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		<title>By: butterflyzrfree</title>
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		<dc:creator>butterflyzrfree</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 02 May 2009 21:21:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I had joined this group a long time ago and then the leader quit. I was never notified that the group restarted and I do wishe to participate. Please contact me ZHaul! Thanks, butterflyzrfree.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I had joined this group a long time ago and then the leader quit. I was never notified that the group restarted and I do wishe to participate. Please contact me ZHaul! Thanks, butterflyzrfree.</p>
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		<title>By: Akhristin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Akhristin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 30 Oct 2008 23:11:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The whisk of a dragon kite
Battering against the wind
Defining the rule of seradipity
Soaring to deliviate reason
Caught in the moment to retreival
Gravity caught by the winds placid hands
Kite surrendering freedom to express time</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The whisk of a dragon kite<br />
Battering against the wind<br />
Defining the rule of seradipity<br />
Soaring to deliviate reason<br />
Caught in the moment to retreival<br />
Gravity caught by the winds placid hands<br />
Kite surrendering freedom to express time</p>
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		<title>By: Lisa Josie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa Josie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:46:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks John, I appreciate it. I&#039;m not sure how this is supposed to work? Am I supposed to post my new poems, every day?

Incidentally, here is today&#039;s poem.



California fires



You see a house
not a house really
but the picture
of a house

not really the picture
of a house but an image
of a house

The house is burning
the picture is alive
the image cannot burn

but the house spits flame
and black smoke pours
from every window 
as if it had always

been there 
always lived in those
rooms 
silent
holding its black ash 
breath, waiting

for the moment 
of its freedom, its 
fifteen minutes
of fame

the mountain has thousands
of houses like this
it is not alone
there is nothing unique
about this fire

thousands of spitting
flames 
thousands of houses
releasing smoke from 
its secret captivity

only the mountain understands
that the piles of
soft ash and new mountains
of unanswered debris

are still alive as they
smolder and the picture
of the black smoking pile
that was a house

is a picture of a new house
a burnt house a house
made of spat-out dreams
in the summer night</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks John, I appreciate it. I&#8217;m not sure how this is supposed to work? Am I supposed to post my new poems, every day?</p>
<p>Incidentally, here is today&#8217;s poem.</p>
<p>California fires</p>
<p>You see a house<br />
not a house really<br />
but the picture<br />
of a house</p>
<p>not really the picture<br />
of a house but an image<br />
of a house</p>
<p>The house is burning<br />
the picture is alive<br />
the image cannot burn</p>
<p>but the house spits flame<br />
and black smoke pours<br />
from every window<br />
as if it had always</p>
<p>been there<br />
always lived in those<br />
rooms<br />
silent<br />
holding its black ash<br />
breath, waiting</p>
<p>for the moment<br />
of its freedom, its<br />
fifteen minutes<br />
of fame</p>
<p>the mountain has thousands<br />
of houses like this<br />
it is not alone<br />
there is nothing unique<br />
about this fire</p>
<p>thousands of spitting<br />
flames<br />
thousands of houses<br />
releasing smoke from<br />
its secret captivity</p>
<p>only the mountain understands<br />
that the piles of<br />
soft ash and new mountains<br />
of unanswered debris</p>
<p>are still alive as they<br />
smolder and the picture<br />
of the black smoking pile<br />
that was a house</p>
<p>is a picture of a new house<br />
a burnt house a house<br />
made of spat-out dreams<br />
in the summer night</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Dec 2007 18:29:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Lisa,

thank you for taking on the project. Good luck. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. You are certainly off to a good start.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Lisa,</p>
<p>thank you for taking on the project. Good luck. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. You are certainly off to a good start.</p>
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		<title>By: Lisa Josie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lisa Josie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Dec 2007 02:39:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Day one of 30 Poems in 30 Days. Here we go...


Lost and found


I dreamed of it, gulping images
of snowbound cottages and wind-blown
frozen blocks of hair: the library
on the hill I struggled to reach,

the smell inside of aging paper
brown as dried apples, the quiet
turning of pages soft as the gentle
dipping of waves over black sand.

I was stranded - or so I thought,
until I emerged to find myself
drinking the bluest deepest heaven
through my pores, overlooking a valley

so pungently green it cleansed
my eyes to see it, and the village
with its church steeple like the 
ones I had seen in Alsace years ago,

when it all began to fade, grow
thick and soupy as it blurred out
of focus and I held tight, tight
to the dream as my eyes forced

me out of this world, daylight
forceps grabbing me, prying me
from the most wild and pure magic
I had ever known.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Day one of 30 Poems in 30 Days. Here we go&#8230;</p>
<p>Lost and found</p>
<p>I dreamed of it, gulping images<br />
of snowbound cottages and wind-blown<br />
frozen blocks of hair: the library<br />
on the hill I struggled to reach,</p>
<p>the smell inside of aging paper<br />
brown as dried apples, the quiet<br />
turning of pages soft as the gentle<br />
dipping of waves over black sand.</p>
<p>I was stranded &#8211; or so I thought,<br />
until I emerged to find myself<br />
drinking the bluest deepest heaven<br />
through my pores, overlooking a valley</p>
<p>so pungently green it cleansed<br />
my eyes to see it, and the village<br />
with its church steeple like the<br />
ones I had seen in Alsace years ago,</p>
<p>when it all began to fade, grow<br />
thick and soupy as it blurred out<br />
of focus and I held tight, tight<br />
to the dream as my eyes forced</p>
<p>me out of this world, daylight<br />
forceps grabbing me, prying me<br />
from the most wild and pure magic<br />
I had ever known.</p>
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		<title>By: Rianon Burnet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rianon Burnet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Oct 2007 13:26:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Helen,
I agree!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Helen,<br />
I agree!!!</p>
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		<title>By: Helen Patrice</title>
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		<dc:creator>Helen Patrice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Oct 2007 07:19:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the 30 Poems in 30 Days.  I followed along diligently on my MySpace site(under the name SatyaPriya) and am well on my way to a verse novel, I think, a short one.  Thanks, and I hope you do this again, or at least post weekly assignments.
Helen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the 30 Poems in 30 Days.  I followed along diligently on my MySpace site(under the name SatyaPriya) and am well on my way to a verse novel, I think, a short one.  Thanks, and I hope you do this again, or at least post weekly assignments.<br />
Helen</p>
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		<title>By: Rianon Burnet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rianon Burnet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 18:50:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Art

Art has no boundaries 
No lines to pass 
It’s an open field
With rainbow grass

There are no rules
No objects to apply
Just wisdom and knowledge
And experiences to fly

Your mind goes on
All love goes free
Your body and soul
It’s where you’re meant to be

Friends and family 
Will never be apart
They dance on your page
A white canvas of art

I love everyone&#039;s poems! This one I wrote about how I feel about art. I&#039;m going to try and catch up with everyone in the poems.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Art</p>
<p>Art has no boundaries<br />
No lines to pass<br />
It’s an open field<br />
With rainbow grass</p>
<p>There are no rules<br />
No objects to apply<br />
Just wisdom and knowledge<br />
And experiences to fly</p>
<p>Your mind goes on<br />
All love goes free<br />
Your body and soul<br />
It’s where you’re meant to be</p>
<p>Friends and family<br />
Will never be apart<br />
They dance on your page<br />
A white canvas of art</p>
<p>I love everyone&#8217;s poems! This one I wrote about how I feel about art. I&#8217;m going to try and catch up with everyone in the poems.</p>
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		<title>By: Rianon Burnet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rianon Burnet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 16:28:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have many poems to share but just really found out about this too late, I&#039;m a little upset that I didn&#039;t look here &#039;till three days ago but hopefully there will be other things like this in the near future. I LOVE THIS SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have many poems to share but just really found out about this too late, I&#8217;m a little upset that I didn&#8217;t look here &#8217;till three days ago but hopefully there will be other things like this in the near future. I LOVE THIS SITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: 30 Poems in 30 Days: Syllabic Verse &#124; Writer's Resource Center</title>
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		<dc:creator>30 Poems in 30 Days: Syllabic Verse &#124; Writer's Resource Center</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Sep 2007 23:01:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] This is Day 12 of 30 Poems in 30 Days [...]</description>
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