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		<title>By: J.C. Hewitt</title>
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		<dc:creator>J.C. Hewitt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Sep 2009 16:54:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for stopping by TopBanana. The pictures on your blog are very nice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for stopping by TopBanana. The pictures on your blog are very nice.</p>
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		<title>By: TopBanana</title>
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		<dc:creator>TopBanana</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 24 Sep 2009 09:22:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>spot runs round and round
  chasing his tail; he stops and
pants; plops to the ground.
.-= TopBanana&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/zenbananas/~3/qUwK6gcEWBw/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Where are you going?&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>spot runs round and round<br />
  chasing his tail; he stops and<br />
pants; plops to the ground.<br />
.-= TopBanana&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/zenbananas/~3/qUwK6gcEWBw/" rel="nofollow">Where are you going?</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: James Garner</title>
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		<dc:creator>James Garner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Sep 2009 15:15:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OK,

The poem involves an animal, albeit a small animal at the very end.
 had troubles contemplating a poem &quot;about&quot; and animal, and came up with this.
Enjoy.. yeah, Iknow it&#039;s late.


Siesta Kitchen

A smallish sultry room is cooled
by the shade of a rusted tin roof
Sunlight spills through an open window,
No breeze billows the old sheer curtains.

The previous color of the walls 
begin to tint the white washed walls, 
their dusty chalk rubbed off by wear
long past and swept away with care.

The well-worm broom leans on the wall,
and keeps a lonlely vigil over
a wooden table, knicked and scrtched,
which covers three straight back chairs.

A couple of pots and handful of dishes, 
clenaed and stacked, dry by the sink.
An old dishrag draped over the faucet,
has a drop forming on its lowest point.

A still life except for a single fly
that buzzes in a lazy arc and lands
on the dishrag and crawls around. 
It then resumes its lazy flight.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK,</p>
<p>The poem involves an animal, albeit a small animal at the very end.<br />
 had troubles contemplating a poem &#8220;about&#8221; and animal, and came up with this.<br />
Enjoy.. yeah, Iknow it&#8217;s late.</p>
<p>Siesta Kitchen</p>
<p>A smallish sultry room is cooled<br />
by the shade of a rusted tin roof<br />
Sunlight spills through an open window,<br />
No breeze billows the old sheer curtains.</p>
<p>The previous color of the walls<br />
begin to tint the white washed walls,<br />
their dusty chalk rubbed off by wear<br />
long past and swept away with care.</p>
<p>The well-worm broom leans on the wall,<br />
and keeps a lonlely vigil over<br />
a wooden table, knicked and scrtched,<br />
which covers three straight back chairs.</p>
<p>A couple of pots and handful of dishes,<br />
clenaed and stacked, dry by the sink.<br />
An old dishrag draped over the faucet,<br />
has a drop forming on its lowest point.</p>
<p>A still life except for a single fly<br />
that buzzes in a lazy arc and lands<br />
on the dishrag and crawls around.<br />
It then resumes its lazy flight.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 02:09:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ha ha, I&#039;m very well acquainted with all the cats here!  Or with some just like them. :)

Leah, I very much like your water piece, particularly the spider simile and crocodile metaphor!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ha ha, I&#8217;m very well acquainted with all the cats here!  Or with some just like them. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Leah, I very much like your water piece, particularly the spider simile and crocodile metaphor!</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 15:31:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mourning the Goat

There is no goat.
I can hardly believe it.
But it has been declared
On national TV
By the head man.
I must  accept it.

I remember my Dad
Personally ironing 
His white apron
With the blue and gold,
Its tiny suitcase,
And my Mum poking fun.

Hearing the banter,
I loved to imagine
Jolly half-naked fathers
Riding that billy-goat
In their nice clean aprons.
As it pranced, tossing its horns.

That must be when I first
Heard the word “regalia”.
Much older, I liked to think
Of an inner circle of Magic,
And the goat perhaps 
A metaphor for Pan.

But to learn that there is no
Goat, no ride, no dancing,
No half-nude cavorting
Of any kind – that’s cruel.
No secrets, no mystery …
No more magic.


Note: Dan Browns’ next book will be about Freemasonry.
The Masons have pre-emptively revealed that they have no secret rituals.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mourning the Goat</p>
<p>There is no goat.<br />
I can hardly believe it.<br />
But it has been declared<br />
On national TV<br />
By the head man.<br />
I must  accept it.</p>
<p>I remember my Dad<br />
Personally ironing<br />
His white apron<br />
With the blue and gold,<br />
Its tiny suitcase,<br />
And my Mum poking fun.</p>
<p>Hearing the banter,<br />
I loved to imagine<br />
Jolly half-naked fathers<br />
Riding that billy-goat<br />
In their nice clean aprons.<br />
As it pranced, tossing its horns.</p>
<p>That must be when I first<br />
Heard the word “regalia”.<br />
Much older, I liked to think<br />
Of an inner circle of Magic,<br />
And the goat perhaps<br />
A metaphor for Pan.</p>
<p>But to learn that there is no<br />
Goat, no ride, no dancing,<br />
No half-nude cavorting<br />
Of any kind – that’s cruel.<br />
No secrets, no mystery …<br />
No more magic.</p>
<p>Note: Dan Browns’ next book will be about Freemasonry.<br />
The Masons have pre-emptively revealed that they have no secret rituals.</p>
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		<title>By: sheer</title>
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		<dc:creator>sheer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 12:38:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Scratches on the door
Fur on the chair
Loud screeching
In the middle of the night 
As they battle it out
Staking their territories
Against the strays

Ready to snatch
By stealth or speed
They loiter around 
Looking innocent
All the while ready 
To act

The cats in my house
Are chasing me out.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Scratches on the door<br />
Fur on the chair<br />
Loud screeching<br />
In the middle of the night<br />
As they battle it out<br />
Staking their territories<br />
Against the strays</p>
<p>Ready to snatch<br />
By stealth or speed<br />
They loiter around<br />
Looking innocent<br />
All the while ready<br />
To act</p>
<p>The cats in my house<br />
Are chasing me out.</p>
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		<title>By: Joy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 11:14:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tortoises Walk Slowly (Not!)

What is it they say?
Don&#039;t walk so slowly
like a tortoise
But my tortoises
Walk real fast
like an F1 driver
Once, they walked so fast
They almost disappeared
like a puff of smoke
So, whoever said that must have
Had a really weird tortoise
like an old man.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tortoises Walk Slowly (Not!)</p>
<p>What is it they say?<br />
Don&#8217;t walk so slowly<br />
like a tortoise<br />
But my tortoises<br />
Walk real fast<br />
like an F1 driver<br />
Once, they walked so fast<br />
They almost disappeared<br />
like a puff of smoke<br />
So, whoever said that must have<br />
Had a really weird tortoise<br />
like an old man.</p>
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		<title>By: Leah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 01:48:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I took the animal bit loosely, I admit.

The kayak slips past the yawning sea which is
Sleepy under white clouds and forgives the transgression
Of the paddle stealing power and the illusion of mastery
Which is often with us, though we are prettified parasites
Underneath our unknowing sky.

We skim like water-spiders, we feel we are
Made for this place, at one with ourselves,
And maybe we are, and maybe we aren’t.
We believe we are molded for these moments
Where we hold the world between two hands and
Breathe in victory and sweat and wonder-
That we belong where we are best, but
We forget we weren’t born with paddles in hand,
Who’s to say our best act isn’t mediocre to minds,
Dragged from the depths of our selves, but lasting,
But a girdle ‘round misfortune and important as
The beams of light that cities stand on tiptoe for.

The sea is vast, and right now it is a resting crocodile
With the spines of its back just barely tipping above
Into waves that we crest.
Later, the sea will rise and snap at the shore
And roll and tumble through the water with
All the certainty of death until the stone, the brick,
The book it took is changed, and we remember
That nature effaces what doesn’t belong.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I took the animal bit loosely, I admit.</p>
<p>The kayak slips past the yawning sea which is<br />
Sleepy under white clouds and forgives the transgression<br />
Of the paddle stealing power and the illusion of mastery<br />
Which is often with us, though we are prettified parasites<br />
Underneath our unknowing sky.</p>
<p>We skim like water-spiders, we feel we are<br />
Made for this place, at one with ourselves,<br />
And maybe we are, and maybe we aren’t.<br />
We believe we are molded for these moments<br />
Where we hold the world between two hands and<br />
Breathe in victory and sweat and wonder-<br />
That we belong where we are best, but<br />
We forget we weren’t born with paddles in hand,<br />
Who’s to say our best act isn’t mediocre to minds,<br />
Dragged from the depths of our selves, but lasting,<br />
But a girdle ‘round misfortune and important as<br />
The beams of light that cities stand on tiptoe for.</p>
<p>The sea is vast, and right now it is a resting crocodile<br />
With the spines of its back just barely tipping above<br />
Into waves that we crest.<br />
Later, the sea will rise and snap at the shore<br />
And roll and tumble through the water with<br />
All the certainty of death until the stone, the brick,<br />
The book it took is changed, and we remember<br />
That nature effaces what doesn’t belong.</p>
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