goal for myself to read them all. The only thing that irked me was when you said:

Find a way to publish your poems. Sooner or later you have to send your babies out into the world to find their way. Emily Dickinson was a fluke. Most people who donâ€™t publish while theyâ€™re alive will never be seen or heard of â€” no matter how great their poems.

Yes, Emily Dickinson only gained her fame after her death, but she did try to get her poems published when she sent them to Thomas Wentworth Higginson. Higginson refrained from publishing her poems because he thought they were too shocking and avant garde for the general public.

Maybe I&#039;m just a defensive fan. I love Emily Dickinson. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks so much for these tips! I&#8217;ve set a goal for myself to read them all. The only thing that irked me was when you said:</p>
<p>Find a way to publish your poems. Sooner or later you have to send your babies out into the world to find their way. Emily Dickinson was a fluke. Most people who donâ€™t publish while theyâ€™re alive will never be seen or heard of â€” no matter how great their poems.</p>
<p>Yes, Emily Dickinson only gained her fame after her death, but she did try to get her poems published when she sent them to Thomas Wentworth Higginson. Higginson refrained from publishing her poems because he thought they were too shocking and avant garde for the general public.</p>
<p>Maybe I&#8217;m just a defensive fan. I love Emily Dickinson. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: jess</title>
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		<dc:creator>jess</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Jan 2011 20:59:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Time,
When time freezes,
you know that its the end.
When its the end,
theirs a better place above.
When you enter that place, 
you shall feel th loving of God.
The only God in the world,
gives you the freedom.
Is it you who realy loves me,
or is it just I who loves myself?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Time,<br />
When time freezes,<br />
you know that its the end.<br />
When its the end,<br />
theirs a better place above.<br />
When you enter that place,<br />
you shall feel th loving of God.<br />
The only God in the world,<br />
gives you the freedom.<br />
Is it you who realy loves me,<br />
or is it just I who loves myself?</p>
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		<title>By: Adu Michael</title>
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		<dc:creator>Adu Michael</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jan 2011 18:58:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great tips,JH. I find your tips very helpful. I&#039;ve written a number of poems myself &amp; they&#039;re so good that many times i feel like i&#039;m the poet in Africa!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips,JH. I find your tips very helpful. I&#8217;ve written a number of poems myself &amp; they&#8217;re so good that many times i feel like i&#8217;m the poet in Africa!</p>
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		<title>By: lizleppy</title>
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		<dc:creator>lizleppy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jan 2011 14:58:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>U CAN CHECK THE OTHERS AT MY BLOG:http://www.lizleppy-lizleppy.blogspot.com/

IMPOSSIBLE LOVE.


I have being hearing your voice in my head,
I picture you holding my hand,
Then you whisper to my ears,
I look up and stare straight in to your eyes,
I see the sun,
Itâ€™s shining so bright,
I start feeling the heat,
My heart is near to bounce out,
Am afraid something very strong is building inside,
I have to run for my life,
This canâ€™t happen,
We are not meant to be,
This is impossible,
We have to let go,
Itâ€™s wrong,
It hurts so much,
This love is making me weak,
The way I feel,
I know this love is so real,
We wasnâ€™t suppose to fall in love,
Of all people, why did it have to be you?
I didnâ€™t want to fall in love,
I didnâ€™t want you in my life,
Now I regret,
That we met,
But itâ€™s done,
We are in love,
We know its wrong,
You belong to another person,
And we canâ€™t be together,
Our love is impossible,</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>U CAN CHECK THE OTHERS AT MY BLOG:<a href="http://www.lizleppy-lizleppy.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.lizleppy-lizleppy.blogspot.com/</a></p>
<p>IMPOSSIBLE LOVE.</p>
<p>I have being hearing your voice in my head,<br />
I picture you holding my hand,<br />
Then you whisper to my ears,<br />
I look up and stare straight in to your eyes,<br />
I see the sun,<br />
Itâ€™s shining so bright,<br />
I start feeling the heat,<br />
My heart is near to bounce out,<br />
Am afraid something very strong is building inside,<br />
I have to run for my life,<br />
This canâ€™t happen,<br />
We are not meant to be,<br />
This is impossible,<br />
We have to let go,<br />
Itâ€™s wrong,<br />
It hurts so much,<br />
This love is making me weak,<br />
The way I feel,<br />
I know this love is so real,<br />
We wasnâ€™t suppose to fall in love,<br />
Of all people, why did it have to be you?<br />
I didnâ€™t want to fall in love,<br />
I didnâ€™t want you in my life,<br />
Now I regret,<br />
That we met,<br />
But itâ€™s done,<br />
We are in love,<br />
We know its wrong,<br />
You belong to another person,<br />
And we canâ€™t be together,<br />
Our love is impossible,</p>
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		<title>By: lizleppy</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-2/#comment-227763</link>
		<dc:creator>lizleppy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jan 2011 14:55:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>tHAT ABOVE POEM IS CALLED DAMAGERS,

NOW HERE THE LASTEST 

A PIECE OF MY HEART



You are my friend,

The one I want to always hold,

Through the good times,

Through the bad times,

We walk together,

Me and you, no other,

You are my confident,

I tell you all my secrets,

Attentively you open your ears,

Everything I utter you want to hear,

You always held me up,

For me you always stood up,

When I fall down,

You always pick me up,

Whenever I need a hand,

You stretch your hand  I hold,

When life I cannot bear,

You are there to wipe my tears,

You are my comfort zone,

You are juts like the ice cream cone,

I can&#039;t make it without you,

You are my hero,

Every moment we spent,

It all counts,

Thank you for everything you have done,

You always want to see me happy,

With you I will never be lonely,

Whenever I am  in sorrow,

You always make me smile,

Remember the silly jokes you told me?

Those ones I will never forget,

They brought me happiness,

They are the best memories,

The best I ever had,

Even though I may not shout it loud,

But you are always missed,

And I will never be ashamed,

To call you my best friend,

My actions whenever am wrong you correct,

Cause you understand am not perfect,

Only with you I can be myself,

You are my hiding shelf,

You accept me for who I am,

As long as my life goes on,

You will always be my number one,

I will never break my promise,

For you I will always compromise,

And forever we will be friends.

That a vow I will never break,

Every breath I take,

Every step i make,

In you I know I will find the strength.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>tHAT ABOVE POEM IS CALLED DAMAGERS,</p>
<p>NOW HERE THE LASTEST </p>
<p>A PIECE OF MY HEART</p>
<p>You are my friend,</p>
<p>The one I want to always hold,</p>
<p>Through the good times,</p>
<p>Through the bad times,</p>
<p>We walk together,</p>
<p>Me and you, no other,</p>
<p>You are my confident,</p>
<p>I tell you all my secrets,</p>
<p>Attentively you open your ears,</p>
<p>Everything I utter you want to hear,</p>
<p>You always held me up,</p>
<p>For me you always stood up,</p>
<p>When I fall down,</p>
<p>You always pick me up,</p>
<p>Whenever I need a hand,</p>
<p>You stretch your hand  I hold,</p>
<p>When life I cannot bear,</p>
<p>You are there to wipe my tears,</p>
<p>You are my comfort zone,</p>
<p>You are juts like the ice cream cone,</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t make it without you,</p>
<p>You are my hero,</p>
<p>Every moment we spent,</p>
<p>It all counts,</p>
<p>Thank you for everything you have done,</p>
<p>You always want to see me happy,</p>
<p>With you I will never be lonely,</p>
<p>Whenever I am  in sorrow,</p>
<p>You always make me smile,</p>
<p>Remember the silly jokes you told me?</p>
<p>Those ones I will never forget,</p>
<p>They brought me happiness,</p>
<p>They are the best memories,</p>
<p>The best I ever had,</p>
<p>Even though I may not shout it loud,</p>
<p>But you are always missed,</p>
<p>And I will never be ashamed,</p>
<p>To call you my best friend,</p>
<p>My actions whenever am wrong you correct,</p>
<p>Cause you understand am not perfect,</p>
<p>Only with you I can be myself,</p>
<p>You are my hiding shelf,</p>
<p>You accept me for who I am,</p>
<p>As long as my life goes on,</p>
<p>You will always be my number one,</p>
<p>I will never break my promise,</p>
<p>For you I will always compromise,</p>
<p>And forever we will be friends.</p>
<p>That a vow I will never break,</p>
<p>Every breath I take,</p>
<p>Every step i make,</p>
<p>In you I know I will find the strength.</p>
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		<title>By: lizleppy</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-2/#comment-227762</link>
		<dc:creator>lizleppy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jan 2011 14:53:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why are they trying to figure out what I am about,
I don&#039;t look normal to them or Wat?
OK,I admit,
Maybe I am a little different,
But I didn&#039;t say I am not human,
Am little laid back,
And I hate people watching my back,
I like minding my own business,
Cause I don&#039;t t like stress,
I depends on nobody,
I spent my own hard earned money,
Am not boasting around,
But is a way of survival in this cold world,
I hate intruders,
I don&#039;t associate with pretenders,
Trying to bring you down,
Leave you completely ruin,
Pretending to be concerned,
But never take their word,
Bloody idiots,
On them I gonna shit,
Cant believe I was so blind,
A pause was my mind,
I wasn&#039;t thinking clearly,
I didn&#039;t realize they were  using me,
They were playing tricks on me,
But now my mind is awake,
Am gonna stand up,
Am gonna fight back,
To hell I will drag them,
To hell I will drag them,
Making sure they thoroughly burn,
And this this they will never forget,
And me I will live to celebrate.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why are they trying to figure out what I am about,<br />
I don&#8217;t look normal to them or Wat?<br />
OK,I admit,<br />
Maybe I am a little different,<br />
But I didn&#8217;t say I am not human,<br />
Am little laid back,<br />
And I hate people watching my back,<br />
I like minding my own business,<br />
Cause I don&#8217;t t like stress,<br />
I depends on nobody,<br />
I spent my own hard earned money,<br />
Am not boasting around,<br />
But is a way of survival in this cold world,<br />
I hate intruders,<br />
I don&#8217;t associate with pretenders,<br />
Trying to bring you down,<br />
Leave you completely ruin,<br />
Pretending to be concerned,<br />
But never take their word,<br />
Bloody idiots,<br />
On them I gonna shit,<br />
Cant believe I was so blind,<br />
A pause was my mind,<br />
I wasn&#8217;t thinking clearly,<br />
I didn&#8217;t realize they were  using me,<br />
They were playing tricks on me,<br />
But now my mind is awake,<br />
Am gonna stand up,<br />
Am gonna fight back,<br />
To hell I will drag them,<br />
To hell I will drag them,<br />
Making sure they thoroughly burn,<br />
And this this they will never forget,<br />
And me I will live to celebrate.</p>
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		<title>By: danielle</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-2/#comment-227726</link>
		<dc:creator>danielle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Jan 2011 22:53:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>hi, im only 13 years old, and i love to write! how do i get my dreams started?!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>hi, im only 13 years old, and i love to write! how do i get my dreams started?!</p>
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		<title>By: anna_nana/nunnally</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/poetry-writing-tips/comment-page-2/#comment-227627</link>
		<dc:creator>anna_nana/nunnally</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Dec 2010 07:00:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i love this rules! it really strengthen me to write with courage even if how bad my my poems are (not really I guess.). my classmates tells me that what I&#039;ve  wrote was good but i always felt down when i think that others are better than me. but I&#039;m not going to loose my hopes in writing.&quot;it&#039;s better to try more than to surrender.&quot;= D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i love this rules! it really strengthen me to write with courage even if how bad my my poems are (not really I guess.). my classmates tells me that what I&#8217;ve  wrote was good but i always felt down when i think that others are better than me. but I&#8217;m not going to loose my hopes in writing.&#8221;it&#8217;s better to try more than to surrender.&#8221;= D</p>
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