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30 Poems in 30 Days: The Constraint as a Tool

September 20, 2007 by John Hewitt 

30 Poems in 30 DaysThis is Day 17 of 30 Poems in 30 Days

Wild Assignments

Towards the end of my undergraduate education, I stumbled into Peter Wild’s poetry class. I hadn’t actually intended to take a poetry class that semester. I had signed up for Literature in Film and I had even attended the first session of that class, but then the University made a mistake (not that they would admit it) and dropped me from all of my classes. I managed to get my other classes back, but not Literature in Film. I had to round out my schedule and Peter Wild’s class was the latest to start, so I chose it. I was cursing my bad luck, but it turned out that luck was on my side. I was about to enter my favorite poetry class ever.

By this point in college, I was a veteran of many poetry writing classes. Most of them were, you might say, free form. The instructor tried to guide you in your work, but most of you assignments were general “bring in a new poem this week” assignments. There is nothing wrong with that approach. It allows people to work in their own way and their own style. Peter Wild’s approach, however, was totally different. Peter gave assignments. He would tell you how many lines to write, what subjects to pick, whether to write in the first person or the third. At one point he gave both the first line and the last line of the poem we were to write. I still remember them.

The first line was:

For centuries lovers have looked to the stars

And the last line was

And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town

Not all of his students liked this approach. It was too hard. It stifled their creativity. It made them write about things they didn’t care about. The other students complained, but I didn’t. I loved having the constraints and challenges. I may not have always produced my best work, but I learned to become more resilient as a poet. For the first time in my life, I felt like poetry was something I could control and shape at will.

One of the benefits of constraint is that it gives you something to start from. If you know what your last line has to be, you start to think of ways that you can get there. If you know that you have to write a poem about the constellation Orion, you go out and stare at the stars. You are no longer dealing with a blank page. You know that at least one of those words is going to be “Orion”. That’s a place you can start from.

We have, of course, been dealing with constraints throughout this project. Form and meter are constraints. Style and tone are constraints. It is important to realize a constraint is a tool. It helps bring focus to a poem. You won’t always want restraints, but when you are stuck, a constraint is a good way to get the words flowing again.

Today’s Assignment

Wikipedia’s Random Button is a great and magical thing. Today it lead me to an article about Cheshire Mammoth Cheese. The story of Cheshire Mammoth Cheese has everything you need for poetic inspiration. It has historical significance. It has political significance. It has small town appeal. It has people working together toward a common foal and it contains a pop culture reference. Most importantly, it has cheese. Find a way to incorporate this article into a poem.

Today’s Recommended Poet

Noah Eli Gordon is prolific. He has released two books of poetry so far this year with more on the way. When asked about that in an interview, he said, “The simple truth is that I write a lot, that I spend much of my time doing it—even if it’s only pacing around my apartment waiting for some interesting phrase to catch me off-guard, or half-reading until I find something I feel inclined to respond to. I’ve tried everything I can think of to bring a poem into the world: automatic writing; timed writing; making word lists; sketching out detailed charts of specific syntax and filling in the words later on; writing only in public; writing at specific times of day. The really maddening thing about it—and I’m sure this is true for many many poets—is that once you’ve had that breakthrough moment with a particular mode it’s sure not to work the next time.” I admie his effort, and his results. For those of you who identified with the Imagist movement, his book A Fiddle Pulled from the Throat of a Sparrow is an excellent example of that work. With each book his work changes though, so don’t expect him to give you the same kind of poem every time.

Interview with Noah Eli Gordon

Books of Poetry

A Fiddle Pulled from the Throat of a Sparrow 2007

Novel Pictorial Noise 2007

Inbox 2006

The Area Of Sound Called The Subtone 2004

Sample Poetry

how human nouns
gray matter migration zone
Four Allusive Fields
from The Year of the Rooster
An exact comprehension of the composer’s intent
From “Jaywalking the Is”: “First Dream”
A Lost Whalebone Essay

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11 Responses to “30 Poems in 30 Days: The Constraint as a Tool”

  1. Connie Williams on September 21st, 2007 8:44 am

    I”m sorry. This is just a big fat nothing for me — I’ve taken a run at it several times, from different angles, rhythm, narrative, etc., but I can’t find My Last Dutchess in this bit of American history, the best I could come up with was

    If Barnabas did it like this (I’d be a happier poet today)

    Barnabas Collins had it right
    when he flew up to Connecticut that night
    He rid the nation of a cheese making blight
    Chased the villans into Massachusetts,
    Then plain out of sight

    I’ll share the cup with that vampire any day
    But that moldy old cheese, I’ll not eat it, no way

    As for Tommy Boy, he was an infidel
    It’s just not a story that teacher’s like to tell
    I’ll shut up now before someone takes me seriously
    Calls the law and hauls me off to jail

  2. Amy Derby on September 21st, 2007 10:46 am

    I’d liked to have seen the poems that began with “For centuries lovers have looked to the stars” and ended with “And the three-legged dog chased the beer truck out of town” — sounds like a fun assignment to me.

  3. John Hewitt on September 21st, 2007 11:18 am

    Hi Amy, If I can find mine, I’ll post it.

  4. John Hewitt on September 21st, 2007 11:30 am

    Hi Connie,

    Feel free to Hit the Random button again until you are inspired.

  5. Connie Williams on September 21st, 2007 1:56 pm

    I’m happy with what I have; I”ll put it in my collection called:
    “Queen of Tart.” “Sometimes less is more,” Mozart. Also by the Master, “a rest is the ’sound’ of silence.”

  6. John Hewitt on September 25th, 2007 7:22 am

    Our Daily Cheese

    We gather together for our daily cheese
    How many cows
    For this single slice of American cheese food product
    Individually wrapped
    A perfect square for sandwiches
    Grilled or otherwise

    Back in the day it meant something
    Combining the milk of many cows
    To make one cheese
    They did this for presidents
    They presented it to Jefferson and Jackson
    With the pride of a small town
    That can create one great honor

    How now lone cow
    Try to find a cheese from just one
    A single cow is special now
    Someone took the time
    Someone kept it separate
    Someone believed in craftsmanship
    Even when it comes to cheese

    I want that cheese
    That stands alone
    I want to know the name of that cow
    I want to know the name of that farmer
    I want to know who made that cheese

  7. Rosemary Nisen-Wade on September 29th, 2007 12:32 am

    VOICES
    Improvisations on the story of a gift of a mammoth cheese to Thomas Jefferson by the citizens of Cheshire, Massachusetts, as told in Wikipedia

    1.

    He’s the big cheese around here,
    so we have to butter him up.
    The Rev. says he flows with the milk
    of human kindness. We’re afraid
    that he’ll milk us all dry.

    2.

    He’s not one of us.
    His ways are strange.
    French. You know
    what they are. I wonder
    what infidelities he conceals?

    3.

    They say with pride
    no slavery was involved
    in the making of this gift.
    Although I myself am not free
    to give what I do, yet I choose to.

    4.

    I have paid for this tribute
    fully half the value.
    I didn’t have to.
    Better half a loaf than none.
    Cast your bread upon the waters….

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  11. Saul Nadata on May 15th, 2008 7:31 pm

    [Note: I swear this started about cheese]

    Tonight

    I come in peace, with nothing to sell tonight.
    This inscrutable message: does it ring a bell tonight?

    You’re out of words. I’m sure I know that look.
    It might come down to show and tell tonight.

    Even with a mouth full of empty holes,
    you still manage to say you’re doing well tonight.

    The shirt off my back? Have the moles off my skin.
    Name another cliche we can dispel tonight.

    By God, but in that open-buttoned shirt
    you sure know how to cast a spell tonight.

    Saul Nadatas last blog post..Tonight

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