Comments on: Extended Stay http://www.poewar.com/extended-stay/ Writing Career Center Sat, 20 Mar 2010 01:51:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade http://www.poewar.com/extended-stay/comment-page-1/#comment-223347 Rosemary Nissen-Wade Sun, 11 Oct 2009 05:28:29 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=6833#comment-223347 A wonderful book, John; a most satisfying read. You already know I think the poems in the first section are powerful and moving. I love Section 2 as well. I hope it does well; will be happy to tweet and Stumble it and include it in my Goodreads. And I hope there will be many more books! A wonderful book, John; a most satisfying read. You already know I think the poems in the first section are powerful and moving. I love Section 2 as well.

I hope it does well; will be happy to tweet and Stumble it and include it in my Goodreads. And I hope there will be many more books!

]]> By: J.C. Hewitt http://www.poewar.com/extended-stay/comment-page-1/#comment-223256 J.C. Hewitt Sat, 03 Oct 2009 19:52:32 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=6833#comment-223256 Thank you Joy. I have made the change, along with a few others people sent in. MUCH APPRECIATED! Thank you Joy. I have made the change, along with a few others people sent in. MUCH APPRECIATED!

]]> By: Joy http://www.poewar.com/extended-stay/comment-page-1/#comment-223237 Joy Sat, 03 Oct 2009 01:59:59 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/?p=6833#comment-223237 I'm not sure if it is an error, but on page 4 (Driving Down), line 11 (I think), there is this line 'It my mind it was already over'. Is the first 'it' supposed to be 'in'? (By the way, I love what little I've read so far.) I’m not sure if it is an error, but on page 4 (Driving Down), line 11 (I think), there is this line ‘It my mind it was already over’. Is the first ‘it’ supposed to be ‘in’? (By the way, I love what little I’ve read so far.)

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