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		<title>By: Leah</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-223265</link>
		<dc:creator>Leah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Oct 2009 14:36:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The pine needles are a bushy yellow today
Like an aging man&#039;s beard, who is still young
And clasps the younger ones on his knee without complaint
Of rheumatism or aches

They still frisk when the rain hits 
And toss when the wind scowls on them
And batters them into place, they bend
With the winds of time

They are softer in many ways, the dying ones
And they draw the vivid green from those still alive
Until all are one in dying

And we humans notice as we wander by
Our hearts fixed on the road before us
Eyes rushing past change we can’t comprehend,
Until our day comes and plows us off the road
And into the woods where we belong
And we too shiver in the cold, and at the last
We change our colors to suit who we were all along
Under coats of chlorophyll contagions of success
Always seeking green, seeking money, excess
Suddenly blazing yellow, red, purple with defiance
Because all are one in death, cowardly, bold, and royal in death</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The pine needles are a bushy yellow today<br />
Like an aging man&#8217;s beard, who is still young<br />
And clasps the younger ones on his knee without complaint<br />
Of rheumatism or aches</p>
<p>They still frisk when the rain hits<br />
And toss when the wind scowls on them<br />
And batters them into place, they bend<br />
With the winds of time</p>
<p>They are softer in many ways, the dying ones<br />
And they draw the vivid green from those still alive<br />
Until all are one in dying</p>
<p>And we humans notice as we wander by<br />
Our hearts fixed on the road before us<br />
Eyes rushing past change we can’t comprehend,<br />
Until our day comes and plows us off the road<br />
And into the woods where we belong<br />
And we too shiver in the cold, and at the last<br />
We change our colors to suit who we were all along<br />
Under coats of chlorophyll contagions of success<br />
Always seeking green, seeking money, excess<br />
Suddenly blazing yellow, red, purple with defiance<br />
Because all are one in death, cowardly, bold, and royal in death</p>
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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-222429</link>
		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 16:15:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i lie hidden
underneath this mass
ovations trickling hieght
consumed within my own world
a metaphore for an alibi
i lie hidden 
underneath this mask
identity a hidden past
muddled confusion; a simile
of failed accomplishments
to be misunderstood
in a world of progress</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i lie hidden<br />
underneath this mass<br />
ovations trickling hieght<br />
consumed within my own world<br />
a metaphore for an alibi<br />
i lie hidden<br />
underneath this mask<br />
identity a hidden past<br />
muddled confusion; a simile<br />
of failed accomplishments<br />
to be misunderstood<br />
in a world of progress</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah.M</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-222411</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah.M</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Apr 2009 14:32:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>We build the wall

the bricks we carry upon our back,
as we live from day to day
the cement we take from peoples stares 
as they judge us because &quot;lifes not fair&quot;
and so we build the wall.

we build the wall 
to shield ourselves from hypocritic eyes
we build the wall to keep people out
and protect us from our final goodbyes
we build the wall to block the shouts 
and to limit out our cries.

the wall we build to keep people out,
will only keep us inside
Our true colors, 
our true rhyme, 
the true &quot;me&quot; inside.

The wall now our only friend.
charcol stone in the form of square bricks.
Stacked together perfectly,
And piling up to the sky
While disapearing at each side.
And yet the wall traps us,
in the contense of our own mind,
Surrounding us completly,
While threatning to take over.
We find ourselves completly lost,
Until, that is we find,
a friend worth of showing the &quot;me&quot; lost inside.

understanding your friend will be patient,
while you slowly take down the bricks, 
carring, with wisdom they will help you find your way.
And when you do finally make your way through,
your lovable, unique friend will be there waiting for you</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We build the wall</p>
<p>the bricks we carry upon our back,<br />
as we live from day to day<br />
the cement we take from peoples stares<br />
as they judge us because &#8220;lifes not fair&#8221;<br />
and so we build the wall.</p>
<p>we build the wall<br />
to shield ourselves from hypocritic eyes<br />
we build the wall to keep people out<br />
and protect us from our final goodbyes<br />
we build the wall to block the shouts<br />
and to limit out our cries.</p>
<p>the wall we build to keep people out,<br />
will only keep us inside<br />
Our true colors,<br />
our true rhyme,<br />
the true &#8220;me&#8221; inside.</p>
<p>The wall now our only friend.<br />
charcol stone in the form of square bricks.<br />
Stacked together perfectly,<br />
And piling up to the sky<br />
While disapearing at each side.<br />
And yet the wall traps us,<br />
in the contense of our own mind,<br />
Surrounding us completly,<br />
While threatning to take over.<br />
We find ourselves completly lost,<br />
Until, that is we find,<br />
a friend worth of showing the &#8220;me&#8221; lost inside.</p>
<p>understanding your friend will be patient,<br />
while you slowly take down the bricks,<br />
carring, with wisdom they will help you find your way.<br />
And when you do finally make your way through,<br />
your lovable, unique friend will be there waiting for you</p>
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		<title>By: Ginger Saunderson</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-222087</link>
		<dc:creator>Ginger Saunderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Feb 2009 15:45:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>pop! the twisty can opens
doughy, speckled, flat, round disks
on the greased pan
into the preheated oven
out they come, golden, puffy biscuits
topped with cinnamon goodness
smells like heaven.
Pillsbury cinnamon rolls bake in ten minutes.

you saw me later lookin&#039; hot
then you wanted a piece of my roll top
i remembered you from college when like these sticky buns
you were always baked.

back then you played me
and i thought inside you, there must be something more
behind closed doors, you declared your love for cinnamon rolls
but when i made them for you, you told everyone i was psycho.

mmm, mmm, you suck.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>pop! the twisty can opens<br />
doughy, speckled, flat, round disks<br />
on the greased pan<br />
into the preheated oven<br />
out they come, golden, puffy biscuits<br />
topped with cinnamon goodness<br />
smells like heaven.<br />
Pillsbury cinnamon rolls bake in ten minutes.</p>
<p>you saw me later lookin&#8217; hot<br />
then you wanted a piece of my roll top<br />
i remembered you from college when like these sticky buns<br />
you were always baked.</p>
<p>back then you played me<br />
and i thought inside you, there must be something more<br />
behind closed doors, you declared your love for cinnamon rolls<br />
but when i made them for you, you told everyone i was psycho.</p>
<p>mmm, mmm, you suck.</p>
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		<title>By: Lois Eaton</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-222000</link>
		<dc:creator>Lois Eaton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Feb 2009 22:39:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Little raised scribbles on the tree -
Mid-brown, wriggly, growing, free
A few mls wide, telling me
That soon a tiny moth we’ll see.

Hidden underneath the bark
Safe and sound in cosy dark
Each making an artistic mark
Like a little “I’m here” plaque.

Caterpillar crawling there
Do not give in to despair
I think your life is very fair -
You’ll soon fly in the warm, bright air.

I wish that I could fly like you
But then they’d put me in a zoo!
Something they will never do
To you, so trust me, it is true

You’ll have your moment flying free
When you escape from bark and tree

Lois Eaton 2-2-9</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Little raised scribbles on the tree -<br />
Mid-brown, wriggly, growing, free<br />
A few mls wide, telling me<br />
That soon a tiny moth we’ll see.</p>
<p>Hidden underneath the bark<br />
Safe and sound in cosy dark<br />
Each making an artistic mark<br />
Like a little “I’m here” plaque.</p>
<p>Caterpillar crawling there<br />
Do not give in to despair<br />
I think your life is very fair -<br />
You’ll soon fly in the warm, bright air.</p>
<p>I wish that I could fly like you<br />
But then they’d put me in a zoo!<br />
Something they will never do<br />
To you, so trust me, it is true</p>
<p>You’ll have your moment flying free<br />
When you escape from bark and tree</p>
<p>Lois Eaton 2-2-9</p>
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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-220512</link>
		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Oct 2008 20:33:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>my hair
the imagary of me
represeting wigs
that make me
my hair
the volger, hip style weave
that others recognize the women in me
my hair
go natural go curly afro 
fits the need to be bold
my hair 
one day long, the other day short
or maybe one day i will wear it bald
my hair
is what makes me, my personality
my hair is a status symbol to go freely</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>my hair<br />
the imagary of me<br />
represeting wigs<br />
that make me<br />
my hair<br />
the volger, hip style weave<br />
that others recognize the women in me<br />
my hair<br />
go natural go curly afro<br />
fits the need to be bold<br />
my hair<br />
one day long, the other day short<br />
or maybe one day i will wear it bald<br />
my hair<br />
is what makes me, my personality<br />
my hair is a status symbol to go freely</p>
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		<title>By: Casey</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-220280</link>
		<dc:creator>Casey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Oct 2008 02:58:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Flow

White knuckles
sweat dripping down
hot pressure building
spinning around

total control
although feeling free
i feel your body
your power invading me

such sweet taste
liquid warm smell
a listless beauty
for her how i fell</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Flow</p>
<p>White knuckles<br />
sweat dripping down<br />
hot pressure building<br />
spinning around</p>
<p>total control<br />
although feeling free<br />
i feel your body<br />
your power invading me</p>
<p>such sweet taste<br />
liquid warm smell<br />
a listless beauty<br />
for her how i fell</p>
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		<title>By: Charlotte</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-219994</link>
		<dc:creator>Charlotte</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Oct 2008 13:40:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I seem to be writing mainly about cosmetics and toiletries at the moment!


Financial arrangement

Bank notes in an envelope
arrived limp and worn,
soggy with perfume,
probably Chanel.

She washes it off her hands with
special new soap.
It&#039;s called &#039;moody blues&#039;,
zesty and smooth in the
colours of Monet&#039;s
waterlillies.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I seem to be writing mainly about cosmetics and toiletries at the moment!</p>
<p>Financial arrangement</p>
<p>Bank notes in an envelope<br />
arrived limp and worn,<br />
soggy with perfume,<br />
probably Chanel.</p>
<p>She washes it off her hands with<br />
special new soap.<br />
It&#8217;s called &#8216;moody blues&#8217;,<br />
zesty and smooth in the<br />
colours of Monet&#8217;s<br />
waterlillies.</p>
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		<title>By: william</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-219939</link>
		<dc:creator>william</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 17:35:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kimberlee Ferrell - your poem was beautiful.

I think the most powerful lines where: 

&quot;I never knew what alone meant
til I observed the icy urgent rain drops&quot;

.....just beautiful!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kimberlee Ferrell &#8211; your poem was beautiful.</p>
<p>I think the most powerful lines where: </p>
<p>&#8220;I never knew what alone meant<br />
til I observed the icy urgent rain drops&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8230;..just beautiful!</p>
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		<title>By: Gary Bowers</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-generally-be-specific/comment-page-1/#comment-219894</link>
		<dc:creator>Gary Bowers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Sep 2008 16:57:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>An Object of Six Or More Words

Behold the

Rapid
Grappling
Mixing
Pumping
Loud
Machine,

It falters in a China Shop, besmirks a Mezzanine,

It unbelongs in Bowling Alleys, Living Rooms and Skiffs

It has no need for Heraldry, Embroidery, or Spliffs,

In fact it only has one truly rightful, safe milieu:

It fills up Concrete Forms, manipulated by a Crew.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>An Object of Six Or More Words</p>
<p>Behold the</p>
<p>Rapid<br />
Grappling<br />
Mixing<br />
Pumping<br />
Loud<br />
Machine,</p>
<p>It falters in a China Shop, besmirks a Mezzanine,</p>
<p>It unbelongs in Bowling Alleys, Living Rooms and Skiffs</p>
<p>It has no need for Heraldry, Embroidery, or Spliffs,</p>
<p>In fact it only has one truly rightful, safe milieu:</p>
<p>It fills up Concrete Forms, manipulated by a Crew.</p>
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