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	<title>Comments on: 30 Poems in 30 Days 2009: Day Ten</title>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Sep 2009 12:55:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is difficult....
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Time is moving so quickly
There is no time to think
Let alone trying to write
Something fine for a site
But I hope you’ll be glad
To know at least I have 
Found some time to sleep</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is difficult&#8230;.<br />
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<p>Time is moving so quickly<br />
There is no time to think<br />
Let alone trying to write<br />
Something fine for a site<br />
But I hope you’ll be glad<br />
To know at least I have<br />
Found some time to sleep</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:24:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sorry, I mean *pattern of alternate lines.</description>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:23:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>At first I thought, &quot;Well this will be something new&quot; then realised – duh! – I&#039;ve been doing it for some time on twitter, where I write tweetpoems which all have to be 140 characters or less including spaces (and in my case including the #poetry tag).

I found an old poem that hadn&#039;t quite worked for me, but which - fortuitously - had lines almost the same number of characters. The process tightened it up in interesting ways. I included spaces, to give a patter of alternate lines: 26/23 repeated all the way down.


Anniversary
(to the ghost of my second husband)

It&#039;s June 11. On this date		
in 1966 you married me.		
It was your idea. I wanted		
to live outside the law		
had fulfilled the fantasy			
of the Cinderella day, 		
knew how quickly all that			 
collapsed – didn’t need		
a repeat. But you’d never 		
been married; thrilled,		
wanted public celebration.		
And your mother told me		
how she was making – never	
questioning it – a new 		
hat for her son’s wedding.		
At that point, I caved.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At first I thought, &#8220;Well this will be something new&#8221; then realised – duh! – I&#8217;ve been doing it for some time on twitter, where I write tweetpoems which all have to be 140 characters or less including spaces (and in my case including the #poetry tag).</p>
<p>I found an old poem that hadn&#8217;t quite worked for me, but which &#8211; fortuitously &#8211; had lines almost the same number of characters. The process tightened it up in interesting ways. I included spaces, to give a patter of alternate lines: 26/23 repeated all the way down.</p>
<p>Anniversary<br />
(to the ghost of my second husband)</p>
<p>It&#8217;s June 11. On this date<br />
in 1966 you married me.<br />
It was your idea. I wanted<br />
to live outside the law<br />
had fulfilled the fantasy<br />
of the Cinderella day,<br />
knew how quickly all that<br />
collapsed – didn’t need<br />
a repeat. But you’d never<br />
been married; thrilled,<br />
wanted public celebration.<br />
And your mother told me<br />
how she was making – never<br />
questioning it – a new<br />
hat for her son’s wedding.<br />
At that point, I caved.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 17:30:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John,

I enjoyed the instruction.

I even had fun with the poem...

It&#039;s just thought it would be funny to focus on the counting...
I wrote it in notepad, where all characters are drawn the smae width.
In that format, it is visually obvious that every lint is exactly the same length,
except thelast which is longer...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John,</p>
<p>I enjoyed the instruction.</p>
<p>I even had fun with the poem&#8230;</p>
<p>It&#8217;s just thought it would be funny to focus on the counting&#8230;<br />
I wrote it in notepad, where all characters are drawn the smae width.<br />
In that format, it is visually obvious that every lint is exactly the same length,<br />
except thelast which is longer&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: J.C. Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>J.C. Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 16:51:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Pal,

You&#039;re the one who was complaining that the posts weren&#039;t instructional enough.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Pal,</p>
<p>You&#8217;re the one who was complaining that the posts weren&#8217;t instructional enough.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 12:43:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@John.
You want us to count the characters?.
OK.  Count everything, spaces, puctuation.  Count it all!

Here is my humble submission

Protest.

Every jot and tiddle,
every letter or dash,
each mark of punctua-
tion, must be counted
and weighed to see if
it the budget allows.
Damn! I&#039;m not a poet:
I&#039;m a blooming accountant!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@John.<br />
You want us to count the characters?.<br />
OK.  Count everything, spaces, puctuation.  Count it all!</p>
<p>Here is my humble submission</p>
<p>Protest.</p>
<p>Every jot and tiddle,<br />
every letter or dash,<br />
each mark of punctua-<br />
tion, must be counted<br />
and weighed to see if<br />
it the budget allows.<br />
Damn! I&#8217;m not a poet:<br />
I&#8217;m a blooming accountant!</p>
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