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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-day-17-capturing-the-quiet/comment-page-1/#comment-222328</link>
		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Apr 2009 15:01:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i do not own these street
the streets own me
as i walk through indignation
i anticipate my fate in denial
of my true identity to discover
a morbid thrust of stability
demeans reason</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i do not own these street<br />
the streets own me<br />
as i walk through indignation<br />
i anticipate my fate in denial<br />
of my true identity to discover<br />
a morbid thrust of stability<br />
demeans reason</p>
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		<title>By: aperson</title>
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		<dc:creator>aperson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 19:51:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Loud
       Bright, melodious
     Rising, calling, filling
Chimes, resonance … Stillness, hush
   Calming, comforting, stirring
          Dark, peaceful
             quiet</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Loud<br />
       Bright, melodious<br />
     Rising, calling, filling<br />
Chimes, resonance … Stillness, hush<br />
   Calming, comforting, stirring<br />
          Dark, peaceful<br />
             quiet</p>
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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-day-17-capturing-the-quiet/comment-page-1/#comment-220527</link>
		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Oct 2008 22:05:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i do not like quiet
my thoughts race of suicide
it is my inabilit to coceive thoughts
process, progress denial in quiet
i lie still mortified in fustration
i pop pills to inflict pain
so my body cries pain 
the pain that subsides in memory of being hurt
i lie quiet still till death becomes me inside
quiet i hear voices chanting in my mind
at my moment of peace i lie still quiet
a moment of silence i drift in dreams
of being far off not here in paradise
i lie still quiet quiet i lie still</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i do not like quiet<br />
my thoughts race of suicide<br />
it is my inabilit to coceive thoughts<br />
process, progress denial in quiet<br />
i lie still mortified in fustration<br />
i pop pills to inflict pain<br />
so my body cries pain<br />
the pain that subsides in memory of being hurt<br />
i lie quiet still till death becomes me inside<br />
quiet i hear voices chanting in my mind<br />
at my moment of peace i lie still quiet<br />
a moment of silence i drift in dreams<br />
of being far off not here in paradise<br />
i lie still quiet quiet i lie still</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Sep 2008 02:24:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good poems everyone. It looks like this subject worked out pretty well.

@ Tim

It is good to see you here my friend. It&#039;s good knowin&#039; you&#039;re out there. Takin&#039; &#039;er easy for all us sinners.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good poems everyone. It looks like this subject worked out pretty well.</p>
<p>@ Tim</p>
<p>It is good to see you here my friend. It&#8217;s good knowin&#8217; you&#8217;re out there. Takin&#8217; &#8216;er easy for all us sinners.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-day-17-capturing-the-quiet/comment-page-1/#comment-219818</link>
		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Sep 2008 02:20:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Having a Fit

She circles her hips along on the platform
And the hoops on the screen swing around
The synthetic music scales to the action
Rising and falling in motion with the circles
As the air whirls gently around her
The counter ambulates upwards past
Three hundred and heading to four
I laugh at her rotating butt but she doesn’t hear
She is intent on victory and the record
And I am content to watch her quietly</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Having a Fit</p>
<p>She circles her hips along on the platform<br />
And the hoops on the screen swing around<br />
The synthetic music scales to the action<br />
Rising and falling in motion with the circles<br />
As the air whirls gently around her<br />
The counter ambulates upwards past<br />
Three hundred and heading to four<br />
I laugh at her rotating butt but she doesn’t hear<br />
She is intent on victory and the record<br />
And I am content to watch her quietly</p>
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		<title>By: PD30 Day 23: Ways to find Inspiration : PoeWar.com Writer&#8217;s Resource Center</title>
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		<dc:creator>PD30 Day 23: Ways to find Inspiration : PoeWar.com Writer&#8217;s Resource Center</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 06:56:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I&#8217;ve already written about the benefits of mediation. A simple one is to sit staring at a candle. Just focus on the [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Maria Rutherford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maria Rutherford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 11:41:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>POEM

They said - Write a poem that ends with “quiet”
but they didn’t tell me what kind of quiet
is it the darkness of dawn, the now dimming sound of   
the garbage truck as it pulls back     
the plang, plang of metal slamming bin-receding

is it the quiet of my children  who tiptoe at the edge of their 
netherworld, as they lay in the benevolent sunlight – books 
and pink castles spread around them. 

maybe it’s the quiet that I take 
when I swallow 
my own sound. Stiffle and stuff     
the claw footed demon-  shush, shush now 
–wouldn’t want to wake it.

Or is it the quiet of poetry itself
- the silent shadow slips under your door,  
hand now over your mouth-pulling you 
to the back alley where it’s truths are written.

- revelations that are anything but quiet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>POEM</p>
<p>They said &#8211; Write a poem that ends with “quiet”<br />
but they didn’t tell me what kind of quiet<br />
is it the darkness of dawn, the now dimming sound of<br />
the garbage truck as it pulls back<br />
the plang, plang of metal slamming bin-receding</p>
<p>is it the quiet of my children  who tiptoe at the edge of their<br />
netherworld, as they lay in the benevolent sunlight – books<br />
and pink castles spread around them. </p>
<p>maybe it’s the quiet that I take<br />
when I swallow<br />
my own sound. Stiffle and stuff<br />
the claw footed demon-  shush, shush now<br />
–wouldn’t want to wake it.</p>
<p>Or is it the quiet of poetry itself<br />
- the silent shadow slips under your door,<br />
hand now over your mouth-pulling you<br />
to the back alley where it’s truths are written.</p>
<p>- revelations that are anything but quiet.</p>
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		<title>By: Ajith Edassery</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ajith Edassery</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 07:03:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice poems :) this is getting interesting though I am not a poem freak, nor can I write poems myself.

@John, thanks for the simple meditations link. The other option is practicing Yoga (if under the right instructor) to fight burnout, keep young and optimize your energy levels. I guess, Yoga is getting accepted well in the west these days...

Cheers and awaiting more poems...
Ajith

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice poems <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  this is getting interesting though I am not a poem freak, nor can I write poems myself.</p>
<p>@John, thanks for the simple meditations link. The other option is practicing Yoga (if under the right instructor) to fight burnout, keep young and optimize your energy levels. I guess, Yoga is getting accepted well in the west these days&#8230;</p>
<p>Cheers and awaiting more poems&#8230;<br />
Ajith</p>
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		<title>By: Maryellen Grady</title>
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		<dc:creator>Maryellen Grady</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Sep 2008 19:52:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Summer Hell

Out my window the weather is loud
I hear the mother, the father
Bawling at the numberless children
And the kids howling, whooping.

Good weather means no end in sight.
I turn on music that drowns nothing.
The kids call each other assholes
The father threatens, the mother shrieks.

My nerves are taut, my breathing labored.
I try to meditate and hear more screeching.
Later the swing set&#039;s rust is loudly groaning.
I close my book, not marking the page.

It seems an unfair act of the universe
For one who lives alone so quietly.
I speak to no one, disturb no one.
Why me? I ask of no one.

Now it is fall and they are all gone.
The yard yawns brownish and empty.
The swing set is still and vacant.
No one screams.  No one cries.  Quiet.

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Summer Hell</p>
<p>Out my window the weather is loud<br />
I hear the mother, the father<br />
Bawling at the numberless children<br />
And the kids howling, whooping.</p>
<p>Good weather means no end in sight.<br />
I turn on music that drowns nothing.<br />
The kids call each other assholes<br />
The father threatens, the mother shrieks.</p>
<p>My nerves are taut, my breathing labored.<br />
I try to meditate and hear more screeching.<br />
Later the swing set&#8217;s rust is loudly groaning.<br />
I close my book, not marking the page.</p>
<p>It seems an unfair act of the universe<br />
For one who lives alone so quietly.<br />
I speak to no one, disturb no one.<br />
Why me? I ask of no one.</p>
<p>Now it is fall and they are all gone.<br />
The yard yawns brownish and empty.<br />
The swing set is still and vacant.<br />
No one screams.  No one cries.  Quiet.</p>
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		<title>By: Tim Keene</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tim Keene</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Sep 2008 18:51:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Ones:
I fight the mad
voices in my head,
the angry voices
on the street,
the thousand shoulds
coursing through the day
Hoping for that moment
my radio turns to quiet</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Ones:<br />
I fight the mad<br />
voices in my head,<br />
the angry voices<br />
on the street,<br />
the thousand shoulds<br />
coursing through the day<br />
Hoping for that moment<br />
my radio turns to quiet</p>
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