Comments on: 10 Days of Character Building: Biography http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/ Solutions for Writers Wed, 18 Nov 2009 15:59:53 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: MewCocoa http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-222059 MewCocoa Wed, 11 Feb 2009 04:16:47 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-222059 It me again. Man I love this site. Kakou: The Insecure Runaway Statistics: Gender: Male Age: 15 Birth date: December 16, 1993 Blood Type: AB (with an extra something in there) Hair /Color: Purple, Dark, Short, usually messy. Eyes: Both Yellow all the time. Usually a little beady, dark line from lack of sleep. Clothing Style: Usually dark, grey colors. Danger level: Extremely Dangerous, Keep Locked Up. Favorite Food: Lollipops. Other Physical things: Teddy Bear. Collar with a certain type of tracking machine in it (But he doesn’t know that it does.) Life: Was contained in a special reinforcement cell for most of his life, from age 5 to now. He was contained in a Facility off the shore of Koruma Island (Where Lydia Lives in my novel) that fakes what is actually going on there by naming itself, “The Animal Testing and Veterinary Facility.” It was actually a place where evil experiments, torture and others were happening to only a lot of people (including Nemic, and Kakou, not so much Noein.) He was kept in there alone, with no one but his stuffed bear to keep him company in the darkness. He was tortured/tested on by how long he could stay awake. If he drifted off to sleep, the Scientists would electrify him a bit with a certain machine. So now he has an irrational fear of Lightning, loud electricity, and cramped, Dark places. He has to have his bear with him all the time to soothe his unstable mind, he does lose it etc. He will go crazy looking for it. He escaped the facility by going all out and using his destructive powers (he can be deadly, teeth, claws, strength, anything else he can use) to violently steal a boat and leave the island on where the facility was. Not knowing how to drive it, he crashed on the Beach of Koruma Island, only to meet up with Nemic and Lydia later on. He is usually calm, but is prone to outbursts and sudden mood swings. He is part of a four person set that can be used to resurrect great power; his blood is like a key. His parents Shuria and Nason worked for the Facility’s Directors and helped make their own son into an experiment. They thought it was for the greater good. (This was made before I read this post) It me again. Man I love this site.

Kakou: The Insecure Runaway

Statistics:
Gender: Male
Age: 15

Birth date: December 16, 1993

Blood Type: AB (with an extra something in there)

Hair /Color: Purple, Dark, Short, usually messy.

Eyes: Both Yellow all the time. Usually a little beady, dark line from lack of sleep.

Clothing Style: Usually dark, grey colors.
Danger level: Extremely Dangerous, Keep Locked Up.

Favorite Food: Lollipops.
Other Physical things: Teddy Bear. Collar with a certain type of tracking machine in it (But he doesn’t know that it does.)

Life: Was contained in a special reinforcement cell for most of his life, from age 5 to now. He was contained in a Facility off the shore of Koruma Island (Where Lydia Lives in my novel) that fakes what is actually going on there by naming itself, “The Animal Testing and Veterinary Facility.” It was actually a place where evil experiments, torture and others were happening to only a lot of people (including Nemic, and Kakou, not so much Noein.)
He was kept in there alone, with no one but his stuffed bear to keep him company in the darkness. He was tortured/tested on by how long he could stay awake. If he drifted off to sleep, the Scientists would electrify him a bit with a certain machine. So now he has an irrational fear of Lightning, loud electricity, and cramped, Dark places.
He has to have his bear with him all the time to soothe his unstable mind, he does lose it etc. He will go crazy looking for it. He escaped the facility by going all out and using his destructive powers (he can be deadly, teeth, claws, strength, anything else he can use) to violently steal a boat and leave the island on where the facility was. Not knowing how to drive it, he crashed on the Beach of Koruma Island, only to meet up with Nemic and Lydia later on. He is usually calm, but is prone to outbursts and sudden mood swings. He is part of a four person set that can be used to resurrect great power; his blood is like a key.
His parents Shuria and Nason worked for the Facility’s Directors and helped make their own son into an experiment. They thought it was for the greater good.

(This was made before I read this post)

]]> By: Louis O'Neill http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-202652 Louis O'Neill Thu, 24 Jul 2008 08:46:42 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-202652 I use this for a lot of my speeches I use this for a lot of my speeches

]]> By: Tom http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-129355 Tom Thu, 15 Nov 2007 00:56:39 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-129355 Eric Richard Dawes Eric Dawes was born in Boston, Massachusetts in 1955 to parents Marie and Allan Dawes. He was the first of two children, the second being his brother Keith Allan. His family lived in Boston during his whole childhood, and seemed to be on good terms. In 1973 he joined the army. He fought valiantly. In '76 he was injured during a firefight and was discharged. In 1980, Eric packed everything up and took a bus to New York without telling anyone. Shortly thereafter he joined the CIA, which was impressed with his military background. He quickly rose up in rank, and soon was a high-ranking field agent. He was partnered with James Rosser, who had grown up in New York. His position as an agent in high confidence was bad for him emotionally. He became completely introverted. He lost any interest he once had in politics. All the candidates would do the same thing anyway. The point of the president, he realized, was to give people a person to love or hate while the real government kept up business as usual mostly unnoticed. He had no more contact with his family, who had only managed to reach him once since he left Boston. He had very few friends and all of them had the same job as him. He simply couldn't afford to confide in anyone who didn't have the same understanding of the world as him. He has no religious belief. He doesn't think about it at all—he doesn't find philosophy practical. His friends are largely atheistic, with rather pessimistic and realistic views of the world. James is an ardent atheist (who famously said, “I used to think that God was the one who kept the world in order. Then I joined the CIA and found out it was just a few dangerous people.”), Kavner's an agnostic, and Doran has had some experience with mystical eastern religions, but is largely secular as well. Eric has done many things that are technically illegal for the CIA, but was cleared of all charges and in some cases had been ordered to do it in the first place. He was never arrested. In 1993 he was married to Lisa Holmes, a district attorney who he had helped with prosecuting a case in 1990. The marriage was a quiet affair. Not even Eric's parents and brother were present. In 2000 Lisa was murdered by some people associated with Charlie Houston, whose operation he had totally destroyed. This left Eric feeling depressed. In October of 2001, he couldn't take the stress of his job anymore, so he moved to northern Ontario without a word. A week later, people connected with Houston started disappearing. Eric Richard Dawes
Eric Dawes was born in Boston, Massachusetts in 1955 to parents Marie and Allan Dawes. He was the first of two children, the second being his brother Keith Allan. His family lived in Boston during his whole childhood, and seemed to be on good terms.
In 1973 he joined the army. He fought valiantly. In ‘76 he was injured during a firefight and was discharged.
In 1980, Eric packed everything up and took a bus to New York without telling anyone. Shortly thereafter he joined the CIA, which was impressed with his military background. He quickly rose up in rank, and soon was a high-ranking field agent. He was partnered with James Rosser, who had grown up in New York.
His position as an agent in high confidence was bad for him emotionally. He became completely introverted. He lost any interest he once had in politics. All the candidates would do the same thing anyway. The point of the president, he realized, was to give people a person to love or hate while the real government kept up business as usual mostly unnoticed. He had no more contact with his family, who had only managed to reach him once since he left Boston.
He had very few friends and all of them had the same job as him. He simply couldn’t afford to confide in anyone who didn’t have the same understanding of the world as him.
He has no religious belief. He doesn’t think about it at all—he doesn’t find philosophy practical. His friends are largely atheistic, with rather pessimistic and realistic views of the world. James is an ardent atheist (who famously said, “I used to think that God was the one who kept the world in order. Then I joined the CIA and found out it was just a few dangerous people.”), Kavner’s an agnostic, and Doran has had some experience with mystical eastern religions, but is largely secular as well.
Eric has done many things that are technically illegal for the CIA, but was cleared of all charges and in some cases had been ordered to do it in the first place. He was never arrested.
In 1993 he was married to Lisa Holmes, a district attorney who he had helped with prosecuting a case in 1990. The marriage was a quiet affair. Not even Eric’s parents and brother were present.
In 2000 Lisa was murdered by some people associated with Charlie Houston, whose operation he had totally destroyed. This left Eric feeling depressed. In October of 2001, he couldn’t take the stress of his job anymore, so he moved to northern Ontario without a word. A week later, people connected with Houston started disappearing.

]]> By: John Hewitt http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-126113 John Hewitt Sun, 28 Oct 2007 18:19:17 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-126113 Shirley, It sounds like Ty is going to be struggling with some interesting issues. Religion is probably a sensitive area with him, as are his parents. He sounds like he's torn between the desire for a creative, artistic life and the financial benefits of a successful career. I get the feeling his relationship is about to hit the rocks too. It should be quite an adventure for him. Shirley,
It sounds like Ty is going to be struggling with some interesting issues. Religion is probably a sensitive area with him, as are his parents. He sounds like he’s torn between the desire for a creative, artistic life and the financial benefits of a successful career. I get the feeling his relationship is about to hit the rocks too. It should be quite an adventure for him.

]]> By: Rianon http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124844 Rianon Wed, 24 Oct 2007 20:17:29 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124844 John, I can definatly relate so Anne. This is a great story. John,

I can definatly relate so Anne. This is a great story.

]]> By: John Hewitt http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124842 John Hewitt Wed, 24 Oct 2007 20:10:34 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124842 Anne August Anne August was born Anne Dell in San Jose, California December of 1967. She was the youngest of William and Elaine August's four daughters. William had been hoping for a boy but, after their fourth daughter, William simply resolved to raise Anne the way he would a son. He taught her to play baseball and basketball and always bought her boy gifts such as toy cars and model airplanes. When she was twelve, William's company transferred them to Tucson where they ended up living next to the family of Henry Jarvis, whose father worked for the same company as William. Henry and Anne quickly bonded and became best friends. They played little league baseball together. Anne was a better fielder and played first base. Henry was an excellent hitter but was stuck in right field because he usually grew bored and stopped paying attention to the game during long innings. As high school approached, it became clear that Anne wouldn't be welcome on the all-male baseball team. Both Henry and Anne gave up on sports, much to her father's frustration. In high school their circle of friends grew to include Mike Cove, Larry Parris and Roland August. They would get together as a group on Saturdays and Sundays and play Dungeons and Dragons together. While Anne was treated as pretty much one of the guys, each of the guys had some interest in her. Eventually she started dating Roland although she still remained best friends with Henry. Two nights before the end of high school, Henry found out that his parents were separating. Anne's attempt to comfort Henry led to a night of sex that both regretted afterwards. Anne was in love with Roland and told Henry that it could go no further. Henry chose to leave town with his mother and attend college in another state. Soon afterwards, Anne realized she was pregnant. She and Roland got married. She never told Roland about her night with Henry. Anne and Roland's marriage was difficult at first. Roland worked full time and went to school part-time, leaving him little time for Anne and the baby. Anne stayed at home with their daughter, whom they named Chelsea, and tried to fit school in with some difficulty. After six years Roland got a bachelor's degree in Economics and went to work as a financial analyst at an insurance company. Their financial problems eased somewhat and Roland was home nights. With Chelsea in school, Anne began attending college full time. She earned an associates degree in nursing and became a part-time on-call nurse. Ten years after Chelsea was born, Anne had a second child, Jacob (Jake). Anne stayed home with him for the first three years, then went back to work part-time again. Roland moved up in the company several times and they now live very comfortably. Lately Anne has been considering going back to school again. Chelsea is in her second year of college and Anne is somewhat jealous of the liberal arts education she is pursuing. She's become a bit bored with her life and is looking for change. This year is Jake's first year of little league and she watches with great interest. She isn't exactly discontented with Roland, but she feels as if their marriage is more about partnership than passion. She still stays in touch with Mike and Larry and has formed a friendship with Mike's new girlfriend Ella, whose relative freedom she envies. Anne August

Anne August was born Anne Dell in San Jose, California December of 1967. She was the youngest of William and Elaine August’s four daughters. William had been hoping for a boy but, after their fourth daughter, William simply resolved to raise Anne the way he would a son. He taught her to play baseball and basketball and always bought her boy gifts such as toy cars and model airplanes. When she was twelve, William’s company transferred them to Tucson where they ended up living next to the family of Henry Jarvis, whose father worked for the same company as William.

Henry and Anne quickly bonded and became best friends. They played little league baseball together. Anne was a better fielder and played first base. Henry was an excellent hitter but was stuck in right field because he usually grew bored and stopped paying attention to the game during long innings. As high school approached, it became clear that Anne wouldn’t be welcome on the all-male baseball team. Both Henry and Anne gave up on sports, much to her father’s frustration. In high school their circle of friends grew to include Mike Cove, Larry Parris and Roland August. They would get together as a group on Saturdays and Sundays and play Dungeons and Dragons together. While Anne was treated as pretty much one of the guys, each of the guys had some interest in her. Eventually she started dating Roland although she still remained best friends with Henry.

Two nights before the end of high school, Henry found out that his parents were separating. Anne’s attempt to comfort Henry led to a night of sex that both regretted afterwards. Anne was in love with Roland and told Henry that it could go no further. Henry chose to leave town with his mother and attend college in another state. Soon afterwards, Anne realized she was pregnant. She and Roland got married. She never told Roland about her night with Henry.

Anne and Roland’s marriage was difficult at first. Roland worked full time and went to school part-time, leaving him little time for Anne and the baby. Anne stayed at home with their daughter, whom they named Chelsea, and tried to fit school in with some difficulty. After six years Roland got a bachelor’s degree in Economics and went to work as a financial analyst at an insurance company. Their financial problems eased somewhat and Roland was home nights. With Chelsea in school, Anne began attending college full time. She earned an associates degree in nursing and became a part-time on-call nurse. Ten years after Chelsea was born, Anne had a second child, Jacob (Jake). Anne stayed home with him for the first three years, then went back to work part-time again. Roland moved up in the company several times and they now live very comfortably.

Lately Anne has been considering going back to school again. Chelsea is in her second year of college and Anne is somewhat jealous of the liberal arts education she is pursuing. She’s become a bit bored with her life and is looking for change. This year is Jake’s first year of little league and she watches with great interest. She isn’t exactly discontented with Roland, but she feels as if their marriage is more about partnership than passion. She still stays in touch with Mike and Larry and has formed a friendship with Mike’s new girlfriend Ella, whose relative freedom she envies.

]]> By: Connie Williams http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124836 Connie Williams Wed, 24 Oct 2007 19:21:46 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124836 Rosemary, I got behind, I didn't try to catch up, I just jump in when I feel like it or I can. Being such a perfectionist and over achiever, it's good exercise for me not to do something perfectly. Rosemary, I got behind, I didn’t try to catch up, I just jump in when I feel like it or I can. Being such a perfectionist and over achiever, it’s good exercise for me not to do something perfectly.

]]> By: Josh http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124828 Josh Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:51:30 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124828 No Problem......... No Problem………

]]> By: Rianon http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124818 Rianon Wed, 24 Oct 2007 18:22:34 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124818 Everyone, I'm taking all of this to help me with one of my classes because I'm having problems with writing a story. This is helping alote and with other posts hapening it's really giving me great ideas for my story. Thank you!!! :) Josh, Thank you for helping out with my story. :) Everyone,

I’m taking all of this to help me with one of my classes because I’m having problems with writing a story. This is helping alote and with other posts hapening it’s really giving me great ideas for my story. Thank you!!! :)

Josh,

Thank you for helping out with my story. :)

]]> By: Rosemary Nissen-Wade http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/comment-page-1/#comment-124606 Rosemary Nissen-Wade Wed, 24 Oct 2007 00:03:52 +0000 http://www.poewar.com/10-days-of-character-building-biography/#comment-124606 I'm falling behind in all this. Too many other things gong on in real life. But I think they're valuable exercises which I would recommend to anyone, and shall continue doing them at my own pace. I’m falling behind in all this. Too many other things gong on in real life. But I think they’re valuable exercises which I would recommend to anyone, and shall continue doing them at my own pace.

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