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		<title>By: Leigh</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/a-small-sheik-escaped-and-other-editing-exercises-to-energize-your-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-196158</link>
		<dc:creator>Leigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 02:43:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll do my best! Meanwhile, thank you again for allowing me the honor of communicating with your audience through my article and reading and responding to all the others&#039; articles. I had a blast and hope you&#039;ll do it again. And, finally, here&#039;s hoping you got a lot of writing done on your vacation!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll do my best! Meanwhile, thank you again for allowing me the honor of communicating with your audience through my article and reading and responding to all the others&#8217; articles. I had a blast and hope you&#8217;ll do it again. And, finally, here&#8217;s hoping you got a lot of writing done on your vacation!</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 00:34:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>L.A.,

Thank you for contributing your article to the blog this month. I wish you the best of luck keeping that small sheik in line.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>L.A.,</p>
<p>Thank you for contributing your article to the blog this month. I wish you the best of luck keeping that small sheik in line.</p>
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		<title>By: Leigh</title>
		<link>http://www.poewar.com/a-small-sheik-escaped-and-other-editing-exercises-to-energize-your-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-194058</link>
		<dc:creator>Leigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 18 Jun 2008 21:52:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Hana, and thanks for your comment. I&#039;m sometimes afraid that I&#039;m unconsciously duplicating something other writers have done, but reading other authors is necessary, as you suggest, to achieve any success as a writer. I can&#039;t remember who it was--poet Ezra Pound, maybe--who said simply &quot;make it new&quot;!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Hana, and thanks for your comment. I&#8217;m sometimes afraid that I&#8217;m unconsciously duplicating something other writers have done, but reading other authors is necessary, as you suggest, to achieve any success as a writer. I can&#8217;t remember who it was&#8211;poet Ezra Pound, maybe&#8211;who said simply &#8220;make it new&#8221;!</p>
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		<title>By: hana</title>
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		<dc:creator>hana</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Jun 2008 19:34:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a great post! I love this piece of advice: &quot;devour words!&quot;

I&#039;m really shocked when I meet aspiring writers who say &quot;Oh, I don&#039;t have time to read.&quot; Excuse me? It doesn&#039;t matter if you&#039;re reading a magazine or comic book. You should make time to read something. Not just for inspiration but to expand your knowledge base.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a great post! I love this piece of advice: &#8220;devour words!&#8221;</p>
<p>I&#8217;m really shocked when I meet aspiring writers who say &#8220;Oh, I don&#8217;t have time to read.&#8221; Excuse me? It doesn&#8217;t matter if you&#8217;re reading a magazine or comic book. You should make time to read something. Not just for inspiration but to expand your knowledge base.</p>
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		<title>By: Meryl.net &#187; Links: 2008-06-13</title>
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		<dc:creator>Meryl.net &#187; Links: 2008-06-13</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Jun 2008 13:35:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Smitty</title>
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		<dc:creator>Smitty</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jun 2008 18:03:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve kept up with your blog on Zofolit and am glad to see you getting posted on other sites as well. I enjoy your Erma Bombeck style of humor and hope to read more of work soon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve kept up with your blog on Zofolit and am glad to see you getting posted on other sites as well. I enjoy your Erma Bombeck style of humor and hope to read more of work soon.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeanne Dininni</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeanne Dininni</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Jun 2008 00:11:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Leigh,

Your &quot;small sheik&quot; is definitely a classic!

About your editing pet peeve--here&#039;s the paradox:  The very inability to abide such errors as &quot;lightening&quot; for &quot;lightning&quot; is precisely what makes a good editor!  Yet, at the same time, it is so, so true that &lt;i&gt;without&lt;/i&gt; such errors, the editing profession would soon become extinct.

I agree with you that it truly &lt;i&gt;is&lt;/i&gt; an honor to join such a talented group of professionals in contributing to this project!

Regards,
Jeanne</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Leigh,</p>
<p>Your &#8220;small sheik&#8221; is definitely a classic!</p>
<p>About your editing pet peeve&#8211;here&#8217;s the paradox:  The very inability to abide such errors as &#8220;lightening&#8221; for &#8220;lightning&#8221; is precisely what makes a good editor!  Yet, at the same time, it is so, so true that <i>without</i> such errors, the editing profession would soon become extinct.</p>
<p>I agree with you that it truly <i>is</i> an honor to join such a talented group of professionals in contributing to this project!</p>
<p>Regards,<br />
Jeanne</p>
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		<title>By: Leigh</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leigh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Jun 2008 14:03:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you all--ABB, Mary, and Jeanne--for your additional comments. Seldom does a typo present itself as visually as does &quot;a small sheik,&quot; so I knew I had to do something with it (in my own writing) when I first saw it. Plus, it&#039;s just plain hilarious to me. I, too, see a 1-cm tall robed figure scurrying across the page or screen.

For some reason, in the fiction editing I do, I see a lot of confusion of &quot;lightening&quot; with &quot;lightning.&quot; Sometimes, I start to get a bee in my editor&#039;s bonnet about such things, but then I catch myself and think, &quot;hey, if no one ever made a mistake in writing that spell-check didn&#039;t catch, I wouldn&#039;t have a job!&quot; : ) And, beyond that, no one is perfect, so it&#039;s always good to have at least one more pair of eyes on any given manuscript.

Again, it&#039;s been such an honor to be featured on Poe War alongside such excellent and experienced writers (not to mention so many other editors). I can&#039;t wait for the next article/essay/posting!

Leighs last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://zofolit.blogspot.com/2008/06/music-of-words-and-other-matters.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The Music of Words and Other Matters&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you all&#8211;ABB, Mary, and Jeanne&#8211;for your additional comments. Seldom does a typo present itself as visually as does &#8220;a small sheik,&#8221; so I knew I had to do something with it (in my own writing) when I first saw it. Plus, it&#8217;s just plain hilarious to me. I, too, see a 1-cm tall robed figure scurrying across the page or screen.</p>
<p>For some reason, in the fiction editing I do, I see a lot of confusion of &#8220;lightening&#8221; with &#8220;lightning.&#8221; Sometimes, I start to get a bee in my editor&#8217;s bonnet about such things, but then I catch myself and think, &#8220;hey, if no one ever made a mistake in writing that spell-check didn&#8217;t catch, I wouldn&#8217;t have a job!&#8221; : ) And, beyond that, no one is perfect, so it&#8217;s always good to have at least one more pair of eyes on any given manuscript.</p>
<p>Again, it&#8217;s been such an honor to be featured on Poe War alongside such excellent and experienced writers (not to mention so many other editors). I can&#8217;t wait for the next article/essay/posting!</p>
<p>Leighs last blog post..<a href="http://zofolit.blogspot.com/2008/06/music-of-words-and-other-matters.html" rel="nofollow">The Music of Words and Other Matters</a></p>
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		<title>By: Mary Turner</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Turner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jun 2008 23:40:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Leigh,

Kudos to one of a select group of people who display consummate talent in both editing and writing. Your command of the English language and love for the art of expression continue to inspire those of us who appreciate good writing but fail to undertake any creative endeavors of our own.

Mary</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Leigh,</p>
<p>Kudos to one of a select group of people who display consummate talent in both editing and writing. Your command of the English language and love for the art of expression continue to inspire those of us who appreciate good writing but fail to undertake any creative endeavors of our own.</p>
<p>Mary</p>
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		<title>By: ABB</title>
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		<dc:creator>ABB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Jun 2008 18:33:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I loved reading this. I now have visions of a small, and I mean mini, less than 1cm, tall robed figure running across my manuscript saying, &quot;There&#039;s one! Form not From.&quot; Scamper, scamper, &quot;Here&#039;s another! Loose, not lose.&quot; Hilarious. This has set me up for my &#039;big edit&#039; I have planned for the Fall, when I need to go back to a stalled 40,000 manuscript and hack it down, before I get re-writing to get it finished - I am inspired. Go sheik, go!

ABBs last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://amateurbookblogger.blogspot.com/2008/06/road-home-and-inglorious-take-orange.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The Road Home and Inglorious take the Orange&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I loved reading this. I now have visions of a small, and I mean mini, less than 1cm, tall robed figure running across my manuscript saying, &#8220;There&#8217;s one! Form not From.&#8221; Scamper, scamper, &#8220;Here&#8217;s another! Loose, not lose.&#8221; Hilarious. This has set me up for my &#8216;big edit&#8217; I have planned for the Fall, when I need to go back to a stalled 40,000 manuscript and hack it down, before I get re-writing to get it finished &#8211; I am inspired. Go sheik, go!</p>
<p>ABBs last blog post..<a href="http://amateurbookblogger.blogspot.com/2008/06/road-home-and-inglorious-take-orange.html" rel="nofollow">The Road Home and Inglorious take the Orange</a></p>
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