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		<title>By: Suhail</title>
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		<dc:creator>Suhail</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Nov 2009 14:52:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh..It is great..
My contribution is here,


The battle field




Guide welcomed me , when I entered to the country,  The country of battle 

I was told by guide â€œWelcome to the desert  , Nothing but roar of the gun is plenty here&quot;

 

I borrowed a knife from a boy to peel mangos which I kept in my leather bag

I felt a bitter taste ,when I ate the mango .   I wondered â€œwhy&quot;

The boy who gave the knife told me that they eyes of her sisters been encompassed by that knife 

I asked, Encompassed  by  whom?  â€œBy solders&quot;

 

When I  travelled to the desert I saw the destroyed buildings and homes . 

I approached to a lake when I was thirsty. I drank from it . I had a bitter taste . I wondered â€œwhy&quot;

The guard of the lake told me that,  the place   of the lake was a place of  a hospital which is destroyed by bomb 

 

I was exhausted and sat in a bunch which was under a gigantic  a tree 

I felt a bitter smell  . I wondered â€œwhy&quot;

I was told by someone .Thirteen innocent people slaughtered upon the bunch by sword 

 

I heard the hooting of a tanker , My guide hide somewhere in pace , I was told to do so but I failed 

 

 

A traveler landed the battle field and welcomed  by a  guide

 He borrowed a pen from the guide and wrote something in his diary

The colour of the ink was red and he felt a bitter smell ,he wondered â€œwhy&quot;

â€œ The pen you writing was used by a traveler who was  killed by solders. Who wrote for us &quot;  Guide informed him 


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Suhail</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh..It is great..<br />
My contribution is here,</p>
<p>The battle field</p>
<p>Guide welcomed me , when I entered to the country,  The country of battle </p>
<p>I was told by guide â€œWelcome to the desert  , Nothing but roar of the gun is plenty here&#8221;</p>
<p>I borrowed a knife from a boy to peel mangos which I kept in my leather bag</p>
<p>I felt a bitter taste ,when I ate the mango .   I wondered â€œwhy&#8221;</p>
<p>The boy who gave the knife told me that they eyes of her sisters been encompassed by that knife </p>
<p>I asked, Encompassed  by  whom?  â€œBy solders&#8221;</p>
<p>When I  travelled to the desert I saw the destroyed buildings and homes . </p>
<p>I approached to a lake when I was thirsty. I drank from it . I had a bitter taste . I wondered â€œwhy&#8221;</p>
<p>The guard of the lake told me that,  the place   of the lake was a place of  a hospital which is destroyed by bomb </p>
<p>I was exhausted and sat in a bunch which was under a gigantic  a tree </p>
<p>I felt a bitter smell  . I wondered â€œwhy&#8221;</p>
<p>I was told by someone .Thirteen innocent people slaughtered upon the bunch by sword </p>
<p>I heard the hooting of a tanker , My guide hide somewhere in pace , I was told to do so but I failed </p>
<p>A traveler landed the battle field and welcomed  by a  guide</p>
<p> He borrowed a pen from the guide and wrote something in his diary</p>
<p>The colour of the ink was red and he felt a bitter smell ,he wondered â€œwhy&#8221;</p>
<p>â€œ The pen you writing was used by a traveler who was  killed by solders. Who wrote for us &#8221;  Guide informed him </p>
<p>By </p>
<p>Suhail</p>
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		<title>By: Connor Hasenoehrl</title>
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		<dc:creator>Connor Hasenoehrl</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Oct 2009 00:26:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I present this possible present as a present we can only prepare personally.

I have been lost living,
Sitting in my apartment,
Dreaming of a life,
Instead of living a dream.

I wake up each day wishing,
Wishing i was dreaming,
Dreaming for the death of my life,
Not worth loving,
And for the rebirth of a love,
worth living,
Love of all life,
Without hatred and strife.

If you share this dream with me,
I ask you to stop,
Stop dreaming of this life,
And begin to live this dream.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I present this possible present as a present we can only prepare personally.</p>
<p>I have been lost living,<br />
Sitting in my apartment,<br />
Dreaming of a life,<br />
Instead of living a dream.</p>
<p>I wake up each day wishing,<br />
Wishing i was dreaming,<br />
Dreaming for the death of my life,<br />
Not worth loving,<br />
And for the rebirth of a love,<br />
worth living,<br />
Love of all life,<br />
Without hatred and strife.</p>
<p>If you share this dream with me,<br />
I ask you to stop,<br />
Stop dreaming of this life,<br />
And begin to live this dream.</p>
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		<title>By: Leah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Oct 2009 00:39:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>An end of an era- friendship

I look and look at the shadow beside your face
I ought to look you in the eye, but
Iâ€™ve been looking here all along
Iâ€™ll just go on a little longer

If we were friends, I would touch you
I would tell you to tuck the hair
Behind your ear, itâ€™s escaping again
I told you a thousand times
And itâ€™s made no difference
I wish I had words for this sadness

When I leave, there will be memories
But you will have none of me
And I will ache for the things
You never learned

But I will be whole
And I will be free

Donâ€™t watch me as I walk away
I wish you wouldnâ€™t
Itâ€™s no business of yours
You never minded where I went before:
When I was wrong about you
And knew it not- ignorance!

Iâ€™ve stayed too long
Let me leave- no,
I must go.

Your face that day Iâ€™ll never forget
Old happiness cowering in your eyes
As the new tenant, hopelessness
Slipped in and beat everyone else out
I know you looked, I saw.

But I went, I went, with purpose
And nothing on my side
To begin another life</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>An end of an era- friendship</p>
<p>I look and look at the shadow beside your face<br />
I ought to look you in the eye, but<br />
Iâ€™ve been looking here all along<br />
Iâ€™ll just go on a little longer</p>
<p>If we were friends, I would touch you<br />
I would tell you to tuck the hair<br />
Behind your ear, itâ€™s escaping again<br />
I told you a thousand times<br />
And itâ€™s made no difference<br />
I wish I had words for this sadness</p>
<p>When I leave, there will be memories<br />
But you will have none of me<br />
And I will ache for the things<br />
You never learned</p>
<p>But I will be whole<br />
And I will be free</p>
<p>Donâ€™t watch me as I walk away<br />
I wish you wouldnâ€™t<br />
Itâ€™s no business of yours<br />
You never minded where I went before:<br />
When I was wrong about you<br />
And knew it not- ignorance!</p>
<p>Iâ€™ve stayed too long<br />
Let me leave- no,<br />
I must go.</p>
<p>Your face that day Iâ€™ll never forget<br />
Old happiness cowering in your eyes<br />
As the new tenant, hopelessness<br />
Slipped in and beat everyone else out<br />
I know you looked, I saw.</p>
<p>But I went, I went, with purpose<br />
And nothing on my side<br />
To begin another life</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Oct 2009 03:34:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In case anyone isn&#039;t familiar with the sevenling form (which I only just became acquainted with myself) it&#039;s &lt;a href=&quot;http://home.comcast.net/~jpdancingbear/apj_sevenling.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt; here &lt;/a&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In case anyone isn&#8217;t familiar with the sevenling form (which I only just became acquainted with myself) it&#8217;s <a href="http://home.comcast.net/~jpdancingbear/apj_sevenling.html" rel="nofollow"> here </a></p>
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		<title>By: J.C. Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>J.C. Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 17:00:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you all for sticking it out. It was a great 30 Days and I appreciate everyone who contributed.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you all for sticking it out. It was a great 30 Days and I appreciate everyone who contributed.</p>
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		<title>By: Jenny Miller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jenny Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 16:44:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This cracked, splintered path
Layered with years of grime and soot
Trodden, not happily, but sullenly
With feet dragging beneath the weight
Of crimes piled on frail shoulders
With tears frozen in muddy streaks
On a countenance furrowed by pain
Ends here

I choose to leave this path behind
Step off the trail of tears and
Look for level ground where footing is sure
I will shake the dust of past injustice
And move toward gentle grass
Planted lovingly by different hands
Than those that steered me toward
The road of self-destruction and despair
It ends here
I choose joy
.-= Jenny Miller&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://www.squidoo.com/thepoetryconnection&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Add Your Poetry&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This cracked, splintered path<br />
Layered with years of grime and soot<br />
Trodden, not happily, but sullenly<br />
With feet dragging beneath the weight<br />
Of crimes piled on frail shoulders<br />
With tears frozen in muddy streaks<br />
On a countenance furrowed by pain<br />
Ends here</p>
<p>I choose to leave this path behind<br />
Step off the trail of tears and<br />
Look for level ground where footing is sure<br />
I will shake the dust of past injustice<br />
And move toward gentle grass<br />
Planted lovingly by different hands<br />
Than those that steered me toward<br />
The road of self-destruction and despair<br />
It ends here<br />
I choose joy<br />
.-= Jenny Miller&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://www.squidoo.com/thepoetryconnection" rel="nofollow">Add Your Poetry</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: GGG</title>
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		<dc:creator>GGG</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 16:16:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>In that place of last thought
a man will think of what was not
and of all that was and is to come
It will be seen by some but shared by none
for in that last breath there is no friend
except yourself all alone in the end</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In that place of last thought<br />
a man will think of what was not<br />
and of all that was and is to come<br />
It will be seen by some but shared by none<br />
for in that last breath there is no friend<br />
except yourself all alone in the end</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 14:28:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh, still editing as i go.

Replacement last line: 

When he moved away, he took not one plant.



Cheers all, until next year!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, still editing as i go.</p>
<p>Replacement last line: </p>
<p>When he moved away, he took not one plant.</p>
<p>Cheers all, until next year!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 14:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sevenling (Orchids and clover)

Orchids and clover hung from pots
on the outside wall of his house,
and that strange, white night-blooming flower.

The stars were out, shining clearly,
and moonlight vied with lamplight,
illuminating his hanging garden faintly ...

until he moved away, taking not one plant.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sevenling (Orchids and clover)</p>
<p>Orchids and clover hung from pots<br />
on the outside wall of his house,<br />
and that strange, white night-blooming flower.</p>
<p>The stars were out, shining clearly,<br />
and moonlight vied with lamplight,<br />
illuminating his hanging garden faintly &#8230;</p>
<p>until he moved away, taking not one plant.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Sep 2009 13:31:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>End

I guess this is it
A full stop 
Instead of a comma

An end 
Instead of a beginning

Close the loop
Finish the sentence

Because we end &lt;i&gt;here&lt;/i&gt;.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>End</p>
<p>I guess this is it<br />
A full stop<br />
Instead of a comma</p>
<p>An end<br />
Instead of a beginning</p>
<p>Close the loop<br />
Finish the sentence</p>
<p>Because we end <i>here</i>.</p>
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