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	<title>Comments on: Get Rid of Ugly Wordiness: How to Cut Your Novel Down to Size</title>
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		<title>By: LIllie Ammann</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/get-rid-of-ugly-wordiness-how-to-cut-your-novel-down-to-size/comment-page-2/#comment-222565</link>
		<dc:creator>LIllie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 14:30:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Trev,

You were fortunate to get such good feedback from a friend when you were starting out.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;LIllie Ammanns last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://lillieammann.com/2009/05/11/thanks-to-april-commenters/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Thanks to April Commenters&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Trev,</p>
<p>You were fortunate to get such good feedback from a friend when you were starting out.</p>
<p><abbr><em>LIllie Ammanns last blog post..<a href="http://lillieammann.com/2009/05/11/thanks-to-april-commenters/" rel="nofollow">Thanks to April Commenters</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Trev</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trev</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 May 2009 14:19:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thankfully, I learned this lesson early from a friend who critiqued my work. Once I started thinking in the active voice, writing became much more fluid and just plain felt better.

As you pointed out, objective, informative, and kind feedback is the key

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Trevs last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://trevormcpherson.info/2009/05/11/is-the-future-becoming-extinct/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Is the future becoming extinct?&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thankfully, I learned this lesson early from a friend who critiqued my work. Once I started thinking in the active voice, writing became much more fluid and just plain felt better.</p>
<p>As you pointed out, objective, informative, and kind feedback is the key</p>
<p><abbr><em>Trevs last blog post..<a href="http://trevormcpherson.info/2009/05/11/is-the-future-becoming-extinct/" rel="nofollow">Is the future becoming extinct?</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Lillie Ammann</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/get-rid-of-ugly-wordiness-how-to-cut-your-novel-down-to-size/comment-page-2/#comment-222497</link>
		<dc:creator>Lillie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 19:09:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HemRaj,

You&#039;re right that we need to cut out unneeded words in both fiction and nonfiction. Though this article was focused on fiction, it applies equally to nonfiction.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Lillie Ammanns last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://lillieammann.com/2009/05/01/memoir-and-family-history-part-6-publishing-and-distribution/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Memoir and Family History: Part 6—Publishing and Distribution&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HemRaj,</p>
<p>You&#8217;re right that we need to cut out unneeded words in both fiction and nonfiction. Though this article was focused on fiction, it applies equally to nonfiction.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Lillie Ammanns last blog post..<a href="http://lillieammann.com/2009/05/01/memoir-and-family-history-part-6-publishing-and-distribution/" rel="nofollow">Memoir and Family History: Part 6—Publishing and Distribution</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: HemRaj Singh</title>
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		<dc:creator>HemRaj Singh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 11:51:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Very practical advice. Good writing is about cutting out the irrelevant and the repetitive. And this applies to  fiction and non-fiction both in equal measure.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;HemRaj Singhs last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://hemrajsingh.wordpress.com/2009/04/28/ghajini-can-sanjay-singhania-be-convicted/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Ghajini: Can Sanjay Singhania be convicted?&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very practical advice. Good writing is about cutting out the irrelevant and the repetitive. And this applies to  fiction and non-fiction both in equal measure.</p>
<p><abbr><em>HemRaj Singhs last blog post..<a href="http://hemrajsingh.wordpress.com/2009/04/28/ghajini-can-sanjay-singhania-be-convicted/" rel="nofollow">Ghajini: Can Sanjay Singhania be convicted?</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Lillie Ammann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lillie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 16:16:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gabriel,

It is always surprising how much we can cut out, isn&#039;t it? And it&#039;s always easier to cut someone else&#039;s work than it is our own.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Lillie Ammanns last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://lillieammann.com/2009/02/09/building-your-writer-platform-online/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Guest Post: Building Your Writer Platform Online by Jennifer Mattern&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gabriel,</p>
<p>It is always surprising how much we can cut out, isn&#8217;t it? And it&#8217;s always easier to cut someone else&#8217;s work than it is our own.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Lillie Ammanns last blog post..<a href="http://lillieammann.com/2009/02/09/building-your-writer-platform-online/" rel="nofollow">Guest Post: Building Your Writer Platform Online by Jennifer Mattern</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Gabriel Gadfly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gabriel Gadfly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Feb 2009 18:27:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent advice. I think it&#039;s funny going back after I&#039;ve written something, and seeing what I can chop out.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Gabriel Gadflys last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.gabrielgadfly.com/book-reviews/the-subtle-knife-by-philip-pullman/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The Subtle Knife by Philip Pullman&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;&lt;/em&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent advice. I think it&#8217;s funny going back after I&#8217;ve written something, and seeing what I can chop out.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Gabriel Gadflys last blog post..<a href="http://www.gabrielgadfly.com/book-reviews/the-subtle-knife-by-philip-pullman/" rel="nofollow">The Subtle Knife by Philip Pullman</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Lillie Ammann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lillie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Sep 2008 06:29:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You must have a lovely wife with such a lovely name. :-)

I took a novel writing class one time where the instructor said over and over again somthing that made a huge impression on me: the first draft is always &quot;pure green dreck&quot; but you have to write the dreck before you can turn it into something good.

I know many people who want to be writers but who never succeed because they give up when their first attempts are less than stellar. Accept the fact that the first draft—and maybe the second and third and fourth—will probably be awful, but you need to go through that stage.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You must have a lovely wife with such a lovely name. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I took a novel writing class one time where the instructor said over and over again somthing that made a huge impression on me: the first draft is always &#8220;pure green dreck&#8221; but you have to write the dreck before you can turn it into something good.</p>
<p>I know many people who want to be writers but who never succeed because they give up when their first attempts are less than stellar. Accept the fact that the first draft—and maybe the second and third and fourth—will probably be awful, but you need to go through that stage.</p>
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		<title>By: Paranormal</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paranormal</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Sep 2008 06:15:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have been looking to write short children s books for about a year now and never thought I had the talent to do so, I would write 6 pages and throw it away, then do it again and again. This article made me really think, If I put the pages I throw away together, then I might just have something.

Thanks for the inspiration.

P.S.) My wife&#039;s name is Lillie

Paranormals last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.paranormalinsight.com/n-georgia-bigfoot-was-a-hoax/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;N. Georgia Bigfoot was a hoax.&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have been looking to write short children s books for about a year now and never thought I had the talent to do so, I would write 6 pages and throw it away, then do it again and again. This article made me really think, If I put the pages I throw away together, then I might just have something.</p>
<p>Thanks for the inspiration.</p>
<p>P.S.) My wife&#8217;s name is Lillie</p>
<p>Paranormals last blog post..<a href="http://www.paranormalinsight.com/n-georgia-bigfoot-was-a-hoax/" rel="nofollow">N. Georgia Bigfoot was a hoax.</a></p>
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		<title>By: Lillie Ammann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lillie Ammann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2008 23:07:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re right that the first draft is often wordy, although some writers go to the other extreme and write only a bare skeleton on the first draft.

Repetition is an important issue—some repetition can be effective but too much does reflect badly on our writing.  That would be an interesting topic for another post.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re right that the first draft is often wordy, although some writers go to the other extreme and write only a bare skeleton on the first draft.</p>
<p>Repetition is an important issue—some repetition can be effective but too much does reflect badly on our writing.  That would be an interesting topic for another post.</p>
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		<title>By: Free Fitness Tips</title>
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		<dc:creator>Free Fitness Tips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Sep 2008 20:07:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When you write out something, or some novel, because of ideas flowing by, it&#039;s bound to get big. When a revision is done, it is cut down to a shorter limit. Your posts have got some excellent points on how do we cut those effectively, without effecting the content in any manner. 

I would like to reflect on how effectively do we use repetition into our writings. That leaves a bad impression, as well as lengthen the content.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When you write out something, or some novel, because of ideas flowing by, it&#8217;s bound to get big. When a revision is done, it is cut down to a shorter limit. Your posts have got some excellent points on how do we cut those effectively, without effecting the content in any manner. </p>
<p>I would like to reflect on how effectively do we use repetition into our writings. That leaves a bad impression, as well as lengthen the content.</p>
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