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		<title>By: Rebecca</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:35:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi! I am 16, and I like to write, but I am not very good (in my opinion) and writing poems and I would like to get better.  I am open to suggestions on how to improve my poetry.  I might not be able to write a poem a day, because I am busy with school and such, but I will try.  Anyway, here is my poem.  

Dog Patterns

The pattern of toothprints in plastic,
The work of a dog.
A trail of destruction follows his wagging tail.
Anger fumes within me.
Where is that chewing monster?
He evades my grasp.
My sister helps me put him out.
I glare, he whines.
How much longer can I put up with him?
That piece of pestilance!
The novelty of a dog has long worn off.
It always does.
That is our family&#039;s pattern with dogs.



Yes, I was mad at our dog when I wrote this.  Please tell me what you think.  
Thanks,
Rebecca</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi! I am 16, and I like to write, but I am not very good (in my opinion) and writing poems and I would like to get better.  I am open to suggestions on how to improve my poetry.  I might not be able to write a poem a day, because I am busy with school and such, but I will try.  Anyway, here is my poem.  </p>
<p>Dog Patterns</p>
<p>The pattern of toothprints in plastic,<br />
The work of a dog.<br />
A trail of destruction follows his wagging tail.<br />
Anger fumes within me.<br />
Where is that chewing monster?<br />
He evades my grasp.<br />
My sister helps me put him out.<br />
I glare, he whines.<br />
How much longer can I put up with him?<br />
That piece of pestilance!<br />
The novelty of a dog has long worn off.<br />
It always does.<br />
That is our family&#8217;s pattern with dogs.</p>
<p>Yes, I was mad at our dog when I wrote this.  Please tell me what you think.<br />
Thanks,<br />
Rebecca</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Sep 2009 10:12:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good one, Ronda!  And I love that it&#039;s all one sentence - clever. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good one, Ronda!  And I love that it&#8217;s all one sentence &#8211; clever. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Ronda Levine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ronda Levine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 Sep 2009 11:03:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Love Patterns
The shadows on the wall make patterns
Our hands clasp and rise over shadow heads
The light glimmers through the blinds
It peaks from behind the blanket we hung
To keep out this early morning light
We lay together, silent, your head nuzzled
Into the back of my neck
Our chests rise and fall at the same time
As we perform the simple act of living
In perfect unison
-breathe in breathe out-
The sounds of cars on the busy street outside
Mimic an ocean’s waves
Sending a sporadic “whoosh” here and there
Chaotic and unpredictable
Not like us,
Your chest against my back
Your knees curved into my bent knees
Our lives a metronome for creativity
Fastidious, sleep descends upon us
Light and noise fades behind her dark hands</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love Patterns<br />
The shadows on the wall make patterns<br />
Our hands clasp and rise over shadow heads<br />
The light glimmers through the blinds<br />
It peaks from behind the blanket we hung<br />
To keep out this early morning light<br />
We lay together, silent, your head nuzzled<br />
Into the back of my neck<br />
Our chests rise and fall at the same time<br />
As we perform the simple act of living<br />
In perfect unison<br />
-breathe in breathe out-<br />
The sounds of cars on the busy street outside<br />
Mimic an ocean’s waves<br />
Sending a sporadic “whoosh” here and there<br />
Chaotic and unpredictable<br />
Not like us,<br />
Your chest against my back<br />
Your knees curved into my bent knees<br />
Our lives a metronome for creativity<br />
Fastidious, sleep descends upon us<br />
Light and noise fades behind her dark hands</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2009 09:00:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hehehe! the more the merrier. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hehehe! the more the merrier. <img src='http://www.poewar.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: S.E.Ingraham</title>
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		<dc:creator>S.E.Ingraham</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 17:41:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh no, another siren call to write a poem a day! Will the muse within me resist? I rather doubt it. Rosemary, you sly thing - letting this fly on FaceBook...

As the stars above form their pattern
With invisible lines joined to form
What man has deemed constellations

So go the starry framed ideas
Within my mind; one here, one there
Then linked with threads so slight

T&#039;would take a map-maker or
Mind-reader extrodinaire to
Chart the course of thoughts

Racing along these paths
Eventually carving out the finished
Pictures of who I dream to be</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh no, another siren call to write a poem a day! Will the muse within me resist? I rather doubt it. Rosemary, you sly thing &#8211; letting this fly on FaceBook&#8230;</p>
<p>As the stars above form their pattern<br />
With invisible lines joined to form<br />
What man has deemed constellations</p>
<p>So go the starry framed ideas<br />
Within my mind; one here, one there<br />
Then linked with threads so slight</p>
<p>T&#8217;would take a map-maker or<br />
Mind-reader extrodinaire to<br />
Chart the course of thoughts</p>
<p>Racing along these paths<br />
Eventually carving out the finished<br />
Pictures of who I dream to be</p>
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		<title>By: GGG</title>
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		<dc:creator>GGG</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 17:27:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Patterns of the stars 
On a rainy night
Hidden from my sight 
Wars waging on mars

Patterns of lightening 
Untraceable in sky
Tear falling from one eye 
Thunder so frightening

Energy flowing in unseen patterns
Glowing galaxies in lit lanterns
The Universe unfixed in all patterns</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Patterns of the stars<br />
On a rainy night<br />
Hidden from my sight<br />
Wars waging on mars</p>
<p>Patterns of lightening<br />
Untraceable in sky<br />
Tear falling from one eye<br />
Thunder so frightening</p>
<p>Energy flowing in unseen patterns<br />
Glowing galaxies in lit lanterns<br />
The Universe unfixed in all patterns</p>
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		<title>By: Joy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 03 Sep 2009 12:49:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Rosemary: noted. I will continue writing, but I just started really recently (like, about 2 weeks ago, for a SCHOOL PROJECT, of all things), so it&#039;s still kinda difficult to write one...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Rosemary: noted. I will continue writing, but I just started really recently (like, about 2 weeks ago, for a SCHOOL PROJECT, of all things), so it&#8217;s still kinda difficult to write one&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 23:11:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why do I write poetry? 

1) I was introduced to it very young, and thought that making it would be the best thing I could ever do with my life; I wanted to introduce more of that beauty into the world. 

2) It&#039;s in the genes. My Dad and many members of his family wrote poems. I started as a small child.

3) I can&#039;t not.

I don&#039;t do it because I can&#039;t write novels. Poetry is what I most WANT to write. (Second comes non-fiction, as in articles/essays/journalling/blogging.) However I have tried novels, just to see, and mine are terrible too lol! I also tried short stories, with better results – even got a couple published – but basically I don&#039;t particularly enjoy writing fiction. Except in poetry, oddly enough. Strange how people assume all one&#039;s poems are autobiographical. Many of mine are; many others are fictions, including the one for today&#039;s prompt:


Monologue

The pattern of my life
Is little changed.
I walk always with you

That music we used to play
Echoes here still
As if yesterday it sounded

Sweet in the keen memory
And softly sad
Though I no longer weep.

Spring is greening the hills
With welcome rain.
We pray it will be enough.

The seasons too are unchanged.
Life continues on
In familiar, relentless pattern.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why do I write poetry? </p>
<p>1) I was introduced to it very young, and thought that making it would be the best thing I could ever do with my life; I wanted to introduce more of that beauty into the world. </p>
<p>2) It&#8217;s in the genes. My Dad and many members of his family wrote poems. I started as a small child.</p>
<p>3) I can&#8217;t not.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t do it because I can&#8217;t write novels. Poetry is what I most WANT to write. (Second comes non-fiction, as in articles/essays/journalling/blogging.) However I have tried novels, just to see, and mine are terrible too lol! I also tried short stories, with better results – even got a couple published – but basically I don&#8217;t particularly enjoy writing fiction. Except in poetry, oddly enough. Strange how people assume all one&#8217;s poems are autobiographical. Many of mine are; many others are fictions, including the one for today&#8217;s prompt:</p>
<p>Monologue</p>
<p>The pattern of my life<br />
Is little changed.<br />
I walk always with you</p>
<p>That music we used to play<br />
Echoes here still<br />
As if yesterday it sounded</p>
<p>Sweet in the keen memory<br />
And softly sad<br />
Though I no longer weep.</p>
<p>Spring is greening the hills<br />
With welcome rain.<br />
We pray it will be enough.</p>
<p>The seasons too are unchanged.<br />
Life continues on<br />
In familiar, relentless pattern.</p>
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		<title>By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosemary Nissen-Wade</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 15:28:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh frabjous day, you&#039;re doing it again! I couldn&#039;t manage it for long last time, hope to do better this year. 

Way past my bedtime just now, so I&#039;ll chime in again later. 

Meanwhile just want to say quickly to Joy that your poem has a verve that&#039;s very attractive, and the best way to improve is - as John says - to keep writing (and also reading heaps of good stuff).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh frabjous day, you&#8217;re doing it again! I couldn&#8217;t manage it for long last time, hope to do better this year. </p>
<p>Way past my bedtime just now, so I&#8217;ll chime in again later. </p>
<p>Meanwhile just want to say quickly to Joy that your poem has a verve that&#8217;s very attractive, and the best way to improve is &#8211; as John says &#8211; to keep writing (and also reading heaps of good stuff).</p>
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		<title>By: Joy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 02 Sep 2009 12:11:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@John: thanks for the encouragement. I will try to keep on writing for the next 29 days, but it depends on the school, and how they decide to torture me... The misery of being a student, never having much free time that you can call your own...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@John: thanks for the encouragement. I will try to keep on writing for the next 29 days, but it depends on the school, and how they decide to torture me&#8230; The misery of being a student, never having much free time that you can call your own&#8230;</p>
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