http://www.poewar.com/poem-awake-and-paralyzed/ Writing Career Center Sat, 20 Mar 2010 01:51:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.poewar.com/poem-awake-and-paralyzed/comment-page-1/#comment-222297 Rosemary Nissen-Wade Sun, 29 Mar 2009 00:25:51 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=5066#comment-222297 You've found exactly the right tone for these pieces! Some things can only be told baldly, the plain facts emotional enough in themselves. Those last two lines in particular ... the implications flow back over the whole poem, the whole experience, adding another dimension. You’ve found exactly the right tone for these pieces! Some things can only be told baldly, the plain facts emotional enough in themselves. Those last two lines in particular … the implications flow back over the whole poem, the whole experience, adding another dimension.

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