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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 04:01:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@sheer

Love your poem so much for what it says and the way it says it, that it took me all this time to even notice it&#039;s an acrostic. What a smart idea for this prompt! :)</description>
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<p>Love your poem so much for what it says and the way it says it, that it took me all this time to even notice it&#8217;s an acrostic. What a smart idea for this prompt! <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Sep 2009 13:38:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@John 

Question: Who are your favourite poets and why?  (I&#039;m just curious.)</description>
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<p>Question: Who are your favourite poets and why?  (I&#8217;m just curious.)</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Sep 2009 13:34:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@James 

At first I couldn&#039;t see why you thought I might take offence, then realised it was the reference to Oz. 

No, I thought it was funny.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@James </p>
<p>At first I couldn&#8217;t see why you thought I might take offence, then realised it was the reference to Oz. </p>
<p>No, I thought it was funny.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 27 Sep 2009 13:26:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Extreme Weather

Coming in from the coast 
I thought what a fine morning
the sky clear after last nightâ€™s dust,
but approaching Murwillumbah I saw
thick haze along the Border Ranges
the highest peaks almost invisible
ghostly traces behind the white.

As I unpacked the car, while the wind
came in buffeting gusts, I felt it 
in the back of my throat, stinging.
Water couldnâ€™t quench that fire,
it wasnâ€™t exactly thirst. 

Itâ€™s still here, I can feel it now
just as a tickling cough â€“ even though
mid-afternoon I was wracked
by sudden sneezing, explosive, 
over and over, and shivers 
ran down my back. 

I have the central desert
inside my body. I donâ€™t know
if or when or how it will ever leave.
Too much and it might kill me.
So far it is not too much. This time.

By noon we could no longer
see it in the air. The sky was blue,
the sun shone, the day grew warm.
On the television screen tonight we saw
the rapid floodwaters in the Philippines,
rivers through Manila streets 
I walked in â€™78; counted our blessings.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Extreme Weather</p>
<p>Coming in from the coast<br />
I thought what a fine morning<br />
the sky clear after last nightâ€™s dust,<br />
but approaching Murwillumbah I saw<br />
thick haze along the Border Ranges<br />
the highest peaks almost invisible<br />
ghostly traces behind the white.</p>
<p>As I unpacked the car, while the wind<br />
came in buffeting gusts, I felt it<br />
in the back of my throat, stinging.<br />
Water couldnâ€™t quench that fire,<br />
it wasnâ€™t exactly thirst. </p>
<p>Itâ€™s still here, I can feel it now<br />
just as a tickling cough â€“ even though<br />
mid-afternoon I was wracked<br />
by sudden sneezing, explosive,<br />
over and over, and shivers<br />
ran down my back. </p>
<p>I have the central desert<br />
inside my body. I donâ€™t know<br />
if or when or how it will ever leave.<br />
Too much and it might kill me.<br />
So far it is not too much. This time.</p>
<p>By noon we could no longer<br />
see it in the air. The sky was blue,<br />
the sun shone, the day grew warm.<br />
On the television screen tonight we saw<br />
the rapid floodwaters in the Philippines,<br />
rivers through Manila streets<br />
I walked in â€™78; counted our blessings.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 13:44:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Opps. Error in the last stanza.

&quot;The gesture that implied 
Understatedly 
Very much of closeness
Without the need to be explicit in
X-rated behavior
You should only see in the
Zoo and not in public spaces.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Opps. Error in the last stanza.</p>
<p>&#8220;The gesture that implied<br />
Understatedly<br />
Very much of closeness<br />
Without the need to be explicit in<br />
X-rated behavior<br />
You should only see in the<br />
Zoo and not in public spaces.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 13:41:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A gesture

An elderly man with his arm around the
Back of an old lady
Crossed the road 
Directly in front of me
Engaged in 
Familiar conversation among couples with 
Great many years under their belts 

Holding hands
In front of me and
Just a single gesture
Kept my attention
Long after they were out of sight
Maybe it was the camaraderie
Not that they were 
Offensively close in a
Public space

Quite the contrary
Really
Subtle was 
The gesture that implied 
Understatedly 
Very much of closeness
Without the need to be explicit
Unlike many young couples engaged in 
X-rated behavior
You should only see in the
Zoo and not in public spaces.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A gesture</p>
<p>An elderly man with his arm around the<br />
Back of an old lady<br />
Crossed the road<br />
Directly in front of me<br />
Engaged in<br />
Familiar conversation among couples with<br />
Great many years under their belts </p>
<p>Holding hands<br />
In front of me and<br />
Just a single gesture<br />
Kept my attention<br />
Long after they were out of sight<br />
Maybe it was the camaraderie<br />
Not that they were<br />
Offensively close in a<br />
Public space</p>
<p>Quite the contrary<br />
Really<br />
Subtle was<br />
The gesture that implied<br />
Understatedly<br />
Very much of closeness<br />
Without the need to be explicit<br />
Unlike many young couples engaged in<br />
X-rated behavior<br />
You should only see in the<br />
Zoo and not in public spaces.</p>
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		<title>By: rki lÃ¥n</title>
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		<dc:creator>rki lÃ¥n</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 12:46:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Funny concept and idea, but i think it removes the creative freedom of a poem</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Funny concept and idea, but i think it removes the creative freedom of a poem</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 26 Sep 2009 11:02:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Every letter?  In a poem?  Fine.
I like rhythemic poetry, and with my recent responses about comical verse...
I thought I&#039;d try an anapestic variation on a limmerick....
Just one stanza.  My hats off to anyone who can make one shorter...
(my appologies to Rosemary, in case she takes offense, none was intended)

You can sort it all out...


I was married to a beautiful fox,
now her in-laws have heads full of rocks,
I kept wond&#039;ring if it was because
her whole family came here from Oz,
while she claims that I&#039;m just a vain ox.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Every letter?  In a poem?  Fine.<br />
I like rhythemic poetry, and with my recent responses about comical verse&#8230;<br />
I thought I&#8217;d try an anapestic variation on a limmerick&#8230;.<br />
Just one stanza.  My hats off to anyone who can make one shorter&#8230;<br />
(my appologies to Rosemary, in case she takes offense, none was intended)</p>
<p>You can sort it all out&#8230;</p>
<p>I was married to a beautiful fox,<br />
now her in-laws have heads full of rocks,<br />
I kept wond&#8217;ring if it was because<br />
her whole family came here from Oz,<br />
while she claims that I&#8217;m just a vain ox.</p>
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