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		<title>By: Sarah.M</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sarah.M</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 01:09:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll Stay

Why do you do this?
When did it start?
Every time you do it, 
you&#039;re breaking my heart.

you beg and you promise.
I want so bad to believe.
But by hurting you, you&#039;re hurting me.
And all the time I want to leave
But I stay.

This is the worst,
that I&#039;ve ever seen you
your shivering as I hold you, and I say
&quot;Is there something you need me, to do?&quot;
And you say stay

And the days go by
and your sober
and you&#039;ve changed,
I was sure you had changed completly
Until the day I left you on your own.

yeah and days turned into months.
And months turned into years.
And I wasn&#039;t there to help you,
As you struggled through your tears

Now I stand here and watch,
as you&#039;re lowered in the ground.
And it&#039;s so painful,
I want so bad to turn around
But I&#039;ll stay</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll Stay</p>
<p>Why do you do this?<br />
When did it start?<br />
Every time you do it,<br />
you&#8217;re breaking my heart.</p>
<p>you beg and you promise.<br />
I want so bad to believe.<br />
But by hurting you, you&#8217;re hurting me.<br />
And all the time I want to leave<br />
But I stay.</p>
<p>This is the worst,<br />
that I&#8217;ve ever seen you<br />
your shivering as I hold you, and I say<br />
&#8220;Is there something you need me, to do?&#8221;<br />
And you say stay</p>
<p>And the days go by<br />
and your sober<br />
and you&#8217;ve changed,<br />
I was sure you had changed completly<br />
Until the day I left you on your own.</p>
<p>yeah and days turned into months.<br />
And months turned into years.<br />
And I wasn&#8217;t there to help you,<br />
As you struggled through your tears</p>
<p>Now I stand here and watch,<br />
as you&#8217;re lowered in the ground.<br />
And it&#8217;s so painful,<br />
I want so bad to turn around<br />
But I&#8217;ll stay</p>
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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Oct 2008 20:46:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i met him at a distance
when we met time surpased
he was a true gentlmen
only not my type
for you to be better suited
for both personality type
i was contingent to sly your name
interupted with gaity gesture
his presence of you in memory
it was you not me
it was you not me
it was you not me
he had a liken to
it was a gesture, a sigh
he relicks your image too
so i gave him your number
if he calls? (smile)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i met him at a distance<br />
when we met time surpased<br />
he was a true gentlmen<br />
only not my type<br />
for you to be better suited<br />
for both personality type<br />
i was contingent to sly your name<br />
interupted with gaity gesture<br />
his presence of you in memory<br />
it was you not me<br />
it was you not me<br />
it was you not me<br />
he had a liken to<br />
it was a gesture, a sigh<br />
he relicks your image too<br />
so i gave him your number<br />
if he calls? (smile)</p>
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		<title>By: Gary Bowers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gary Bowers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Sep 2008 19:23:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stung &amp; Flung Blues

My baby loves her Baby Backs too much.
My baby loves her Baby Backs too much.
It&#039;s been ten dollars since I felt her touch.

She promises Relief and Full Disclosure
She promises Relief and Full Disclosure
It&#039;s been a fur coat since the least exposure.

I guess she gets some mileage from them heels
I guess she gets some mileage from them heels
I guess they&#039;re right--you owns the cards, you deals.

But maybe I can waylay or entice her
O, may I can waylay or entice her
But it&#039;s been ovens since I got to splice her

Man Up, they say, but Ow! my Manhood&#039;s stung
Get Up, Get Out, Get Back from where I&#039;s flung.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stung &amp; Flung Blues</p>
<p>My baby loves her Baby Backs too much.<br />
My baby loves her Baby Backs too much.<br />
It&#8217;s been ten dollars since I felt her touch.</p>
<p>She promises Relief and Full Disclosure<br />
She promises Relief and Full Disclosure<br />
It&#8217;s been a fur coat since the least exposure.</p>
<p>I guess she gets some mileage from them heels<br />
I guess she gets some mileage from them heels<br />
I guess they&#8217;re right&#8211;you owns the cards, you deals.</p>
<p>But maybe I can waylay or entice her<br />
O, may I can waylay or entice her<br />
But it&#8217;s been ovens since I got to splice her</p>
<p>Man Up, they say, but Ow! my Manhood&#8217;s stung<br />
Get Up, Get Out, Get Back from where I&#8217;s flung.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-day-4-poetry-the-writers-bridge-to-music/comment-page-1/#comment-219808</link>
		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:24:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Sheer

The blues will always be there for you

@ Key

The Blues don&#039;t have to rhyme</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Sheer</p>
<p>The blues will always be there for you</p>
<p>@ Key</p>
<p>The Blues don&#8217;t have to rhyme</p>
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		<title>By: Key</title>
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		<dc:creator>Key</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Sep 2008 21:23:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I loved this suggestion!  I sort of messed mine up (it&#039;s too short and I completely forgot about rhyme) but I will keep trying.  Don&#039;t know if I&#039;ll try singing it though...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved this suggestion!  I sort of messed mine up (it&#8217;s too short and I completely forgot about rhyme) but I will keep trying.  Don&#8217;t know if I&#8217;ll try singing it though&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 18:04:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ James &amp; John: I will try harder but seriously, blues not as easy as it seems. =)

@ Rosemary: I liked yours. It&#039;s simple yet pogniant!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ James &amp; John: I will try harder but seriously, blues not as easy as it seems. =)</p>
<p>@ Rosemary: I liked yours. It&#8217;s simple yet pogniant!</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-day-4-poetry-the-writers-bridge-to-music/comment-page-1/#comment-219416</link>
		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 13:40:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Rosemary

Ahhh the money blues. I&#039;ve been there before.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Rosemary</p>
<p>Ahhh the money blues. I&#8217;ve been there before.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 11:16:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PS I&#039;m very grateful to you, James. I&#039;ve long wanted to get a clue how to write blues in poetry and you have made it easy! Not that I think my little effort above is all that wonderful, but now at least I&#039;ve got a form I can practise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PS I&#8217;m very grateful to you, James. I&#8217;ve long wanted to get a clue how to write blues in poetry and you have made it easy! Not that I think my little effort above is all that wonderful, but now at least I&#8217;ve got a form I can practise.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 10:58:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Money Blues

Money’s getting scarcer by the day
money’s getting scarcer ev’ry day
I’m juggling bills, there’s always more to pay.

I think this week I’ll manage and we’ll eat
this week I think I’ll manage, we will eat
but then they raise the rent, we’re on the street.

We don’t know where the next cent’s coming from
we don’t know where the next meal’s coming from
we don’t know where to find another home.

I used to have a cat I couldn’t feed
I used to have a cat I didn’t need
I gave him to a friend who could afford

such luxuries as roof and food and pet.
I don’t know how much lower I can get.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Thinkin&#039; Trim Taut Terrific: 2&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Money Blues</p>
<p>Money’s getting scarcer by the day<br />
money’s getting scarcer ev’ry day<br />
I’m juggling bills, there’s always more to pay.</p>
<p>I think this week I’ll manage and we’ll eat<br />
this week I think I’ll manage, we will eat<br />
but then they raise the rent, we’re on the street.</p>
<p>We don’t know where the next cent’s coming from<br />
we don’t know where the next meal’s coming from<br />
we don’t know where to find another home.</p>
<p>I used to have a cat I couldn’t feed<br />
I used to have a cat I didn’t need<br />
I gave him to a friend who could afford</p>
<p>such luxuries as roof and food and pet.<br />
I don’t know how much lower I can get.</p>
<p>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..<a href="http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html" rel="nofollow">Thinkin&#8217; Trim Taut Terrific: 2</a></p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 07:16:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tired Part-Time Poet Blues

I keep falling asleep at my blue desk
I feel my brain floating falling drifting

I fall awake I type some gibberish
Thinking maybe I’ll make some sense of this

Head so heavy it flops from side to side
Feeling thirsty my mouth so sore and dry

I yawned so long it may have took a day
My back is damp my hair has turned to gray

This poem has took so long to get to its sad end
I feel like I might just have to write it all again

I got the too few hours in too many days
For a tired part-time poet blues</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tired Part-Time Poet Blues</p>
<p>I keep falling asleep at my blue desk<br />
I feel my brain floating falling drifting</p>
<p>I fall awake I type some gibberish<br />
Thinking maybe I’ll make some sense of this</p>
<p>Head so heavy it flops from side to side<br />
Feeling thirsty my mouth so sore and dry</p>
<p>I yawned so long it may have took a day<br />
My back is damp my hair has turned to gray</p>
<p>This poem has took so long to get to its sad end<br />
I feel like I might just have to write it all again</p>
<p>I got the too few hours in too many days<br />
For a tired part-time poet blues</p>
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