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	<title>Comments on: 30 Poems in 30 Days 2009: Day Twenty-Eight</title>
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		<title>By: J.C. Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>J.C. Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 16:58:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Rosemary

This is the poem. You can judge its worth for yourself. Remember this was written twenty years ago...

Casablanca
 

I haven’t heard many secrets lately

Not since the night we ate whiskey balls

Watching videos with the sound down

As you told me about the night before 

You said he broke your rear-view mirror

Trying to get on top of you

And that his bald spot

With its little pimples

Shone white in the moonlight

You remembered being hungry

And wanting to listen to the radio 

I made you stretch out your hand

And connected the lines with a pen

Telling how every mark

Revealed a secret about you 

I remember how the whiskey balls

Tasted particularly like gunpowder

But that we kept dropping them on the floor

And picking them up with our teeth</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Rosemary</p>
<p>This is the poem. You can judge its worth for yourself. Remember this was written twenty years ago&#8230;</p>
<p>Casablanca</p>
<p>I haven’t heard many secrets lately</p>
<p>Not since the night we ate whiskey balls</p>
<p>Watching videos with the sound down</p>
<p>As you told me about the night before </p>
<p>You said he broke your rear-view mirror</p>
<p>Trying to get on top of you</p>
<p>And that his bald spot</p>
<p>With its little pimples</p>
<p>Shone white in the moonlight</p>
<p>You remembered being hungry</p>
<p>And wanting to listen to the radio </p>
<p>I made you stretch out your hand</p>
<p>And connected the lines with a pen</p>
<p>Telling how every mark</p>
<p>Revealed a secret about you </p>
<p>I remember how the whiskey balls</p>
<p>Tasted particularly like gunpowder</p>
<p>But that we kept dropping them on the floor</p>
<p>And picking them up with our teeth</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 02:58:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, just thought of better last line:

and await the Great Stillness.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, just thought of better last line:</p>
<p>and await the Great Stillness.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 02:55:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Stillness

With great stillness
I sit in my house by the sea,
the always moving sea
roaring at night its threats
to encroach further.

With great stillness
I stand on the cliff to watch
as wind-swept waves 
come thundering, yellow
as if carrying sickness.

And the man is far away
with the last of my money.
And the timbers creak
and the eaves rattle
as a storm approaches.

An old woman
with nowhere to go
I wrap my shawl tighter,
send the hungry cats out to hunt
and wait, in great stillness.


[Not to be taken literally!]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stillness</p>
<p>With great stillness<br />
I sit in my house by the sea,<br />
the always moving sea<br />
roaring at night its threats<br />
to encroach further.</p>
<p>With great stillness<br />
I stand on the cliff to watch<br />
as wind-swept waves<br />
come thundering, yellow<br />
as if carrying sickness.</p>
<p>And the man is far away<br />
with the last of my money.<br />
And the timbers creak<br />
and the eaves rattle<br />
as a storm approaches.</p>
<p>An old woman<br />
with nowhere to go<br />
I wrap my shawl tighter,<br />
send the hungry cats out to hunt<br />
and wait, in great stillness.</p>
<p>[Not to be taken literally!]</p>
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		<title>By: Jenny Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jenny Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 21:21:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I stare out the window
on this crisp September day
waiting for the end of summer
and the first signs of autumn
dripping on the leaves


Blood red, antique gold
jack-o-lantern orange
raspberry magenta
brilliant flashes of life
before the long winter slumber
.-= Jenny Miller&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.squidoo.com/thepoetryconnection&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Add Your Poetry&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I stare out the window<br />
on this crisp September day<br />
waiting for the end of summer<br />
and the first signs of autumn<br />
dripping on the leaves</p>
<p>Blood red, antique gold<br />
jack-o-lantern orange<br />
raspberry magenta<br />
brilliant flashes of life<br />
before the long winter slumber<br />
.-= Jenny Miller&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://www.squidoo.com/thepoetryconnection" rel="nofollow">Add Your Poetry</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 15:02:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Waiting

All through the midnight I listen
To the sound of moving cars
Driving pass on the highways
And I wait

All through the night I wait
For the sound of movement 
Any movement any sound
And I hope  

All through the daybreak I hope
Staring in emptiness 
Permeating throughout the staleness 
And I sit

All through the night
From midnight to daybreak
I listen, I wait, I hope 
And I sit waiting

For my better half
Who has left
For a better place.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Waiting</p>
<p>All through the midnight I listen<br />
To the sound of moving cars<br />
Driving pass on the highways<br />
And I wait</p>
<p>All through the night I wait<br />
For the sound of movement<br />
Any movement any sound<br />
And I hope  </p>
<p>All through the daybreak I hope<br />
Staring in emptiness<br />
Permeating throughout the staleness<br />
And I sit</p>
<p>All through the night<br />
From midnight to daybreak<br />
I listen, I wait, I hope<br />
And I sit waiting</p>
<p>For my better half<br />
Who has left<br />
For a better place.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 29 Sep 2009 03:55:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Two terrific poems, his and yours!

Oh please can we see the one of yours he said was nearly perfect?

You remind me that I have wanted for some time now to write some tributes to particular poet friends/mentors of mine who have died. Thanks for re-inspiring me!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Two terrific poems, his and yours!</p>
<p>Oh please can we see the one of yours he said was nearly perfect?</p>
<p>You remind me that I have wanted for some time now to write some tributes to particular poet friends/mentors of mine who have died. Thanks for re-inspiring me!</p>
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