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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-220513</link>
		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Oct 2008 20:39:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>a woman has a purpose
like the company she keeps
a woman has needs
like the flowery deeds
a woman keeps her ground
like supply and demand
a women speaks her peace
like a woman has needs
a woman can be bold, generous or nice
behold the woman who asks for advice
a woman has a purpose
with the compony she keeps</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>a woman has a purpose<br />
like the company she keeps<br />
a woman has needs<br />
like the flowery deeds<br />
a woman keeps her ground<br />
like supply and demand<br />
a women speaks her peace<br />
like a woman has needs<br />
a woman can be bold, generous or nice<br />
behold the woman who asks for advice<br />
a woman has a purpose<br />
with the compony she keeps</p>
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		<title>By: Gary Bowers</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-219896</link>
		<dc:creator>Gary Bowers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Sep 2008 19:13:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Constantinople, Unconsidered

Constantinople constantly contemplates coolness
Restraints ennoble Flagrantly fouled April-Foolness;
Constern da Nation: Achingly Pass da free Jewelness.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Constantinople, Unconsidered</p>
<p>Constantinople constantly contemplates coolness<br />
Restraints ennoble Flagrantly fouled April-Foolness;<br />
Constern da Nation: Achingly Pass da free Jewelness.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-219807</link>
		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:21:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Rosemary

No belly required!</description>
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<p>No belly required!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-219411</link>
		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 10:25:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just realised I forgot about &quot;belly&quot;. Never mind, Sapphic metre was quite challenge enough!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Thinkin&#039; Trim Taut Terrific: 2&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just realised I forgot about &#8220;belly&#8221;. Never mind, Sapphic metre was quite challenge enough!</p>
<p>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..<a href="http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html" rel="nofollow">Thinkin&#8217; Trim Taut Terrific: 2</a></p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-219410</link>
		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 10:15:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ John  

This was purely fictional!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Thinkin&#039; Trim Taut Terrific: 2&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ John  </p>
<p>This was purely fictional!</p>
<p>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..<a href="http://rosemary-nissen-wade.blogspot.com/2008/09/thinkin-trim-taut-terrific-2.html" rel="nofollow">Thinkin&#8217; Trim Taut Terrific: 2</a></p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 06:54:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Rianon

Welcome back

@ Kimberlee

Lonely lance.... what does that mean?

@ Sheer

False modesty is one of my most endearing traits.

@ Rosemary

Do people still part?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Rianon</p>
<p>Welcome back</p>
<p>@ Kimberlee</p>
<p>Lonely lance&#8230;. what does that mean?</p>
<p>@ Sheer</p>
<p>False modesty is one of my most endearing traits.</p>
<p>@ Rosemary</p>
<p>Do people still part?</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Sep 2008 06:50:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dietary Fiber

Peanut butter without sugar
Swallowed down with diet soda
Green beans black beans red beans pinto
Turkey chicken red meat lean though

I eat I eat I eat I eat
Not sweet not bread but beans and meat
White carbs bad carbs slow carbs good carbs

Each day lasts a little longer
Lifting weights to make me stronger
Walking through the half-baked desert
Sweating off the excess belly

I sweat I sweat I sweat I sweat
To far from the end to see it
Pushing to be less than just me</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dietary Fiber</p>
<p>Peanut butter without sugar<br />
Swallowed down with diet soda<br />
Green beans black beans red beans pinto<br />
Turkey chicken red meat lean though</p>
<p>I eat I eat I eat I eat<br />
Not sweet not bread but beans and meat<br />
White carbs bad carbs slow carbs good carbs</p>
<p>Each day lasts a little longer<br />
Lifting weights to make me stronger<br />
Walking through the half-baked desert<br />
Sweating off the excess belly</p>
<p>I sweat I sweat I sweat I sweat<br />
To far from the end to see it<br />
Pushing to be less than just me</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Sep 2008 14:39:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rianon - yay! how ya been?

I&#039;m posting in both places for the most part - AND on my blog.

Last year the Cerebral Mum responded to this prompt with a beautiful piece in Sapphic metre. Mine is by no means so beautiful, but that&#039;s what I&#039;ve attempted this time.


Departure

Anyway I, missing the boat, did not drown
thrashing wildly, nor did I turn in anger
striding up the pier and away. I only
waved as if calmly.

Spring is now beginning to rain on all things,
wetting even oceans and rivers, lakes too.
Only I’m not adding to all this water;
I am not crying.

You can sail away on your ship to elsewhere.
You can leave today or (I can’t remember)
was it really yesterday when we parted?
See – I forget now!

When the years are thundering slowly, heartbeats
drumming heavy down throughout time, through my time,
surely no pulse echoes to your blood rhythm,
nor will I dream you.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://passionatecrone.blogspot.com/2008/09/lsty-wedsnesdaysprompt-from-poetic.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;A poem about finding something&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rianon &#8211; yay! how ya been?</p>
<p>I&#8217;m posting in both places for the most part &#8211; AND on my blog.</p>
<p>Last year the Cerebral Mum responded to this prompt with a beautiful piece in Sapphic metre. Mine is by no means so beautiful, but that&#8217;s what I&#8217;ve attempted this time.</p>
<p>Departure</p>
<p>Anyway I, missing the boat, did not drown<br />
thrashing wildly, nor did I turn in anger<br />
striding up the pier and away. I only<br />
waved as if calmly.</p>
<p>Spring is now beginning to rain on all things,<br />
wetting even oceans and rivers, lakes too.<br />
Only I’m not adding to all this water;<br />
I am not crying.</p>
<p>You can sail away on your ship to elsewhere.<br />
You can leave today or (I can’t remember)<br />
was it really yesterday when we parted?<br />
See – I forget now!</p>
<p>When the years are thundering slowly, heartbeats<br />
drumming heavy down throughout time, through my time,<br />
surely no pulse echoes to your blood rhythm,<br />
nor will I dream you.</p>
<p>Rosemary Nissen-Wade (aka SnakyPoet)s last blog post..<a href="http://passionatecrone.blogspot.com/2008/09/lsty-wedsnesdaysprompt-from-poetic.html" rel="nofollow">A poem about finding something</a></p>
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		<title>By: Sheer</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/pd30-a-review-of-meter/comment-page-1/#comment-219314</link>
		<dc:creator>Sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Sep 2008 10:55:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ James: smart wife

@ John: such modesty, but at least you&#039;re useful for something. =)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ James: smart wife</p>
<p>@ John: such modesty, but at least you&#8217;re useful for something. =)</p>
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		<title>By: Zoë</title>
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		<dc:creator>Zoë</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Sep 2008 09:41:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John,

Can you send me the details for the private forum? 
zoe [at] zoewesthof [dot] com

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John,</p>
<p>Can you send me the details for the private forum?<br />
zoe [at] zoewesthof [dot] com</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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