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	<title>Comments on: Game 8: #2 Seed Writing White Papers Versus #7 Seed The Writing Journey</title>
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		<title>By: 09/23/2008 Writing Jobs and Links : PoeWar.com Writer&#8217;s Resource Center</title>
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		<dc:creator>09/23/2008 Writing Jobs and Links : PoeWar.com Writer&#8217;s Resource Center</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 05:50:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] didn&#8217;t make the list. I assume it&#8217;s payback for Michael&#8217;s first round loss in my competition. In my defense though, the blog that beat him IS on his list. Of course, maybe I just wasn&#8217;t [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] didn&#8217;t make the list. I assume it&#8217;s payback for Michael&#8217;s first round loss in my competition. In my defense though, the blog that beat him IS on his list. Of course, maybe I just wasn&#8217;t [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Quiet Rebel Writer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Quiet Rebel Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Apr 2008 03:35:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another exciting battle, John. What I really love about the Madness is getting to really explore other writing blogs on an in-depth basis. 

I&#039;m prepping myself for tomorrow&#039;s matchup, me vs. John August. I&#039;m stretching out, getting a good sleep, no sex (weakens the knees), and drinking some protein shakes. Now it&#039;s all mental... :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another exciting battle, John. What I really love about the Madness is getting to really explore other writing blogs on an in-depth basis. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m prepping myself for tomorrow&#8217;s matchup, me vs. John August. I&#8217;m stretching out, getting a good sleep, no sex (weakens the knees), and drinking some protein shakes. Now it&#8217;s all mental&#8230; <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Bob Younce at WJ</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bob Younce at WJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Apr 2008 01:35:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ John -  I have no intention of getting comfortable.  In fact, my assumption is that I&#039;ve got a target on my back, for now.  I&#039;m tickled to still be in it.

@ Wrangler - I&#039;m very interested in what you&#039;re saying.  Can you help me out some?  I&#039;d love to be able to improve in the areas you mention.  

Specifically, what do you mean by more &quot;meat&quot; in the posts?  Are you thinking about practical advice (do x, then y, then z) or something along those lines?

Also, in terms of navigation/cleanliness, what can I improve?  I&#039;ve just switched themes in the last few weeks, and I&#039;m always struggling with sidebar arrangement and whatnot.

I&#039;m very open to suggestions.  I&#039;m relatively new to the blogging game, and would appreciate the constructive criticism, if you&#039;ve got the time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ John &#8211;  I have no intention of getting comfortable.  In fact, my assumption is that I&#8217;ve got a target on my back, for now.  I&#8217;m tickled to still be in it.</p>
<p>@ Wrangler &#8211; I&#8217;m very interested in what you&#8217;re saying.  Can you help me out some?  I&#8217;d love to be able to improve in the areas you mention.  </p>
<p>Specifically, what do you mean by more &#8220;meat&#8221; in the posts?  Are you thinking about practical advice (do x, then y, then z) or something along those lines?</p>
<p>Also, in terms of navigation/cleanliness, what can I improve?  I&#8217;ve just switched themes in the last few weeks, and I&#8217;m always struggling with sidebar arrangement and whatnot.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m very open to suggestions.  I&#8217;m relatively new to the blogging game, and would appreciate the constructive criticism, if you&#8217;ve got the time.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 22:22:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wrangler,

Everyone should feel free to second guess the ref. 

Many of my point deductions could be questioned. A good archive page would have increased the usability score and the archive score. Perhaps I value those too highly, but I do think that they are important, especially when you go looking for the &quot;meat per post&quot;. 

I also happened to run into a situation where his last five posts weren&#039;t particularly on topic. Had I reviewed the blog at another time, those points could have swung the contest much closer. 

Right there you find four of the points that WWP didn&#039;t get. It would also be easy to argue that I was overly generous in my points to TWJ. A couple of the categories were between a two and a three, and I ended up giving TWJ the higher score both times. There, in a nutshell, is the margin of victory.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wrangler,</p>
<p>Everyone should feel free to second guess the ref. </p>
<p>Many of my point deductions could be questioned. A good archive page would have increased the usability score and the archive score. Perhaps I value those too highly, but I do think that they are important, especially when you go looking for the &#8220;meat per post&#8221;. </p>
<p>I also happened to run into a situation where his last five posts weren&#8217;t particularly on topic. Had I reviewed the blog at another time, those points could have swung the contest much closer. </p>
<p>Right there you find four of the points that WWP didn&#8217;t get. It would also be easy to argue that I was overly generous in my points to TWJ. A couple of the categories were between a two and a three, and I ended up giving TWJ the higher score both times. There, in a nutshell, is the margin of victory.</p>
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		<title>By: The Word Wrangler</title>
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		<dc:creator>The Word Wrangler</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 22:05:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stelzner&#039;s blog content delivers more meat per post than does Bob&#039;s. Also, I find Stelzner&#039;s site to be cleaner and easier to navigate. Both blogs are good, but Stelzner definitely comes out the clear winner.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stelzner&#8217;s blog content delivers more meat per post than does Bob&#8217;s. Also, I find Stelzner&#8217;s site to be cleaner and easier to navigate. Both blogs are good, but Stelzner definitely comes out the clear winner.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 21:49:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael,

Thank you for not throwing tomatoes at me.

Bob,

It was a well-fought victory. You matched up very well in all the categories. Sooner or later, someone was going to hit all the right buttons. When I run the next round, some of the categories will change. I&#039;m keeping mum on which ones, but nobody should get too comfortable.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael,</p>
<p>Thank you for not throwing tomatoes at me.</p>
<p>Bob,</p>
<p>It was a well-fought victory. You matched up very well in all the categories. Sooner or later, someone was going to hit all the right buttons. When I run the next round, some of the categories will change. I&#8217;m keeping mum on which ones, but nobody should get too comfortable.</p>
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		<title>By: Bob Younce at WJ</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bob Younce at WJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 20:11:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you, Michael.  I felt like it was a much closer match-up, myself.  Surprised the hell out of me, actually.

Thanks for your kind words, John, and for the pass on the video.  That was an experiment that didn&#039;t go as well as I wanted it to, but I&#039;m leaving it up as a reminder of what NOT to do... from graininess to sound quality to my script-less ramble, you should be glad your sound was off! :)

You&#039;re right about my pics, too.  My wife&#039;s pointed it out to me before.  I often wind up choosing a picture after a thoroughly irrational stream of consciousness... I&#039;ll work on it.  Great feedback. 

As to the masthead...  what can I say?  I&#039;m a writer, not a graphic artist! LOL.  My wife&#039;s been building me a new one this morning.  I like the way it looks, but I&#039;m going to wait until MWP&#039;s Sunday Drive-by before I experiment with putting that up.  Should be up before round 2.

Apologies for the overuse of ellipses, everyone.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you, Michael.  I felt like it was a much closer match-up, myself.  Surprised the hell out of me, actually.</p>
<p>Thanks for your kind words, John, and for the pass on the video.  That was an experiment that didn&#8217;t go as well as I wanted it to, but I&#8217;m leaving it up as a reminder of what NOT to do&#8230; from graininess to sound quality to my script-less ramble, you should be glad your sound was off! <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>You&#8217;re right about my pics, too.  My wife&#8217;s pointed it out to me before.  I often wind up choosing a picture after a thoroughly irrational stream of consciousness&#8230; I&#8217;ll work on it.  Great feedback. </p>
<p>As to the masthead&#8230;  what can I say?  I&#8217;m a writer, not a graphic artist! LOL.  My wife&#8217;s been building me a new one this morning.  I like the way it looks, but I&#8217;m going to wait until MWP&#8217;s Sunday Drive-by before I experiment with putting that up.  Should be up before round 2.</p>
<p>Apologies for the overuse of ellipses, everyone.</p>
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		<title>By: Michael Stelzner</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael Stelzner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Apr 2008 18:20:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your thoughtful analysis of my blog!

Hats off to Bob :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your thoughtful analysis of my blog!</p>
<p>Hats off to Bob <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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