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		<title>By: Saul Nadata</title>
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		<dc:creator>Saul Nadata</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 May 2008 02:34:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A Talk with David

The day we had to bury his baby girl,
David told me that there was no God.
He said he might later act like there was,
but it would be fake.  There was no God.
I was too young to know what to say
so I said he ought to sleep for now.
I don’t know how I wound up alone
with him in the first place.  I bet it was
since I was so young that he let me in.
His eyes grew heavy.  I left his room 
and found my mom and dad. They sat 
with his wife as she told a story about  
the girl who had just died like it had
been a long time since she had been alive.  
My mom said, I’m sure she’s up there now,
and hears every word you’ve said.
I hoped David got to sleep, but if he heard
my mom talk, he didn’t start a fight about it:
he let the words pass, right or wrong,
just like I think God would have done.

Saul Nadatas last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://featuredpoems.blogspot.com/2008/05/on-train-platform.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;On the Train Platform&lt;/a&gt;</description>
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<p>The day we had to bury his baby girl,<br />
David told me that there was no God.<br />
He said he might later act like there was,<br />
but it would be fake.  There was no God.<br />
I was too young to know what to say<br />
so I said he ought to sleep for now.<br />
I don’t know how I wound up alone<br />
with him in the first place.  I bet it was<br />
since I was so young that he let me in.<br />
His eyes grew heavy.  I left his room<br />
and found my mom and dad. They sat<br />
with his wife as she told a story about<br />
the girl who had just died like it had<br />
been a long time since she had been alive.<br />
My mom said, I’m sure she’s up there now,<br />
and hears every word you’ve said.<br />
I hoped David got to sleep, but if he heard<br />
my mom talk, he didn’t start a fight about it:<br />
he let the words pass, right or wrong,<br />
just like I think God would have done.</p>
<p>Saul Nadatas last blog post..<a href="http://featuredpoems.blogspot.com/2008/05/on-train-platform.html" rel="nofollow">On the Train Platform</a></p>
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		<title>By: Poetry in Forms Series: Cinquain &#124; Writer's Resource Center</title>
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		<dc:creator>Poetry in Forms Series: Cinquain &#124; Writer's Resource Center</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Dec 2007 19:12:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 30 Poems in 30 Days: Word Choice [...]</description>
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		<title>By: What is a Stanza? &#124; Writer's Resource Center</title>
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		<dc:creator>What is a Stanza? &#124; Writer's Resource Center</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Dec 2007 18:45:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 30 Poems in 30 Days: Word Choice [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2007 05:56:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jenny Mueller. Yes. Wow!</description>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 23:03:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rosemary: I&#039;m glat it gave that impression. I did actually spend a lot of time replacing my first choice words with ones that fit the rules. I think it worked out well in the end.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rosemary: I&#8217;m glat it gave that impression. I did actually spend a lot of time replacing my first choice words with ones that fit the rules. I think it worked out well in the end.</p>
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		<title>By: John Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>John Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 23:01:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Pearl: i did my best to get your columns back. I hope that gives at least a hint of what you were shooting for.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pearl: i did my best to get your columns back. I hope that gives at least a hint of what you were shooting for.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 15:04:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A RAW TABASCO PEPPER

Pale green, it sat 
on the side dish to the curry
among cool bits of salad.
Idly I chose it, and bit.

I felt my teeth melt
and my eyes pop
as the roof of my head blew off.
A swoop for the glass of milk
in front of the diner on my left,
and I drank it down in one gulp.

I never heard Bill laugh so much.
All those years I used to skite
about being able to eat red hot 
chili, curry and the like.
It must have got on his wick 
but I never knew till then.

Well, he had his gloat
and did he enjoy it.
It went on a long time after.
Until the night 
our hosts in Java fed us
that very same dish.

I saw him reach out
for that cool green salad bit.
I kept my face blank.
I said not a word.

The next thing was the yell.
Then he leapt out of his chair,
which hit the floor with a crash,
and tore out of the room in tears,
his mouth wide open as he tried 
to take huge gulps of air.

Yes – best to serve it cold.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A RAW TABASCO PEPPER</p>
<p>Pale green, it sat<br />
on the side dish to the curry<br />
among cool bits of salad.<br />
Idly I chose it, and bit.</p>
<p>I felt my teeth melt<br />
and my eyes pop<br />
as the roof of my head blew off.<br />
A swoop for the glass of milk<br />
in front of the diner on my left,<br />
and I drank it down in one gulp.</p>
<p>I never heard Bill laugh so much.<br />
All those years I used to skite<br />
about being able to eat red hot<br />
chili, curry and the like.<br />
It must have got on his wick<br />
but I never knew till then.</p>
<p>Well, he had his gloat<br />
and did he enjoy it.<br />
It went on a long time after.<br />
Until the night<br />
our hosts in Java fed us<br />
that very same dish.</p>
<p>I saw him reach out<br />
for that cool green salad bit.<br />
I kept my face blank.<br />
I said not a word.</p>
<p>The next thing was the yell.<br />
Then he leapt out of his chair,<br />
which hit the floor with a crash,<br />
and tore out of the room in tears,<br />
his mouth wide open as he tried<br />
to take huge gulps of air.</p>
<p>Yes – best to serve it cold.</p>
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		<title>By: Rianon Burnet</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rianon Burnet</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2007 13:46:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rosemary,
It&#039;s wonderful to be here. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rosemary,<br />
It&#8217;s wonderful to be here. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 23:30:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Pearl: Oh no, take it all back - I just looked at it with slightly unfocused eyes and saw the columns. (Slightly wobbly, but still I got &#039;em.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pearl: Oh no, take it all back &#8211; I just looked at it with slightly unfocused eyes and saw the columns. (Slightly wobbly, but still I got &#8216;em.)</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 23:29:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Pearl: No, dammit, can&#039;t quite get it, and copying and trying to do it for myself got me lost and you scrambled (in ways you probably didn&#039;t intend)! I can sorta get 3 columns, not 4. Would it work if you did big tab spaces to mark the columns?  Or is that what you did? I tried using the Word thing of dividing page into 4 columns, but I would have had to already know how your text was arranged to make it fit.

John: Lovely! The instruction transcended, so the poem  seems uncontrived and one feels it could only have been written in these words.

Rianon: Bravo for following your inspiration and joining us!

As for me, I am all out of sequence by now but gradually catching up.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pearl: No, dammit, can&#8217;t quite get it, and copying and trying to do it for myself got me lost and you scrambled (in ways you probably didn&#8217;t intend)! I can sorta get 3 columns, not 4. Would it work if you did big tab spaces to mark the columns?  Or is that what you did? I tried using the Word thing of dividing page into 4 columns, but I would have had to already know how your text was arranged to make it fit.</p>
<p>John: Lovely! The instruction transcended, so the poem  seems uncontrived and one feels it could only have been written in these words.</p>
<p>Rianon: Bravo for following your inspiration and joining us!</p>
<p>As for me, I am all out of sequence by now but gradually catching up.</p>
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