Comments on: Poem: Complications and Opportunities http://www.poewar.com/poem-complications-and-opportunities/ Writing Career Center Fri, 19 Mar 2010 15:32:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: butterflyzrfree http://www.poewar.com/poem-complications-and-opportunities/comment-page-1/#comment-222503 butterflyzrfree Sun, 03 May 2009 10:58:37 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=5089#comment-222503 Great poem and topic but a little stilted. Could flow better. Maybe the word 'loss' inserted here and there would help? In life you start out a healthy baby and then genetics and the world act on you in a series of losses imo. I don't know if you would like to introduce this or not. It is just my opinion <abbr><em>butterflyzrfrees last blog post..<a href="http://gotpoetry.com/News/article/sid=34223.html" rel="nofollow">Poetry Contest</a></abbr></em> Great poem and topic but a little stilted. Could flow better. Maybe the word ‘loss’ inserted here and there would help? In life you start out a healthy baby and then genetics and the world act on you in a series of losses imo. I don’t know if you would like to introduce this or not. It is just my opinion

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]]> By: casey backpacker http://www.poewar.com/poem-complications-and-opportunities/comment-page-1/#comment-222459 casey backpacker Mon, 27 Apr 2009 10:51:43 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=5089#comment-222459 Oh my I thought she will never recover. Good thing she did recover. You are so good in making this "event" a rare good poem to read. My thumbs up! Oh my I thought she will never recover. Good thing she did recover. You are so good in making this “event” a rare good poem to read. My thumbs up!

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