Comments on: 10 Days of Character Building: Possessions http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/ Writing Career Center Sat, 20 Mar 2010 01:51:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Oceans Green http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-222327 Oceans Green Fri, 03 Apr 2009 12:07:14 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-222327 Hi, We ran across your site and i have some ideas to share about “Biodegradable Packaging” it offers eco friendly, non toxic and sustainable products. This products design to decompose quickly, completely and safe without leaving any residues. Its 100% no harm to human and enviroment. Thanks, we'll come back often. Thanks again, Oceans Green Hi,

We ran across your site and i have some ideas to share about “Biodegradable Packaging” it offers eco friendly, non toxic and sustainable products. This products design to decompose quickly, completely and safe without leaving any residues. Its 100% no harm to human and enviroment.

Thanks, we’ll come back often.

Thanks again,

Oceans Green

]]> By: MewCocoa http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-222058 MewCocoa Wed, 11 Feb 2009 03:52:44 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-222058 I'm new to this site and I'm young, and I wanted to try this out. I've been writing and thinking about a story for awhile, and I think this place will help me finish my other stories. Nazu Komotori ( An exerpt from my story) I glanced at the seashell clock on the patterned blue walls. It was almost time to be fashionably early. I grabbed my precious pen, notepad, and flashcards and stuffed them in my black and white striped backpack. I glanced around the old, battered house. It looks like grandmother is living in the right home, its exactly like her. I shrugged on my black jacket with white X’s dashed on it, my favorite one. Before leaving I looked back inside the house and closed my eyes. Maybe today will be different. I’m new to this site and I’m young, and I wanted to try this out. I’ve been writing and thinking about a story for awhile, and I think this place will help me finish my other stories.

Nazu Komotori
( An exerpt from my story)

I glanced at the seashell clock on the patterned blue walls. It was almost time to be fashionably early. I grabbed my precious pen, notepad, and flashcards and stuffed them in my black and white striped backpack. I glanced around the old, battered house. It looks like grandmother is living in the right home, its exactly like her. I shrugged on my black jacket with white X’s dashed on it, my favorite one. Before leaving I looked back inside the house and closed my eyes.

Maybe today will be different.

]]> By: Meg@ Belt Buckles http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-215570 Meg@ Belt Buckles Wed, 27 Aug 2008 02:01:40 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-215570 I think a charcters fashion is defintely a very important stroy lead, as well as the way the eat, what they keep in their wallets or what color they painted they kitchen I think a charcters fashion is defintely a very important stroy lead, as well as the way the eat, what they keep in their wallets or what color they painted they kitchen

]]> By: 10 Days of Character Building: Wrap Up | Writer's Resource Center http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-127445 10 Days of Character Building: Wrap Up | Writer's Resource Center Thu, 01 Nov 2007 21:47:15 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-127445 [...] 10 Days of Character Building: Possessions [...] [...] 10 Days of Character Building: Possessions [...]

]]> By: John Hewitt http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-126114 John Hewitt Sun, 28 Oct 2007 18:24:40 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-126114 Shirley, Ty's possessions definitely reflect a person who is torn between two lives. He likes some of the trappings of his success, but can't commit enough to convert his life over to the tidy materialism that his girlfriend represents. He feels he has to hide or suppress his creative side, probably because he has been led to think those parts of him are wrong or immature. Shirley,
Ty’s possessions definitely reflect a person who is torn between two lives. He likes some of the trappings of his success, but can’t commit enough to convert his life over to the tidy materialism that his girlfriend represents. He feels he has to hide or suppress his creative side, probably because he has been led to think those parts of him are wrong or immature.

]]> By: Rianon http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-124719 Rianon Wed, 24 Oct 2007 12:47:28 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-124719 Rosemary, Thank you :) Connie, I agree with Rosemary!!! Rosemary,

Thank you :)

Connie,

I agree with Rosemary!!!

]]> By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-124610 Rosemary Nissen-Wade Wed, 24 Oct 2007 00:12:15 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-124610 Connie: Your Great Mother poem here has immediately become one of my favourites. R & J: Sending you good wishes. Shirley: Interesting character. Connie: Your Great Mother poem here has immediately become one of my favourites.

R & J: Sending you good wishes.

Shirley: Interesting character.

]]> By: Rianon http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-124570 Rianon Tue, 23 Oct 2007 21:08:53 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-124570 Josh, :) Connie, Thank you, I'm gunna try and write tonight. Josh,

:)

Connie,

Thank you, I’m gunna try and write tonight.

]]> By: Josh Sulkers http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-124562 Josh Sulkers Tue, 23 Oct 2007 20:38:18 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-124562 Rianon, Like I Promised You From The Beginning Everything Is Gonna Be Ok... My Knee Is In Pretty Bad Shape And I Hope That It Is Bad Enough. But Anyways I Like The Ideas You Gave Me I Will See What I Can Come Up With. Also I May Be Busy Part Of This Evening But I Should Be Free For The Most Part. I.L.U.T.T.E Rianon,

Like I Promised You From The Beginning Everything Is Gonna Be Ok… My Knee Is In Pretty Bad Shape And I Hope That It Is Bad Enough. But Anyways I Like The Ideas You Gave Me I Will See What I Can Come Up With. Also I May Be Busy Part Of This Evening But I Should Be Free For The Most Part.

I.L.U.T.T.E

]]> By: Rianon http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/comment-page-1/#comment-124546 Rianon Tue, 23 Oct 2007 19:09:23 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-posessions/#comment-124546 Shirley, thank you, i think that we will be just fine. i'm jsut scared that something may bappen to him. here is a peom i wrote about him and how i feel about this whole situation: blurred uneasy to see our future uncertain my stomach in milions of knots i can't eat i went from 125 to 113 in just one week i can't stop crying my body is dehydrated unable to injest anything. a fear of losing you is uncomprehendible a fear of never seeing you again rips me to pieces i can't see straight i can't live i need him and he needs me hard to breathe nausea arises bile comes up with every breath not knowing the inevitable where meant to be together where not supposed to be apart my parents love him they are also worried I love him with all of my heart I know he feels the same he owns me my body is his i feel his warmth i feel his love i belong to him please stay with me i will always love you no matter what i will always be here for you no matter what i will always protect you i will be your shelter i will be your gaurdian angel i will be yours forever Shirley,

thank you, i think that we will be just fine. i’m jsut scared that something may bappen to him. here is a peom i wrote about him and how i feel about this whole situation:

blurred

uneasy to see
our future uncertain
my stomach in milions of knots
i can’t eat
i went from 125 to 113 in just one week
i can’t stop crying
my body is dehydrated
unable to injest anything.

a fear of losing you
is uncomprehendible
a fear of never seeing you again
rips me to pieces
i can’t see straight
i can’t live
i need him
and he needs me

hard to breathe
nausea arises
bile comes up with every breath
not knowing the inevitable
where meant to be together
where not supposed to be apart
my parents love him
they are also worried

I love him with all of my heart
I know he feels the same
he owns me
my body is his
i feel his warmth
i feel his love
i belong to him
please stay with me

i will always love you
no matter what
i will always be here for you
no matter what
i will always protect you
i will be your shelter
i will be your gaurdian angel
i will be yours forever

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