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		<title>By: Rebecca</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Oct 2009 02:48:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ok, here&#039;s another poem...many days after my first.  Oops.  I keep forgetting to write, so I wrote two poems today.  I don&#039;t know if they&#039;re any good, but here they are.

Between the dusk of dreams and morning&#039;s light
I cling to Dreamland&#039;s shreds.
The friendly warmth of my sheets
Dispells my self-discipline.
The curve of my pillow beckons my head
Back to the shadows of sleep.
Drooping eyelids cloud my vision.
I must get up.
I fling myself from my bed
With resolve I do not feel.
I rub my eyes as Dreamland releases it&#039;s hold on me.
Time for another day.


Please tell me what you think.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ok, here&#8217;s another poem&#8230;many days after my first.  Oops.  I keep forgetting to write, so I wrote two poems today.  I don&#8217;t know if they&#8217;re any good, but here they are.</p>
<p>Between the dusk of dreams and morning&#8217;s light<br />
I cling to Dreamland&#8217;s shreds.<br />
The friendly warmth of my sheets<br />
Dispells my self-discipline.<br />
The curve of my pillow beckons my head<br />
Back to the shadows of sleep.<br />
Drooping eyelids cloud my vision.<br />
I must get up.<br />
I fling myself from my bed<br />
With resolve I do not feel.<br />
I rub my eyes as Dreamland releases it&#8217;s hold on me.<br />
Time for another day.</p>
<p>Please tell me what you think.</p>
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		<title>By: Ronda Levine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ronda Levine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Sep 2009 11:01:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why?
Why? I wonder, eyelids still glued shut, 
Hanging on still to the last molecules of the
Dream that now fades into the distance
The warmth of my husband surrounding me
I reach back for some vestige of dreamland
Grasp at it with a butterfly net
Hear the kittens pawing at the door
Mewing to explore
Jackhammer sounds outside the window
Screaming as it decimates cement
“I’m the boss!”
People shout downstairs
People stomp about upstairs
I pull the cover over my head
Trying to escape into some silent cocoon
“I love you” is whispered into my ear
I realize I’ve been holding my breath
When air escapes my lungs
And I remember what it’s all for.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why?<br />
Why? I wonder, eyelids still glued shut,<br />
Hanging on still to the last molecules of the<br />
Dream that now fades into the distance<br />
The warmth of my husband surrounding me<br />
I reach back for some vestige of dreamland<br />
Grasp at it with a butterfly net<br />
Hear the kittens pawing at the door<br />
Mewing to explore<br />
Jackhammer sounds outside the window<br />
Screaming as it decimates cement<br />
“I’m the boss!”<br />
People shout downstairs<br />
People stomp about upstairs<br />
I pull the cover over my head<br />
Trying to escape into some silent cocoon<br />
“I love you” is whispered into my ear<br />
I realize I’ve been holding my breath<br />
When air escapes my lungs<br />
And I remember what it’s all for.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2009 11:17:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sheer,

I recall all too well the burning questions, that some call romatic desires, of young love.  Young, not in terms of the person, but young in terms of the relationship, which is infused in your words.  How rich it is!

With time and continued love, these questions are answered, and the burning questions become more mundane, like realizing that you forgot something because the routine is changed, or the hoping he (she) did not forget something because the routine has changed.  This wondering even disappears, and continued time reveals that he/she WILL forget something, and you know exactly what it is.  This is when a kind hearted lover takes gentle steps to help the soulmate along the way, even while absent.  How much righer now?

These thoughts got me writing...


Picture Paintings

In a flash, 
you are captured,
Every bit of you ensnared.

From then on
you enhance the view
ever changing ever growing.

The artist within
using actions and words
will paint the picture love.

Puppy love:
Innocent! Cute!
A dabbling in water colors.

Young love: 
Romantic! Elegant!
A black and white charcoal sketch.

Committed love:
A work in progress.
The sketch with paint strewn about.

Ancient love:
Beauty! A work of art!
An oil portrait in a guilded frame.

In a flash,
I was captured.
Every bit of me ensnared.

I am now
neck deep in paint.
Please, come back in twenty years.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sheer,</p>
<p>I recall all too well the burning questions, that some call romatic desires, of young love.  Young, not in terms of the person, but young in terms of the relationship, which is infused in your words.  How rich it is!</p>
<p>With time and continued love, these questions are answered, and the burning questions become more mundane, like realizing that you forgot something because the routine is changed, or the hoping he (she) did not forget something because the routine has changed.  This wondering even disappears, and continued time reveals that he/she WILL forget something, and you know exactly what it is.  This is when a kind hearted lover takes gentle steps to help the soulmate along the way, even while absent.  How much righer now?</p>
<p>These thoughts got me writing&#8230;</p>
<p>Picture Paintings</p>
<p>In a flash,<br />
you are captured,<br />
Every bit of you ensnared.</p>
<p>From then on<br />
you enhance the view<br />
ever changing ever growing.</p>
<p>The artist within<br />
using actions and words<br />
will paint the picture love.</p>
<p>Puppy love:<br />
Innocent! Cute!<br />
A dabbling in water colors.</p>
<p>Young love:<br />
Romantic! Elegant!<br />
A black and white charcoal sketch.</p>
<p>Committed love:<br />
A work in progress.<br />
The sketch with paint strewn about.</p>
<p>Ancient love:<br />
Beauty! A work of art!<br />
An oil portrait in a guilded frame.</p>
<p>In a flash,<br />
I was captured.<br />
Every bit of me ensnared.</p>
<p>I am now<br />
neck deep in paint.<br />
Please, come back in twenty years.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 15:10:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Away from me

In utter darkness 
With complete blankness 
I reach out my hands 
To the empty space
Where you should be

I open my eyes
Consciousness returns
I glance at the clock
And I remembered
That you were a continent away

Lights flick on
I sit up in our bed
Looking at the empty space
I wonder what you are doing
Away from me

Dragging my sluggish self
I start my morning routine
Making two sets of breakfast
By sheer force of habit
For you and me

In front of the shoes rack
I glance at your missing shoes
And I wonder if you knew
How much I hate
Having you away

And I wonder
If you missed 
Waking up 
Without me

Do you?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Away from me</p>
<p>In utter darkness<br />
With complete blankness<br />
I reach out my hands<br />
To the empty space<br />
Where you should be</p>
<p>I open my eyes<br />
Consciousness returns<br />
I glance at the clock<br />
And I remembered<br />
That you were a continent away</p>
<p>Lights flick on<br />
I sit up in our bed<br />
Looking at the empty space<br />
I wonder what you are doing<br />
Away from me</p>
<p>Dragging my sluggish self<br />
I start my morning routine<br />
Making two sets of breakfast<br />
By sheer force of habit<br />
For you and me</p>
<p>In front of the shoes rack<br />
I glance at your missing shoes<br />
And I wonder if you knew<br />
How much I hate<br />
Having you away</p>
<p>And I wonder<br />
If you missed<br />
Waking up<br />
Without me</p>
<p>Do you?</p>
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		<title>By: Joy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 13:20:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, mine is a (kind of) factual account, school-related again:

All Because of That Alarm Clock

Ring!
There it goes again
that alarm clock
invention of the devil

Eight?
Oh no, I&#039;m late:
(throw everything in my bag)
time to run like mad!

Crack!
Really, now, God
must you do this to me?
Rain, thunder - just for being late?

What?
Why&#039;s the gate closed?
shouldn&#039;t it be open?
but... wait a moment!

Oh!
I see it now
that&#039;s why it&#039;s closed:
it&#039;s SATURDAY!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, mine is a (kind of) factual account, school-related again:</p>
<p>All Because of That Alarm Clock</p>
<p>Ring!<br />
There it goes again<br />
that alarm clock<br />
invention of the devil</p>
<p>Eight?<br />
Oh no, I&#8217;m late:<br />
(throw everything in my bag)<br />
time to run like mad!</p>
<p>Crack!<br />
Really, now, God<br />
must you do this to me?<br />
Rain, thunder &#8211; just for being late?</p>
<p>What?<br />
Why&#8217;s the gate closed?<br />
shouldn&#8217;t it be open?<br />
but&#8230; wait a moment!</p>
<p>Oh!<br />
I see it now<br />
that&#8217;s why it&#8217;s closed:<br />
it&#8217;s SATURDAY!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 13:12:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Damn! Sorry, meant to capitalise all first letters of lines; I see I missed some. I thing I haven&#039;t done before (well, not since childhood) and decided to do now for various reasons – one being that it&#039;s hard to indent on computer if lines run over, so the capitals help indicate the line beginnings.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Damn! Sorry, meant to capitalise all first letters of lines; I see I missed some. I thing I haven&#8217;t done before (well, not since childhood) and decided to do now for various reasons – one being that it&#8217;s hard to indent on computer if lines run over, so the capitals help indicate the line beginnings.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 13:07:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi James!

Here is my dream poem for this prompt. Just for fun – and because I&#039;ve been wanting to play with this form – I made each verse a shadorma.


Recurrence

The old dream
Startles me awake.
So often
In childhood …
But why does it return now,
The dream of falling?

Falling deep
between rocky walls,
a chasm.
Too slowly.
And faces leering at me –
Distorted faces.

Was it Hell
that awaited me
far down there?
A child’s Hell
Of fairy-tales – Grimm horrors –
And my inner dark.

I can’t know.
I never landed;
Kept floating
Down and down.
What demons now reclaim me –
Now that I am old?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi James!</p>
<p>Here is my dream poem for this prompt. Just for fun – and because I&#8217;ve been wanting to play with this form – I made each verse a shadorma.</p>
<p>Recurrence</p>
<p>The old dream<br />
Startles me awake.<br />
So often<br />
In childhood …<br />
But why does it return now,<br />
The dream of falling?</p>
<p>Falling deep<br />
between rocky walls,<br />
a chasm.<br />
Too slowly.<br />
And faces leering at me –<br />
Distorted faces.</p>
<p>Was it Hell<br />
that awaited me<br />
far down there?<br />
A child’s Hell<br />
Of fairy-tales – Grimm horrors –<br />
And my inner dark.</p>
<p>I can’t know.<br />
I never landed;<br />
Kept floating<br />
Down and down.<br />
What demons now reclaim me –<br />
Now that I am old?</p>
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		<title>By: Joy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 12:59:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, before I start on my submission, I would like to say two things: Firstly, this is slightly difficult, because for me, &#039;waking up&#039; equals to slamming the alarm clock, jumping into school uniform, and running off to catch the bus. Rather... unpoetic in comparison to the much more relaxed ones you guys seem to have.
Secondly, I really dislike time zones, and being about (approximately) halfway across the world, which makes it a big headache trying to figure out what day is it over there, and whether it&#039;s Day 2 yet. Why must Singapore be so far away?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, before I start on my submission, I would like to say two things: Firstly, this is slightly difficult, because for me, &#8216;waking up&#8217; equals to slamming the alarm clock, jumping into school uniform, and running off to catch the bus. Rather&#8230; unpoetic in comparison to the much more relaxed ones you guys seem to have.<br />
Secondly, I really dislike time zones, and being about (approximately) halfway across the world, which makes it a big headache trying to figure out what day is it over there, and whether it&#8217;s Day 2 yet. Why must Singapore be so far away?</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 02:22:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello Rosemary.
Good to &#039;see&#039; you again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Rosemary.<br />
Good to &#8217;see&#8217; you again.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 23:17:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hmm, got the cats in but not a dream. I might come back and do a second one for this prompt. Meanwhile(and this is autobiographical!) –

Waking Early

Ah, the light is music 
The world new alive
Golden through the edges of the curtains.
I am awake at once.

The cats recline on the bed.
He, black panther, waits.
She, grey puma, mews for their food
Low and plaintive.

Outside, my wind-chimes
Peal and reverberate
Reminding me of a long continuum
Of Spring mornings.

The heart leaps now
Just as it always has 
Alive, alive, alive – and glad to live
Glad to be awake

On a Spring morning
With cats to feed
And the man in the bed waiting
For me as the sun rises.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hmm, got the cats in but not a dream. I might come back and do a second one for this prompt. Meanwhile(and this is autobiographical!) –</p>
<p>Waking Early</p>
<p>Ah, the light is music<br />
The world new alive<br />
Golden through the edges of the curtains.<br />
I am awake at once.</p>
<p>The cats recline on the bed.<br />
He, black panther, waits.<br />
She, grey puma, mews for their food<br />
Low and plaintive.</p>
<p>Outside, my wind-chimes<br />
Peal and reverberate<br />
Reminding me of a long continuum<br />
Of Spring mornings.</p>
<p>The heart leaps now<br />
Just as it always has<br />
Alive, alive, alive – and glad to live<br />
Glad to be awake</p>
<p>On a Spring morning<br />
With cats to feed<br />
And the man in the bed waiting<br />
For me as the sun rises.</p>
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