How to Write A Cinquain

by John Hewitt on 10/24/2004

CinquainCinquain History

Cinquain, despite its French-sounding name, is an American poetry form that can be traced back to Adelaide Crapsey. Crapsey, influenced by Japanese haiku, developed this poetic system and used it to express brief thoughts and statements. Other poets who popularized the form were Carl Sandburg and Louis Utermeyer. While the form does not have the extensive popularity of haiku, it is often taught in public schools to children because of the form’s brief nature.

Cinquain Form

Most cinquain poems consist of a single, 22 syllable stanza, but they can be combined into longer works. A cinquain consists of five lines. The first line has two syllables, the second line has four syllables, the third line has six syllables and the fourth line has eight syllables, the final line has two syllables:

2

4

6

8

2

The line length is the only firm rule, but there are other guidelines that people have tried to impose from time to time.

Cinquain Guidelines

  • Write in iambs (Two syllable groupings in which the first syllable is unstressed and the second syllable stressed. For Example: i DRANK she SMILED we TALKED i THOUGHT) For the last line of the cinquain, however, both syllables should be stressed, NICE BAR.
  • Write about a noun. Cinquains generally fail if you try to make them about emotions, philosophies or other complex subjects. They should be about something concrete.
  • Don’t try to make each line complete or express a single thought. Each line should flow into the next or the poem will sound static.
  • Cinquains work best if you avoid adjectives and adverbs. This doesn’t mean you can’t have any, but focus on the nouns and the verbs. This almost always works best in a cinquain.
  • The poem should build toward a climax. The last line should serve as some sort of conclusion to the earlier thoughts. Often, the conclusion has some sort of surprise built into it.

One possible, but not required, format is as follows:

Line 1: Title Noun

Line 2: Description

Line 3: Action

Line 4: Feeling or Effect

Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

If you look at my examples, I prefer to use the noun as a separate title, not as part of the cinquain. Also, only one of the three poems is written in iambs.

Cinquain Examples

Tucson Rain

The smell
Everyone moves
To the window to look
Work stops and people start talking
Rain came

Opening Game

Game time
Season looked good
National champions
We told ourselves as we sat down
Not now

New Bar

Across
The street I went
To drink at the new bar
I drank she smiled we talked I thought
Nice bar

Cinquain on other sites

Cinquain Poems: Examples of cinquain poetry

Cinquain in the Wikipedia: Wikipedia’s discussion of the poetry form.

Cinquain in an Instant A tool for writing Cinquain poems

Cinquain.org A scholarly publication about the poetry form.

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{ 32 comments }

May November 5, 2005 at 11:00 pm

Really good. You could make your website more flashy.
That would be really great as people like going to flashy
websites and not boring ones.
May.

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I’m not good at flashy. — John

David November 13, 2005 at 3:15 pm

No need for flash. The content is great. Thanks for giving an old writing teacher some new ideas – or at least a new way of explaining the important ideas.

David.

anothai,from Thailand November 27, 2005 at 5:25 pm

Thanks to the cinquain.It’s my first time to reda about it. It’ll be useful to teach a beginner of poetic writer.

Cinema December 5, 2005 at 3:49 pm

Thanks!

Linda S. December 30, 2005 at 7:05 am

I agree that you don’t need flash here—your work is good enough to interest me.I love writing cinquains.
When my daughter was in fourth or fifth grade, her class did poetry
combined with a science unit on weather and I had a great deal of fun
with cinquains on weather topics….Thanks for providing an excuse to remember that—and maybe do some more.

John January 19, 2006 at 2:42 pm

In my school 5th grade we are working on cinquains. I think it’s awsome and cool. I’m doing one on Martin Luther Kings jr. Nice cinquains. keep up the good work ;)

joe January 25, 2006 at 9:24 am

a very informative site. thank you. no flash, if you please

DOREEN February 8, 2006 at 7:11 pm

I HAVE ENJOYED THE TIPS THAT ARE HERE GIVEN, FOR MY BRAIN IS IN KNOTS MY AND POEMS ARE NOT WRITTEN …THAKS

NATNAEL February 24, 2006 at 11:38 pm

YOUR INFORMATION IS GOOD, BUT I THINK IT WILL BE AWESOM IF YOU GUYS EXPLAIN WHAT A SYLLABLE IS.

ANY WAYS ITS AWESOM, AND PERFECT
NATI

sai March 11, 2006 at 11:33 pm

am not an english teacher but i wanna learn all of wnglish-grammmar,poetry,essay,and all. as a science teacher , i think writing cinquains may make my students more interested in learning science.
a short poetry ’bout genetics, why not? fantastic!

jean April 7, 2006 at 5:01 pm

Thanks for the delightful site. Flash is only Flash. I am working with special children and heard about cinquain, Your site is very informative.

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Jennifer May 1, 2006 at 10:33 am

This site is great! I didnt understand what cinquain was until I read more about it on your site so.. thanks again!!

Emily May 7, 2006 at 12:27 pm

My teacher taught me TOTALLY different. I think you should check
your information out.

John Hewitt May 8, 2006 at 10:14 am

I’m pretty comfortable with my presentation of the rules Emily. If your teacher teaches it differently, they must be getting their information from different sources than the ones I have used for all these years.

Ashley May 22, 2006 at 3:19 pm

really good and amazing poems

listacia May 22, 2006 at 3:21 pm

these are unbelievable poems!WOW!Excellent Gorgeous

Susan May 29, 2006 at 1:56 pm

I was thrilled to run across this article! Cinquains are one of my favorite forms to write and I
was discouraged to read on other sites that it should include a specific number of words, certain
types of words in certain lines, etc. This was not what I have been doing…I have simply been
using the syllabic form. I hated the idea of incorporating those other rules. They just don’t work
for me. Needless to say, I was comforted to read that my initial introduction to cinquain was correct.
Thank you.

Susan

danielle February 11, 2007 at 5:06 am

I like it very much it help me in my projects about poems

Soph February 25, 2007 at 9:17 pm

Hey, thanks for the info! It’s really helpful for my Language Arts poetry project… I’ll never forget how to write a cinquain!

reller March 9, 2007 at 12:23 pm

hey, thanks for the info! its really helfpul for my language arts poetry project… i’ll never forget how to write a cinqain

riz March 1, 2009 at 5:22 am

thanks a ton…helped me a lot for a project

lil March 25, 2009 at 6:20 pm

rock on

lil March 25, 2009 at 6:20 pm

those were great poems you rock

daychia April 20, 2010 at 6:46 pm

yeah the cinquian poem where tought with Syllybuls instead….
but im comfusing i have to get it rite or my teacher get mad at me :(

daychia April 20, 2010 at 6:47 pm

haha never mind i think thats how we are doing it :/

Bobbi Lee September 7, 2010 at 4:49 pm

Ok i absolutly loved your site it helped me alot! i dont know if i did mine right though? here it is tell me what you think:
Jamming
With my screamo
I love playing it loud
It works awsome to drown out the chaos
I rocks
-bobbi lee
an for those of you who are confused screamo is a type of music. :-)
and i thik i did good for a 8th grader!

cool girl November 9, 2010 at 3:54 pm

SYLLABLES is for exsample c a t when you say he word put your hand under your shin and has many times as it hits your hand is a syllable

a person November 11, 2010 at 6:25 pm

nice website. helped me get an a.

Bex November 18, 2010 at 1:03 pm

On the last poem the 4th line has 9 syllables :/ Smiled is 2 syllables

John Hewitt November 18, 2010 at 3:07 pm

Depends on how you read it Bex

Catherine Johnson January 5, 2011 at 11:57 am

This is excellently written. I’m definitely going to print it out. in the middle of a Month of Poetry over on http://www.monthofpoetry.wordpress.com and this is really helpful.
Thanks
Catherine

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