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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 13:58:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Don’t cry

But I need my tears
for the hurt –
to speak my hurt, 
to show you and
to take my pain away.

I’ll cry it out
until I’ve used up
all my breath,
until I’m worn out
from crying.

Then I’ll fall into
a deep sleep
and when I wake up,
I’ll be calm.
I’ll feel new.

Don’t try to take away
my fierce tears,
my needful tears,
my gentle tears.
They’re mine.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don’t cry</p>
<p>But I need my tears<br />
for the hurt –<br />
to speak my hurt,<br />
to show you and<br />
to take my pain away.</p>
<p>I’ll cry it out<br />
until I’ve used up<br />
all my breath,<br />
until I’m worn out<br />
from crying.</p>
<p>Then I’ll fall into<br />
a deep sleep<br />
and when I wake up,<br />
I’ll be calm.<br />
I’ll feel new.</p>
<p>Don’t try to take away<br />
my fierce tears,<br />
my needful tears,<br />
my gentle tears.<br />
They’re mine.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2009 18:22:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John et al,
I have been busy this weekend, what with International Talk Like a Pirate day, and all.  I will respond to each of the prompts, just keep checking.
In the meantime, a little advice...
It comes freely, and is probably worth what you paid for it.


You Can Do it!

You can do it! Really!
You can be anything you want.
Just dream it and do it.
Anyone can do anything they want! 

What utter bullshit!
Not everyone can be a virtuoso.
We each have strengths and weaknesses,
and these really limit our possibilities.

Then in the mad mad scramble 
to the top of the garbage pile,
the other rats will grab your tail
and pull you down if you get ahead. 

Does this mean you should not try?
Hell no!  If you do not try,
and try you harderst, the rats 
will bury you allive and smother you.

But despite the othre rats and
personal flaws and weaknesses,
you&#039;d be amazed at what you can do
if you simply gave it your all.

So despite my misgivings,
I&#039;ll join the mad chorus:
You can do it! Really!
Just dream it and do it.



(and they wonder why I am NOT a motivational speaker!)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John et al,<br />
I have been busy this weekend, what with International Talk Like a Pirate day, and all.  I will respond to each of the prompts, just keep checking.<br />
In the meantime, a little advice&#8230;<br />
It comes freely, and is probably worth what you paid for it.</p>
<p>You Can Do it!</p>
<p>You can do it! Really!<br />
You can be anything you want.<br />
Just dream it and do it.<br />
Anyone can do anything they want! </p>
<p>What utter bullshit!<br />
Not everyone can be a virtuoso.<br />
We each have strengths and weaknesses,<br />
and these really limit our possibilities.</p>
<p>Then in the mad mad scramble<br />
to the top of the garbage pile,<br />
the other rats will grab your tail<br />
and pull you down if you get ahead. </p>
<p>Does this mean you should not try?<br />
Hell no!  If you do not try,<br />
and try you harderst, the rats<br />
will bury you allive and smother you.</p>
<p>But despite the othre rats and<br />
personal flaws and weaknesses,<br />
you&#8217;d be amazed at what you can do<br />
if you simply gave it your all.</p>
<p>So despite my misgivings,<br />
I&#8217;ll join the mad chorus:<br />
You can do it! Really!<br />
Just dream it and do it.</p>
<p>(and they wonder why I am NOT a motivational speaker!)</p>
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		<title>By: depannage informatique</title>
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		<dc:creator>depannage informatique</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2009 10:21:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m not very familiar with english language but this kind of poem is funny and i like the mike moon one.
.-= depannage informatique&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.mnt-tech.fr/part/le-raid-et-les-differents-niveaux-raid-0-raid-1-et-raid-5.php&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Le RAID et les différents niveaux (RAID 0, RAID 1 et RAID 5)&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m not very familiar with english language but this kind of poem is funny and i like the mike moon one.<br />
.-= depannage informatique&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://www.mnt-tech.fr/part/le-raid-et-les-differents-niveaux-raid-0-raid-1-et-raid-5.php" rel="nofollow">Le RAID et les différents niveaux (RAID 0, RAID 1 et RAID 5)</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2009 07:33:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Giving Up

Do not give up 
Even when the going looks tough
Do not even &lt;i&gt;think&lt;/i&gt; about giving up
Even when the going looks impossible
Remember when the going gets tough
The tough gets going

Do not give up on yourself
Even when the world looks out to get you
Do not even &lt;i&gt;consider&lt;/i&gt; giving up
Remember that giving up is the end
Hanging on and there is always
A new beginning

Do not give up because you are tired
Even when the road seems long and dreary
Hang on because you have tried
Remember that being tired is a momentary state
But giving up is an eternal one
So do not give up for a transient moment of relief

However
If you have tried
If you know that it is impossible
If you know that by giving up
You can move on
You can go on to something else

Something better
Something greater
Something more satisfying
Then for goodness’ sake - do it
Instead of trying to hang in 
And not giving up

There is no virtue in flogging a dead horse
Truly, there isn’t. 

I should know.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Giving Up</p>
<p>Do not give up<br />
Even when the going looks tough<br />
Do not even <i>think</i> about giving up<br />
Even when the going looks impossible<br />
Remember when the going gets tough<br />
The tough gets going</p>
<p>Do not give up on yourself<br />
Even when the world looks out to get you<br />
Do not even <i>consider</i> giving up<br />
Remember that giving up is the end<br />
Hanging on and there is always<br />
A new beginning</p>
<p>Do not give up because you are tired<br />
Even when the road seems long and dreary<br />
Hang on because you have tried<br />
Remember that being tired is a momentary state<br />
But giving up is an eternal one<br />
So do not give up for a transient moment of relief</p>
<p>However<br />
If you have tried<br />
If you know that it is impossible<br />
If you know that by giving up<br />
You can move on<br />
You can go on to something else</p>
<p>Something better<br />
Something greater<br />
Something more satisfying<br />
Then for goodness’ sake &#8211; do it<br />
Instead of trying to hang in<br />
And not giving up</p>
<p>There is no virtue in flogging a dead horse<br />
Truly, there isn’t. </p>
<p>I should know.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Sep 2009 03:36:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Mike

I enjoyed where you went with this one!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Mike</p>
<p>I enjoyed where you went with this one!</p>
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		<title>By: Mike Moon</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike Moon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 23:17:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Do not start with that
you&#039;re fat, you&#039;re stupid, you&#039;re dense, you&#039;re slack

a crab wonders not why those are claws
a squirrel doesn&#039;t question the tail
you don&#039;t ask about your lovers nipple
a chair asks nothing but invites a sit

a bed lies
and lies and lies
the mirror doesn&#039;t

can a comet lengthen a tail by glowing brighter or does it just happen?
when a light goes out is it aware of the loss
does the darkness know about velvet?

can we find a beach without water 
and if we did would we know where we were

does a trout count the spots on it&#039;s side
or do dappled things just know about the leaves falling

do we know our last breath
would we keep it or let it go

a lying friend seems very thin
like notes of an almost known song
but those notes can haunt like a rat in an old farmhouse
you can still hear the scrabbling feet and wonder if those fleas bite will itch</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Do not start with that<br />
you&#8217;re fat, you&#8217;re stupid, you&#8217;re dense, you&#8217;re slack</p>
<p>a crab wonders not why those are claws<br />
a squirrel doesn&#8217;t question the tail<br />
you don&#8217;t ask about your lovers nipple<br />
a chair asks nothing but invites a sit</p>
<p>a bed lies<br />
and lies and lies<br />
the mirror doesn&#8217;t</p>
<p>can a comet lengthen a tail by glowing brighter or does it just happen?<br />
when a light goes out is it aware of the loss<br />
does the darkness know about velvet?</p>
<p>can we find a beach without water<br />
and if we did would we know where we were</p>
<p>does a trout count the spots on it&#8217;s side<br />
or do dappled things just know about the leaves falling</p>
<p>do we know our last breath<br />
would we keep it or let it go</p>
<p>a lying friend seems very thin<br />
like notes of an almost known song<br />
but those notes can haunt like a rat in an old farmhouse<br />
you can still hear the scrabbling feet and wonder if those fleas bite will itch</p>
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