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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Oct 2008 22:19:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>beet, but lock
rock, rut block
hit, bun run
meet, mom sum
deep, fut scam
run, sin am
creep, seat fleet
meek, heat meet</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>beet, but lock<br />
rock, rut block<br />
hit, bun run<br />
meet, mom sum<br />
deep, fut scam<br />
run, sin am<br />
creep, seat fleet<br />
meek, heat meet</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 13:43:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This one&#039;s fun!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This one&#8217;s fun!</p>
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		<title>By: Sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Sep 2008 16:00:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Caught my eye

He caught my eye the moment he walked in
With red leather swinging on the top of each boot
Reflecting a certain wildness in the wearer
And I cannot help but notice
That his foot kept tune with the jukebox
And he showed no inclination of being a fool
By imitating John Travolta
In the middle of the dance floor.

He caught my eye the moment I saw him
With his cute butt swaying to the tune
And his feet moving in time with the song
Playing on the old jukebox
I felt my stomach tie itself into a knot
As I watched him moving slowly but
Oh-so-steadily with the music.

He caught my eye the moment he looked up
In his neat kit and a cute pock on his cheek
And his rippling muscles as he drew the tap
For a frosty mug of beer
Squeezed all breath out of me 
As I watched.

He caught my eye
Yes, he caught my eye
That I just had to seize the day
And call fourth my courage
To approach him
To ask with a saucy grin
And a sassy mouth
To sit on his 
Hot thighs

And till today
I still remember
How he caught my eye
And how we thus begin.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Caught my eye</p>
<p>He caught my eye the moment he walked in<br />
With red leather swinging on the top of each boot<br />
Reflecting a certain wildness in the wearer<br />
And I cannot help but notice<br />
That his foot kept tune with the jukebox<br />
And he showed no inclination of being a fool<br />
By imitating John Travolta<br />
In the middle of the dance floor.</p>
<p>He caught my eye the moment I saw him<br />
With his cute butt swaying to the tune<br />
And his feet moving in time with the song<br />
Playing on the old jukebox<br />
I felt my stomach tie itself into a knot<br />
As I watched him moving slowly but<br />
Oh-so-steadily with the music.</p>
<p>He caught my eye the moment he looked up<br />
In his neat kit and a cute pock on his cheek<br />
And his rippling muscles as he drew the tap<br />
For a frosty mug of beer<br />
Squeezed all breath out of me<br />
As I watched.</p>
<p>He caught my eye<br />
Yes, he caught my eye<br />
That I just had to seize the day<br />
And call fourth my courage<br />
To approach him<br />
To ask with a saucy grin<br />
And a sassy mouth<br />
To sit on his<br />
Hot thighs</p>
<p>And till today<br />
I still remember<br />
How he caught my eye<br />
And how we thus begin.</p>
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		<title>By: Sandra</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sandra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Sep 2008 02:57:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As I write in Lithuanian, I&#039;ve translated all these prompt words, had chosen their forms or synonymes which rhyme and then wrote a poem, wich in my opinion is brilliant, because it has so many different and unnexpected associations!

So, I take this as a very useful excercise for imagination as well :) 
Thank you, John!

Sandras last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://rasau.wordpress.com/2008/09/22/uztarnautas-poilsis-williamstown%E2%80%99e/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Užtarnautas poilsis Williamstown’e&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As I write in Lithuanian, I&#8217;ve translated all these prompt words, had chosen their forms or synonymes which rhyme and then wrote a poem, wich in my opinion is brilliant, because it has so many different and unnexpected associations!</p>
<p>So, I take this as a very useful excercise for imagination as well <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
Thank you, John!</p>
<p>Sandras last blog post..<a href="http://rasau.wordpress.com/2008/09/22/uztarnautas-poilsis-williamstown%E2%80%99e/" rel="nofollow">Užtarnautas poilsis Williamstown’e</a></p>
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		<title>By: Gary Bowers</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gary Bowers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Sep 2008 00:19:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kadeidoscope Collisions in Illusory Collusion

A many-colored-coated fellow said to be a hoot
Requested Darling Clementine and Place Pigalle to boot
A tune a Fool can finger out is Darling Clementine
But Happy Feet knot, cramped with Place Pigalle; toes intertwine
Let Drum Kit take the tap of sticks that pock the Cymbal&#039;s surface
Euphonious, seize that set&#039;s Fourth near Thighs as soft as Nerf is

Licentiousness may boot a Moral Compass in the But
And feet that tap the Devil&#039;s Rhythm BURN, I tell you what
Need Less to Say, and More to Seize, of Fool and Tune and Thighs
Down Primrose Paths with Fox and Kit to knot our Real Eyes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kadeidoscope Collisions in Illusory Collusion</p>
<p>A many-colored-coated fellow said to be a hoot<br />
Requested Darling Clementine and Place Pigalle to boot<br />
A tune a Fool can finger out is Darling Clementine<br />
But Happy Feet knot, cramped with Place Pigalle; toes intertwine<br />
Let Drum Kit take the tap of sticks that pock the Cymbal&#8217;s surface<br />
Euphonious, seize that set&#8217;s Fourth near Thighs as soft as Nerf is</p>
<p>Licentiousness may boot a Moral Compass in the But<br />
And feet that tap the Devil&#8217;s Rhythm BURN, I tell you what<br />
Need Less to Say, and More to Seize, of Fool and Tune and Thighs<br />
Down Primrose Paths with Fox and Kit to knot our Real Eyes.</p>
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