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		<title>By: Saul Nadata</title>
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		<dc:creator>Saul Nadata</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 May 2008 17:20:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Morning

One heron greets us on the path, exultant
with a crawdad in its beak, and three white ducks 
who won’t shut up, and waddle an irate retreat,
(and whom Debbie has taken to torturing a bit,
bounding with Michal in her arms to disrupt 
the seriousness of their communion)
and then, always, the same old man in the cowboy hat
passes us while we dawdle by the reeds.
He mutters Morning and we shout it back to him,
our voices ringing loud and clear, and as one.

Saul Nadatas last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://featuredpoems.blogspot.com/2008/05/quick-study.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Quick Study&lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Morning</p>
<p>One heron greets us on the path, exultant<br />
with a crawdad in its beak, and three white ducks<br />
who won’t shut up, and waddle an irate retreat,<br />
(and whom Debbie has taken to torturing a bit,<br />
bounding with Michal in her arms to disrupt<br />
the seriousness of their communion)<br />
and then, always, the same old man in the cowboy hat<br />
passes us while we dawdle by the reeds.<br />
He mutters Morning and we shout it back to him,<br />
our voices ringing loud and clear, and as one.</p>
<p>Saul Nadatas last blog post..<a href="http://featuredpoems.blogspot.com/2008/05/quick-study.html" rel="nofollow">Quick Study</a></p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 22:53:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John: I love the way you can paint such detailed pictures with so few, economical brush strokes!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John: I love the way you can paint such detailed pictures with so few, economical brush strokes!</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 06:42:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Welcome to the Family

Kellen
Not Walter
And I go get Chinese food
He is about to tell me
That he is in love
With my sister-in-law
Who he is secretly dating
Except
There are no secrets
No secrets
In this family
Which I have told him
Over and over
But he doesn&#039;t understand

I try to help him out
I tell him
Wrap it
Every time
Without exception
Because after three kids
With three different daddies
One of them in jail
It is clear that she
Cannot protect herself

Two years later
I attend his daughter&#039;s first birthday
He holds her like a prize
Face forward
Pointing her like a laser
With wide eyes
And wider ears
Soon he will be an in-law
And I will be best man
At their wedding
That is if the mother of his child
Ever gets a divorce
From babydaddy
Number two
Good luck Kellen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Welcome to the Family</p>
<p>Kellen<br />
Not Walter<br />
And I go get Chinese food<br />
He is about to tell me<br />
That he is in love<br />
With my sister-in-law<br />
Who he is secretly dating<br />
Except<br />
There are no secrets<br />
No secrets<br />
In this family<br />
Which I have told him<br />
Over and over<br />
But he doesn&#8217;t understand</p>
<p>I try to help him out<br />
I tell him<br />
Wrap it<br />
Every time<br />
Without exception<br />
Because after three kids<br />
With three different daddies<br />
One of them in jail<br />
It is clear that she<br />
Cannot protect herself</p>
<p>Two years later<br />
I attend his daughter&#8217;s first birthday<br />
He holds her like a prize<br />
Face forward<br />
Pointing her like a laser<br />
With wide eyes<br />
And wider ears<br />
Soon he will be an in-law<br />
And I will be best man<br />
At their wedding<br />
That is if the mother of his child<br />
Ever gets a divorce<br />
From babydaddy<br />
Number two<br />
Good luck Kellen</p>
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		<title>By: Rianon Burnet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rianon Burnet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 17:59:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I Agree. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I Agree. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Pearl</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pearl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Sep 2007 14:30:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for my morning chuckles. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for my morning chuckles. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nisen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nisen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Sep 2007 13:57:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Second thoughts: 
In third-last verse change &quot;observed&quot; to &quot;seen&quot;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Second thoughts:<br />
In third-last verse change &#8220;observed&#8221; to &#8220;seen&#8221;.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nisen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nisen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Sep 2007 13:49:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Obeying the Maestro
for John Hewitt

Tip: 
when you can&#039;t write, 
lie on the floor a while.

O.K.

First vacuum the floor.
Then put cats outside
not for the hair shedding
but because if they&#039;re in
they&#039;ll come and lie 
on top of you
and that wasn&#039;t 
in the instructions.

If you have a carpet
with ancient stains
resistant to vacuum cleaners
and even professional expertise,
put down a pillow.
Lay an old towel down first
to keep the pillow clean.
Also find a large rug 
to go under the rest of your body.
It&#039;ll make you feel safer
less contaminated.

Speak to husband.
Make sure he knows
not to walk on you.
It would give him
such a scare.
Maybe arrange chairs
beside where you intend
to be lying, so he can&#039;t
stumble across your body
before he notices it
stretched out there.
Stick a big sign
on one of the chairs.

Take phone off hook
or make sure husband&#039;s aware
he is the one who has to answer it.
Likewise for front door.
Leave it open so he&#039;ll hear
if anyone knocks.
Therefore don&#039;t lie in living room
where you might be observed
through the open doorway
by callers or passing strangers.
Find another floor.

Get comfortable
on your pillow and your rug.
But not so comfortable
you&#039;ll go to sleep –
lie on your back.
Get up again and email John.
You need to find out
if your eyes should be
closed or open
and whether it helps
to plug your ears.

While awaiting reply
lie on the floor
go with the flow
just do it
what have you got to lose?
And pretty soon
before you know
you&#039;ll have a whole poem
out of that one
little tip!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Obeying the Maestro<br />
for John Hewitt</p>
<p>Tip:<br />
when you can&#8217;t write,<br />
lie on the floor a while.</p>
<p>O.K.</p>
<p>First vacuum the floor.<br />
Then put cats outside<br />
not for the hair shedding<br />
but because if they&#8217;re in<br />
they&#8217;ll come and lie<br />
on top of you<br />
and that wasn&#8217;t<br />
in the instructions.</p>
<p>If you have a carpet<br />
with ancient stains<br />
resistant to vacuum cleaners<br />
and even professional expertise,<br />
put down a pillow.<br />
Lay an old towel down first<br />
to keep the pillow clean.<br />
Also find a large rug<br />
to go under the rest of your body.<br />
It&#8217;ll make you feel safer<br />
less contaminated.</p>
<p>Speak to husband.<br />
Make sure he knows<br />
not to walk on you.<br />
It would give him<br />
such a scare.<br />
Maybe arrange chairs<br />
beside where you intend<br />
to be lying, so he can&#8217;t<br />
stumble across your body<br />
before he notices it<br />
stretched out there.<br />
Stick a big sign<br />
on one of the chairs.</p>
<p>Take phone off hook<br />
or make sure husband&#8217;s aware<br />
he is the one who has to answer it.<br />
Likewise for front door.<br />
Leave it open so he&#8217;ll hear<br />
if anyone knocks.<br />
Therefore don&#8217;t lie in living room<br />
where you might be observed<br />
through the open doorway<br />
by callers or passing strangers.<br />
Find another floor.</p>
<p>Get comfortable<br />
on your pillow and your rug.<br />
But not so comfortable<br />
you&#8217;ll go to sleep –<br />
lie on your back.<br />
Get up again and email John.<br />
You need to find out<br />
if your eyes should be<br />
closed or open<br />
and whether it helps<br />
to plug your ears.</p>
<p>While awaiting reply<br />
lie on the floor<br />
go with the flow<br />
just do it<br />
what have you got to lose?<br />
And pretty soon<br />
before you know<br />
you&#8217;ll have a whole poem<br />
out of that one<br />
little tip!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nisen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nisen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Sep 2007 06:03:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for promoting my compatriots! 

I would just like to note something not evident from reading her individual poems – that Dorothy Porter is one of the pioneers in this country of the verse novel.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for promoting my compatriots! </p>
<p>I would just like to note something not evident from reading her individual poems – that Dorothy Porter is one of the pioneers in this country of the verse novel.</p>
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