John Hewitt

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How to write a query letter

Query letters continue to stir debate among writers. While some view them as essential to securing opportunities in publishing, others see them as relics in the age of digital communication. Historically, formal query letters were a staple in the traditional magazine and book markets, but the rise of blogs and digital platforms has shifted submission norms towards more informal approaches. Still, many writers successfully navigate both paths, whether through detailed query letters or more succinct, direct pitches.

Advantages of Writing a Formal Query Letter:

  1. Professionalism: A well-crafted query letter demonstrates your capability and seriousness about the assignment.
  2. Strategic Submission: Blindly submitting complete articles might signal that the piece has been previously rejected or isn’t tailored to the specific publication, possibly diminishing your credibility.
  3. Detail and Research: Detailed queries show preliminary research and readiness to develop the piece further, providing a strong foundation for your pitch.
  4. Stand Out: In a sea of casual emails, a formal query can distinguish you as a more thoughtful and prepared writer.

Disadvantages of Writing a Formal Query Letter:

  1. Time Consumption: Crafting a compelling query letter can be time-intensive, which may not always align with the lower compensation rates of many modern publications.
  2. Speed vs. Formality: Digital publication cycles are rapid, making speed a crucial factor where a formal query might slow you down.
  3. Building Connections Differently: Nowadays, social media and direct interactions at events can often replace the need for formal introductions via a query.

Essentials of a Modern Query Letter:

  • Research the Publication: Understand the publication’s content and audience. Access the writer’s guidelines and familiarize yourself with the editorial staff, avoiding outdated directories like Writer’s Market due to frequent changes in editor roles.
  • Professional Presentation: Ensure your query is free from errors, includes a date, and addresses the editor by their full name, respecting titles when applicable. The letter should look professional, whether it’s a digital document or printed on standard paper.
  • Clarity and Brevity: Present your idea clearly at the beginning of the letter. Be concise but detailed about what your article will cover and propose a suitable length based on the publication’s usual content.
  • Engagement: Make your query engaging and specific, showing why your article fits well within a particular section of the publication.
  • Persuasion: Include relevant writing samples, list credentials or awards, and mention any notable sources that enhance your credibility.
  • Professional Closing: End with a courteous and professional closing, inviting further communication.

What to Avoid:

  • Overselling or underselling your piece.
  • Including irrelevant personal details or comments on previous rejections.
  • Overcomplicating the query with multiple article pitches unless you have an established relationship with the editor.
  • Discussing rights, payments, or personal data prematurely.

Sample Query Structure:

  1. Introduction: Brief introduction to the proposed article and its relevance.
  2. Body: Explanation of the article’s angle, sources, and why it’s a fit for the publication.
  3. Closing: Summary of your qualifications, invitation for further dialogue, and professional sign-off.

Note: It’s vital to adapt your approach based on the publication’s style and the current trends in publishing. As the industry evolves, staying flexible and informed about the preferences of editors and publications can significantly increase your chances of success.

Keeping Up with Industry Changes:

  • Stay Informed: Regularly check the publication’s website and follow their social media to stay updated on any changes in editorial staff or submission guidelines.
  • Adapt Your Strategy: As digital media evolves, so should your approach to queries. For example, if a publication starts preferring pitches through specific platforms (like Submittable), adjust your method accordingly.

Building Relationships with Editors:

  • Engage on Social Media: Follow editors on platforms like Twitter and LinkedIn. Engage with their posts thoughtfully to establish a rapport.
  • Attend Industry Events: Networking at workshops, conferences, and readings can provide direct contact with editors and other influential figures in the industry.
  • Offer Value: When interacting, try to provide value through insightful comments or sharing relevant information, rather than just pushing your pitches.

Utilizing Technology and Social Media:

  • Digital Footprint: Ensure your online presence reflects your professional persona. An up-to-date LinkedIn profile or a personal website showcasing your work can make a positive impression.
  • Direct Contact: Some publications may prefer queries submitted through their social media channels, particularly for more dynamic or time-sensitive content.

Responding to Opportunities:

  • Prompt Responses: If an editor shows interest, respond promptly with the requested materials or additional information.
  • Follow-Up: If you haven’t heard back within the expected timeframe, a polite follow-up email is appropriate. It shows your enthusiasm and keeps your pitch on their radar without being intrusive.

Revising Your Approach Based on Feedback:

  • Learn from Rejections: Use any feedback from editors to refine future queries. If feedback isn’t provided, analyzing the differences in successful queries can offer valuable insights.
  • Iterative Improvement: Continuously refine your approach based on what works and what doesn’t. Adapt your writing style and query format to better meet the expectations of different publications.

Staying Current with Publishing Trends:

  • Industry Publications: Subscribe to trade newsletters and magazines, such as Publishers Weekly or Writer’s Digest, which often cover trends, advice, and updates on publishing standards and expectations.
  • Online Forums and Groups: Participate in online communities like Absolute Write or Reddit’s r/writing where writers share experiences and tips about querying and other aspects of writing and publishing.

Refining Digital Submission Techniques:

  • Electronic Submissions: Familiarize yourself with each publication’s digital submission guidelines. Many now prefer submissions through online portals which streamline the process and make tracking submissions easier.
  • Email Etiquette: When submitting via email, format your query to be easily readable on digital devices. Include a clear subject line, concise body text, and professional signature with your contact information.

Enhancing Your Proposal’s Impact:

  • Subject Line Clarity: For email queries, the subject line should capture the essence of your pitch succinctly and entice the editor to open the email. Something like “Query: [Catchy Title] – [Compelling Angle]” can be effective.
  • Personal Touch: Tailor each query to the specific editor by referencing their recent work or the publication’s recent articles that relate to your pitch. This shows that your proposal isn’t generic but thoughtfully considered for their audience.
  • Visuals and Links: When appropriate, include links to online work or embed small images directly in the email body to provide a quick sample of your work, especially for publications that cater to more visually-oriented content.

Balancing Professionalism and Personality:

  • Personal Branding: Your query should reflect not only a professional tone but also give a sense of your unique voice and style. This can help you stand out in a crowded field.
  • Humor and Creativity: While maintaining professionalism, don’t shy away from showing personality where appropriate. A witty remark or a cleverly written introduction can make your query memorable.

Evaluating Your Success and Adjusting Strategies:

  • Track Responses: Maintain a log of when and where you have sent queries, the responses you receive, and any feedback provided. This data will help you identify patterns and strategies that are working.
  • Adjust Based on Results: Use the insights from your tracking to refine your querying process. If certain approaches or styles seem to resonate more with editors, incorporate these elements more frequently.

Looking Forward:

The art of querying is as much about persistence and adaptability as it is about writing skills. In an era where digital communication dominates, understanding how to effectively communicate your ideas through a query letter or pitch is crucial. Whether navigating traditional publishing avenues or exploring new media platforms, the fundamental principles of clarity, engagement, and professionalism remain key to successful communication with potential publishers.

By continuously honing your approach and staying informed about industry practices, you can enhance your chances of success in the competitive field of writing. Remember, every query sent is an opportunity to learn and improve, paving the way for future achievements in your writing career.

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