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		<title>By: J.C. Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>J.C. Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 14:30:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you to those of you who who wrote in nice things today. I appreciate the support.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you to those of you who who wrote in nice things today. I appreciate the support.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 10:24:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@All,
The comments above &#039;inspired&#039; the reaction just posted.  
It being a response to the conversation.
Now for my actual response to the prompt.
It runs deep.


Seasons

I remember spring,
with its hope, its youth,
the unending possibilities,
with imortality felt
coursing through the veins,
Spring was good.

Summer was the season of work.
Early to rise late to bed,
long long days and short nights,
chock full of life 
and unending activities, 
Summer was vibrant.

Autumn cooled the air.
The shortening days brought
less work and more rest.
The harvest begins and joy abounds
as one sees the fruits of summer
Autumn was gloruous.

Winter came silently 
barren, dry, desolate,
with Die-back personal,
and I, a daffodil planted
in the grave to wait
the spring of afterlife.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@All,<br />
The comments above &#8216;inspired&#8217; the reaction just posted.<br />
It being a response to the conversation.<br />
Now for my actual response to the prompt.<br />
It runs deep.</p>
<p>Seasons</p>
<p>I remember spring,<br />
with its hope, its youth,<br />
the unending possibilities,<br />
with imortality felt<br />
coursing through the veins,<br />
Spring was good.</p>
<p>Summer was the season of work.<br />
Early to rise late to bed,<br />
long long days and short nights,<br />
chock full of life<br />
and unending activities,<br />
Summer was vibrant.</p>
<p>Autumn cooled the air.<br />
The shortening days brought<br />
less work and more rest.<br />
The harvest begins and joy abounds<br />
as one sees the fruits of summer<br />
Autumn was gloruous.</p>
<p>Winter came silently<br />
barren, dry, desolate,<br />
with Die-back personal,<br />
and I, a daffodil planted<br />
in the grave to wait<br />
the spring of afterlife.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 10:22:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hate

Hate is such a strong word, a strong acid of thought,
no less strong than hydrochloric acid on metal.  
Shall we reserve it only for actions and not people?
Is it OK to hate a person&#039;s actions, yet still love them?
Is it possible to segregate our thoughts in such a manner?
Our attitudes? Our words? Our actions? Our beings?
For surely our thoughts lould who and what we are
and whatever we are is shown by our very words.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hate</p>
<p>Hate is such a strong word, a strong acid of thought,<br />
no less strong than hydrochloric acid on metal.<br />
Shall we reserve it only for actions and not people?<br />
Is it OK to hate a person&#8217;s actions, yet still love them?<br />
Is it possible to segregate our thoughts in such a manner?<br />
Our attitudes? Our words? Our actions? Our beings?<br />
For surely our thoughts lould who and what we are<br />
and whatever we are is shown by our very words.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 04:34:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Season-less

I would like to bemoan 
The passing of time
As the autumn leaves fall
But I live in the land of perpetual sun
Unless rains count 
As passing of seasons
In which case
Every other day 
Seasons pass

I would like to claim
Melancholy as the 
Seasons pass
As summer fades
And winter comes
But alas there are only sunny skies
To greet my eyes
Beyond my window stills

I would like to be as sentimental
And wax lyrical about the 
Seasons moving on
In a relentless beat
Time passes on
But what happens if seasons
Remain unchanged
In the land I live in

Perhaps it is best that 
I am not born melancholy
Otherwise imagine my disadvantages
Compared to the poets 
Who has both the temperament 
And the right temperature 
For inspiration.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Season-less</p>
<p>I would like to bemoan<br />
The passing of time<br />
As the autumn leaves fall<br />
But I live in the land of perpetual sun<br />
Unless rains count<br />
As passing of seasons<br />
In which case<br />
Every other day<br />
Seasons pass</p>
<p>I would like to claim<br />
Melancholy as the<br />
Seasons pass<br />
As summer fades<br />
And winter comes<br />
But alas there are only sunny skies<br />
To greet my eyes<br />
Beyond my window stills</p>
<p>I would like to be as sentimental<br />
And wax lyrical about the<br />
Seasons moving on<br />
In a relentless beat<br />
Time passes on<br />
But what happens if seasons<br />
Remain unchanged<br />
In the land I live in</p>
<p>Perhaps it is best that<br />
I am not born melancholy<br />
Otherwise imagine my disadvantages<br />
Compared to the poets<br />
Who has both the temperament<br />
And the right temperature<br />
For inspiration.</p>
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		<title>By: Erin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Erin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 04:12:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i don&#039;t have a poem in response to today&#039;s prompt but i wanted to say that i just found your blog last night and have read through the last 21 posts of the 30 Poems Project. after doing so i wrote a poem that i am so happy with and i think it&#039;s safe to say that my temporary &#039;poetry-block&#039; has been cured. 

i hate that person for sending you awful remarks. their creativity must suffer immensely from their negative attitude, not to mention the rest of their life. anyway, i promise, the hurt you received by that person is MINUSCULE to how much you&#039;ve helped me in just one day.  keep it up - you&#039;ve inspired me so much!!

thanks!!

&lt;3 Erin
.-= Erin&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.etsy.com/view_listing.php?listing_id=31273770&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;You Are Beautiful Button&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i don&#8217;t have a poem in response to today&#8217;s prompt but i wanted to say that i just found your blog last night and have read through the last 21 posts of the 30 Poems Project. after doing so i wrote a poem that i am so happy with and i think it&#8217;s safe to say that my temporary &#8216;poetry-block&#8217; has been cured. </p>
<p>i hate that person for sending you awful remarks. their creativity must suffer immensely from their negative attitude, not to mention the rest of their life. anyway, i promise, the hurt you received by that person is MINUSCULE to how much you&#8217;ve helped me in just one day.  keep it up &#8211; you&#8217;ve inspired me so much!!</p>
<p>thanks!!</p>
<p>&lt;3 Erin<br />
.-= Erin&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://www.etsy.com/view_listing.php?listing_id=31273770" rel="nofollow">You Are Beautiful Button</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: Leah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 02:37:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sept. 21: Last Day of Summer

It is a good thing I won’t be awake
When my true year, my new year passes on
And green leaf turns to gold and red passion
On the trees so far above my head
I’d much rather read a book
Than picture their dramatic postures
Perfect as they may be, despite all definitions
Sometimes you can’t help hating
People like that, and these flamboyant trees
Aren’t going to help me forget
That I wake up each morning to numbers droning
And instruments squawking, and teachers talking
And everything fading away into rhythm today
That is completely meaningless
And all others care for is who cares for whom
And why I skipped school today 
It was to look for the stars
In a sky drunk and obscure from city light
And lingering sun rays
That stretched out to me, in one last
Parting glance of warmth
Before the earth rolls on
And presses uncaring winter upon us

PS, this is fictionalized I would never skip school. I&#039;m one of those people who like to write persona poems.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sept. 21: Last Day of Summer</p>
<p>It is a good thing I won’t be awake<br />
When my true year, my new year passes on<br />
And green leaf turns to gold and red passion<br />
On the trees so far above my head<br />
I’d much rather read a book<br />
Than picture their dramatic postures<br />
Perfect as they may be, despite all definitions<br />
Sometimes you can’t help hating<br />
People like that, and these flamboyant trees<br />
Aren’t going to help me forget<br />
That I wake up each morning to numbers droning<br />
And instruments squawking, and teachers talking<br />
And everything fading away into rhythm today<br />
That is completely meaningless<br />
And all others care for is who cares for whom<br />
And why I skipped school today<br />
It was to look for the stars<br />
In a sky drunk and obscure from city light<br />
And lingering sun rays<br />
That stretched out to me, in one last<br />
Parting glance of warmth<br />
Before the earth rolls on<br />
And presses uncaring winter upon us</p>
<p>PS, this is fictionalized I would never skip school. I&#8217;m one of those people who like to write persona poems.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 00:54:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>(It being Tuesday 22nd here.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>(It being Tuesday 22nd here.)</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Sep 2009 00:51:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, forgive me if I use my Tuesday Tanka to do double duty again. You time things so sweetly coincidentally for me, Maestro!  (And life is busy ... if I get a chance, I might come back and write a brand new one ... but these are in fact brand new ... you know, I bet your gratuitous critic would say all these ellipses inside parentheses are incorrect. LOL.)  Oh and btw I make no claims to be expert nor traditional in tanka - I am a beginner, and write them to explore and learn.

it’s Spring Equinox
here in the South of the world
a time of balance
between the light and the dark
then new life starts as light grows





sunshine and thunder
wind and the smell of new rain
from a warm blue sky
and the blind vine thrusting up
seeking light and sustenance</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, forgive me if I use my Tuesday Tanka to do double duty again. You time things so sweetly coincidentally for me, Maestro!  (And life is busy &#8230; if I get a chance, I might come back and write a brand new one &#8230; but these are in fact brand new &#8230; you know, I bet your gratuitous critic would say all these ellipses inside parentheses are incorrect. LOL.)  Oh and btw I make no claims to be expert nor traditional in tanka &#8211; I am a beginner, and write them to explore and learn.</p>
<p>it’s Spring Equinox<br />
here in the South of the world<br />
a time of balance<br />
between the light and the dark<br />
then new life starts as light grows</p>
<p>sunshine and thunder<br />
wind and the smell of new rain<br />
from a warm blue sky<br />
and the blind vine thrusting up<br />
seeking light and sustenance</p>
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