Fictional Characters Need Adversity to Thrive

Creating fictional characters requires adversity, There are few happy stories in the world. There are happy endings. There are happy characters. Few stories revolve around the good things that happen to people. If they do, there is a downside to the “good things” that happen to them.

Stories are about adversity and conflict. How characters deal with adversity can create comedy, drama, romance, action, and mystery. Without adversity, there is no story to tell.

Creating Fictional Characters Using Physical Adversity

Physical adversity is death, injury, illness and threat. These are the most adverse situations fictional characters (and real people) face. Death or injury can happen to a fictional character or to someone close to them. Death is a universal theme. It dates back to the first stories ever told. The Epic of Gilgamesh, The Iliad, and The Bible all contain people dealing with death.

Creating Fictional Characters Using Miscommunication and Deception

This is a classic plot complication. One fictional character misunderstands another fictional character or circumstance. All of the characters must deal with the consequences. Miscommunication is a classic Shakespearean theme. Romeo and Juliet die due to miscommunication. King Lear disowns his daughter because of miscommunication. MacBeth believes he is invulnerable due to miscommunication.

Deception is similar to miscommunication, but it involves deliberate lies. While the three witches in MacBeth technically tell MacBeth the truth at all times, Richard III uses both miscommunication and outright lies in his rise to the throne. He does so with malicious glee. He destroys the lives around him. Eventually he is destroyed by his own deceptions.

Creating fictional characters using miscommunication and deception is good, but be careful, you don’t want your characters to seem like idiots. You also don’t want a plot that could easily be resolved if not for a simple miscommunication.

Creating Fictional Characters Using Displacement

Fictional CharactersDisplacement is another popular adversity that fictional characters face. Characters enter a situation in which they are uncomfortable or at odds. This can be as fanciful as Alice wandering through Wonderland. It can be as dramatic as Trisha McFarland lost in the New England forest in Stephen King’s The Girl who Loved Tom Gordon. It can also be as simple as sending an introvert to a party. It is important to note that the displacement works both ways. The focus of a story doesn’t have to be the displaced character. The story can be about the other character’s reactions to the disruption to their lives by the displaced character.

Creating Fictional Characters Using Desire

Every good fictional character has unfulfilled wants and needs. Sometimes they are stated and sometimes they are unstated. One of the classic stories of unfulfilled desire is Dashiell Hammett’s The Maltese Falcon, in which most of the characters are consumed by the desire to own an almost mythical piece of art. Unfulfilled desire is as key to action novels as it is romance novels. The witches’ cryptic messages ignite MacBeth and Lady Macbeth’s desire for power, but it is their desire that dooms them to destruction.

Creating Fictional Characters Using Relationships

Creating fictional characters requires conflict in relationships. Relationship conflicts run a wide spectrum, and are not limited to human relationships. They can extend to animals, nature and environment. Relationship adversity is often the result of the previous adversities, but it is worth a separate category because this is where most resolutions are centered. A fictional character must change the relationship, be changed (or even destroyed) by the relationship, accept the relationship or be doomed to fight the relationship (such as in the Jean Paul Sartre’s No Exit).

Life without Conflict is Boring

There are many other conflicts and types of adversity that a character can run into, but the adversity itself is not the key component of a story. The key is in how your fictional characters react to and deal with adversity. It is difficult for the reader to care whether or not the adversity is overcome unless they care about the characters. It is equally difficult to care about fictional characters that have no complications in their life.

The Pleasantville Dilemma

A perfect example of this phenomenon is the movie Pleasantville. In that movie, two characters are transported from their modern life into a fifties era family sitcom in which everything is pleasant and perfect (Displacement). At first, the fictional characters inside the television show have no adversity to deal with. At that point, they are not fully developed characters and their only interest to the audience is the humor of seeing these happy people through the eyes of the two modern, jaded teenagers. The presence of these two outsiders, however, eventually throws this perfect world into chaos. Soon the characters are plagued by injuries, miscommunication, and deception and especially by unfulfilled desires that grow with each new discovery. Adversity turns these people into interesting fictional characters. The mother, the father, and the soda-shop owner become fully realized people and what happens to them matters to the audience. As happy people these characters were a joke, but in the face of adversity they become the heart and soul of the film.

Adversity is a Tool

The key to creating fictional characters is to use adversity as a tool. Use adversity as a tool for character development rather than using the characters merely to further the action. To do this, you must explore your fictional characters. Not only do you need to develop a clear sense of what decisions they would make normally, you must develop how their thinking process changes or fails to change as a result of their actions. If a fictional character makes the same decision two times and it does not work either time, the character has not learned. This does not mean the character has not developed, just that they have failed to change their actions as a result of their circumstances. This is as much of a character trait as a character changing their actions.

A patriotic character may sacrifice themselves for their country more than once, only to be injured or to lose something important to them. They have repeated the same action, but has their reasons changed? The exploration comes in why they choose to make the same sacrifice again, if it did not help the first time. Are they more resigned to their course or do they start to waver? What thoughts lead them to repeat the same action without reward? On the other hand, a patriot might sacrifice the first time and not the second. This is a major change in thinking, and for the people reading or watching the story, the choices must not only be within character, but they must develop the character.

Accomplishing the development of character through adversity is a challenge for even the most experienced writers. The keys to accomplishing this are:

Know your Characters Well

The more time you spend analyzing your fictional characters and deciding what their thinking process is, the better prepared you will be to decide how they will react to the adversities they face.

Decide how you want your fictional characters to change and how you want them to remain unchanged. If you know how you want your character to develop, then you can adjust your plot accordingly. This does not mean that you tailor the plot to the character. If you want the story to be about blowing up a building or developing a vaccine, then that is your plot. What you want to analyze is how your character would go about accomplishing that task, and what obstacles they would face.

Don’t be Afraid to Change the Circumstances

An idea that seemed good in the planning stage may not always work in execution. Sometimes events must happen to develop a plot but in the writing process your characters might have strayed from your original ideas for them. Take the time to work the conflict through. Sometimes the same event can take place if you change one or two minor details in a story. It is simply a matter of being creative.

Mix  Things Up

Some actions are out of character only until a character does it. You may think that your character would act a certain way in a given situation, but sometimes you’ll want to experiment with having them do something else. People are full of contradictions, and they don’t always act the way they think they act. A self-image can be a very deceptive thing.

In the best stories, plot development and character development work together. Rather than sacrificing one to develop the other, each is used to the benefit of the other. It is the proper blending of plot and characters that makes great stories work. When a great story is over, the reader should feel like the distinct way it developed could only have happened with those set of characters, yet they should find that entirely acceptable. While it is OK to think that a character should have dealt with the adversity differently, the reader our audience should not think that that character would have done it differently.

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This article was updated and revised on December 12, 2013.

 

10 thoughts on “Fictional Characters Need Adversity to Thrive

  1. I WAS WONDERING IF YOU COULD TELL US AT LEAST ABOUT WHAT 2
    OF THOSE STORYS SO WE KNOW IN WHAT WE ARE COMPARING.WHAT
    I LIKED ABOUT THIS ARTICLE WAS THAT THEY TOLD YOU EVERY STEP FOR
    BUILDING A CHARACTER AND THEY EVEN PUT SOME EXSAMPLES.I THOUGHT THIS WAS A VERY COOL ARTICLE.IT WAS SO DETAILED AND PERFECT TO
    WRITE A CHARACTER STORY.I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

  2. Do all the characters have to have a desire ?
    why can’t you just change the whole character ?
    If you were to write a storywould you make someone die ?

  3. Hello I would like to know, since today, any teaching is planetary thanks to Internet, why the Anglo-Saxon universities aren’t put to teach matters like “French playwriting”? That would interest me much. That is feasible. Which are the causes? It would be enough to engage of the professors who speak French and to translate the courses, and that would be a source of additional profits All this is a pity well. Regards

  4. I liked John Hewitt’s entry about how stories always have conflicts and adversity.Also how characters deal with adversity and it becomes drama.There is still I something about the word “adversity”.There is physical adeversity and an adversity about emotions.I have a question about the miscommunication and deception article.How is it that miscommunication and deception be alike?I understood the desire article.It explained why a character would start to get desire for something.The displacement didn’t really make sense because the way it described it by saying that characters face was messed up.Well that is what I thought about the articles that I read.
    Sincerly your student,
    Joseph Cruz Garcia ;`)

  5. I am thinking about getting one of my books published in the future.
    It is not, like, 100 chapters…it’s more like, the size of the book
    TWILIGHT…if that makes sense…anyway, have you ever gotten a fiction
    book published? do you know any good publishers? or do I have to go to
    the library and find out for myself?

  6. Rachel,
    There is no substitute for research, but I recommend Amazon, not the Library. Go to Amazon and look for books that are similar to yours. Each book comes with publisher information. Compile a list of all the publishers who seem like a good fit with the work you want to have published. You should then contact these publishers directly and ask them to send you their submission guidelines. Follow their guidelines as closely as you can. Some may not accept your work without an agent or if you haven’t been published before. Forget those publishers for now and concentrate on the ones that will at least consider an unknown, unagented writer.

    Good luck.

    John

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